Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Super Columbine Massacre RPG!

Super Columbine Massacre RPG!
One of the most controversial video games in recent times; I'm interesting in organization, copyediting, and any comments you have (accessibility?) -- Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 17:12, 17 December 2008 (UTC)

Comments Overall, this is an excellent article, that I believe, handles a controversial title with a very even-handed, NPOV approach. I only found a few things that bothered me: All in all, very minor issues that I found. — Bellhalla (talk) 20:00, 18 December 2008 (UTC)
 * There are inconsistencies or errors with the use of italics (or not) in the article:
 * Should RPG Maker 2000 be in italics or not? Even its own article is undecided.
 * Films should always be in italics and not in quotes, as is currently the case for The God Who Wasn't There.
 * Film festivals are not, to the best of my knowledge, normally in italics, as is currently the case for the AFI Fest.
 * There are inconsistencies in the spelling of the name of Ryan Lambourn/Lambourne. It appears under each spelling several times within a single paragraph.