Wikipedia:Wiki Ed/Eastern Michigan University/CRM447W Senior Seminar in Criminology (Summer 2019)/Assignment3g

Summary of plan
[enter plan here]

I think it would be a good idea to expand on different authors articles such as Paul Rock's, for example. Also we have also discussed about excluding Gregg Barak's work, due to the fact that some see t as a conflict of interest. --NavinN95 (talk) 03:50, 30 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Contemporary Examples:
 * Find more types of contemporary examples to bring in, along side the ones already introduced.
 * Possibly take our Gregg Barak, unless we can find more than enough supporting evidence on why he should be in the article, since it is said to be a conflict of interest.
 * Criticisms:
 * expand or clarify within the articles we have read, EX. Paul Rock
 * Possibly add more people and their views of the idea of public criminology
 * Overall:
 * Focus on the Talk page for our two sections and focus on what the editors say to change.
 * Focus on finding links to bring in for evidence.
 * Make sure the authors we have read are in the sections and that their ideology is expressed as well. AWGraham14 (talk) 15:15, 30 May 2019 (UTC)

Draft Text
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:NavinN95/sandbox

Summary of plan
We are editing the template on the right side of the page. We are adding useful links to it that actually apply to criminology.

Draft Text
[link to sandbox where draft text is housed]


 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TaylorMarcusStudent/sandbox

Summary of plan
We plan to cut out Beccaria, Change the title of the section, and combine the two sections. We also plan on cutting out the part about feminism and POC because it is off topic. We plan on reorganizing the information to make it flow better annd rewording some of the paragraphs so that they are easier to understand. The overall goal of the revision is to combine, cut and make the whole thing concise. Shuelke (talk) 23:24, 29 May 2019 (UTC)

Draft Text
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shuelke/sandbox Shuelke (talk) 23:28, 29 May 2019 (UTC)