Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/The Nightmare of Druaga: Fushigino Dungeon

The Nightmare of Druaga: Fushigino Dungeon
Right now I'm working on the article here and just looking for a bit of feedback. The plot section is currently a little lengthy (because I'm slowly playing through the game to read the story, I'd rather get it all down and then reduce it once I have the whole picture), and there's currently nothing on the development.

I just want to know if I'm on the right track. Cheers, Lanky ( YELL ) 15:30, 25 May 2007 (UTC)
 * If you know the plot is going to be overlong, you might consider working on a subpage in your user area. I did some copyedit (mostly the lead). For the EGM ref, do you have author, volume, title, and page number information? It looks all right for an article in development. You'll need to add a Development section and expand the Reception and lead sections as well. I can't speak to the Gameplay section, being unfamiliar with the game.  Pagra shtak  16:09, 25 May 2007 (UTC)
 * For the EGM reference, for the most part no I don't have that information. I found the EGM coverage through findarticles.com, and it seems to have come from the "Review Wrap Ups" section of EGM where they summarize a game in a few sentences. Thanks for the input! Cheers, Lanky ( YELL ) 16:30, 25 May 2007 (UTC)