Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Torchic

Torchic
Request: I've been working a lot on this article, and wanted a few tips on where to improve next. I know the In the anime section is pitiful, so don't comment on that, and help with notes and refs would be good. Much thanks Highway 20:42, 19 March 2006 (UTC)


 * This is a very good article. I know nothing about Pokemon, and it seems to contain an appropriate level of jargon - not so much that I can't follow the article, and enough to likely satisfy the Pokemon fan.  One thing I will say is that the article is somewhat confusing as to whether "Torchic" is a single character, or one of many.  For example, you indicate that it is a "species", which suggests that there are more than one - like there could be a group of torchics.  Other places in the article talk about it as if it is a singlular character in the game/show/comic etc. Aguerriero 16:49, 5 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Ah, thank you for your comments, they are very well appreciated. As to explain, in the first half of the article (intro --> video games) are referring to Torchic as a species. Anime onwards are referring to individual, specific Torchic. These are owned by specific characters in general. Any ideas on how to explain this would be very appreciated, H ig hway Rainbow Sneakers 19:44, 5 April 2006 (UTC)


 * That is explains it very well, and paraphrasing would probably be appropriate for somewhere near the top of the article. Something like, "This article discusses Torchic as a species of pokemon that are available to game players, as well as a character appearing in Pokemon anime, etc."  Aguerriero 12:33, 6 April 2006 (UTC)