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Wario

 * old peer review

I'm trying to get this article back to FA-standards. It was FARC'd because of an extreme lack of references. Now I've sourced some stuff and done a lot of copy-editing, and would like to know what to do to make it eligible for FA? --Lhademmor 13:10, 2 September 2007 (UTC)

User:Krator
Some quick comments. User:Krator (t c) 19:51, 2 September 2007 (UTC)
 * State publisher, accessdate, and wherever possible, author and date information, for your sources. See also.
 * ✅ --Lhademmor 11:57, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Referencing is still an issue, especially when describing single game appearances. Try the articles for the respective games, copy their references, or find reviews for those games.
 * I'm not sure if I understand this correctly: Do you want references to prove that he has appeared in the games, or what kind of references are you looking for? --Lhademmor 11:57, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Try for the references section.
 * ✅ --Lhademmor 11:57, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Characteristics section needs an image of a good pose by Wario.
 * Good pose? Like the image in the upper right corner? Or what do you mean? --Lhademmor 11:57, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Make it clear that WarioWare Inc. is a fictional company.
 * I've tried deleting some of the stuff that could be deemed confusing. Is this better? --Lhademmor 11:57, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Why is the article semi-protected?
 * Something about a stream of vandalism from GameFAQs, but it's old... It should be unprotected now, really. --Lhademmor 11:57, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Elaborate on Waluigi a bit more in the friends section.
 * I'll see what I can dig up. --Lhademmor 11:57, 3 September 2007 (UTC)
 * Some information on the style of the character would be helpful. For example, his choice of car (big and bulky), the moves he uses in the games (smash!), etc.
 * Noted. Will work on it. --Lhademmor 11:57, 3 September 2007 (UTC)


 * Any other comments please keep 'em coming :) --Lhademmor 11:57, 3 September 2007 (UTC)