Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Utopia (online game)

Utopia (online game)
This is one of the most popluar games to play online today. I believe that this artical can become FA quality with the right amount of work done to it. Because of this, i think that this could be a perfect first artical for nomination on the new peer review system. --ZeWrestler 2 July 2005 15:36 (UTC)
 * Off the top of my head, the intro I think jumps into the midst of the game too fast and doesn't do a good job of giving a broad overview of the article or even basic information that some people only wish to know. More needs to be stated about the development, specifically by whom and a date for when the game was first available - for the lead that is. In all honesty, as I was reading this I had trouble actually understanding what I was reading because it seemed like it was written for people that are mostly familiar with the game. The audience should be more for people that have never heard of this - that's where I think the article really falls flat, IMHO. Just a start anyway. K1Bond007 July 3, 2005 03:50 (UTC)
 * Its a good start. Now we actually need to get it up in running by fixing this artical up. While i'm at it, i'll add a cleanup tag to this artical  From what you said, this artical needs it. --ZeWrestler 5 July 2005 21:30 (UTC)
 * I'd move the history section to the top of the article. Add more wiki links. You say this is one of the most popular online games today. Reading the article I cannot tell this. It might as well be a game that almost nobody plays. So add some information on how many active players there are. Jacoplane 17:50, 26 July 2005 (UTC)
 * History section has been moved.-- ZeWrestler  Talk 18:09, 26 July 2005 (UTC)