Wikipedia:Wiki Ed/Georgia Institute of Technology/Environmental Geochemistry (Fall 2021)

The objective of this course is to learn how chemical, biological, and geological processes control the distribution of chemical elements on Earth and the solar system. Geochemical processes are central to a variety of environmental issues, including the distribution of CO2 on Earth and the transformation and storage of inorganic and organic contaminants. Simultaneously, geochemical processes are involved in the transformation of natural species, including nutrients, carbon, and minerals. In this course, we will study the fundamental geochemical processes regulating the distribution of chemicals in aqueous solutions and at the mineral-water interface and will learn how to predict the distribution of these species in aquatic systems and soils using an equilibrium approach. This course will also introduce stable and radiogenic isotopic techniques essential for tracing elements through biogeochemical cycles and dating the age of planetary materials. This course is designed for students interested in securing jobs in environmental agencies or consulting companies or pursuing graduate studies in the geosciences, environmental science, or environmental engineering. Through a semester-long Wikipedia editing project, students will gain experience in scientific writing on notable topics in environmental geochemistry of high interest to the public. The Wikipedia editing project will also provide students with experience in identifying an audience, citing literature, peer review, revising, and ethical standards to avoid plagiarism.

Week 1
Welcome to your Wikipedia assignment's course timeline. This page guides you through the steps you'll need to complete for your Wikipedia assignment, with links to training modules and your classmates' work spaces.

Your course has been assigned a Wikipedia Expert. You can reach them through the Get Help button at the top of this page.

Resources:


 * Editing Wikipedia, pages 1–5
 * Evaluating Wikipedia

Create an account and join this course page, using the enrollment link your instructor sent you. (Because of Wikipedia's technical restraints, you may receive a message that you cannot create an account. To resolve this, please try again off campus or the next day.)

By the end of week 1, everyone should have a Wikipedia account.

Week 2
Take the Canvas Survey &quot;Ranking Wikipedia Articles&quot; to rank the Wikipedia articles as options for your semester-long Wikipedia based on your relative interest in each topic.

Thinking about sources and plagiarism

Chemistry

Environmental Sciences

By Friday Sept 3, everyone will have been assigned a Wikipedia article and peer review article. Add  the article to your Watchlist by clicking the star next to &quot;View history&quot; will help you keep track. Add your email to your account to get notifications if something on the page changes.

Week 3


Create an account and join this course page, using the enrollment link your instructor sent you. (Because of Wikipedia's technical restraints, you may receive a message that you cannot create an account. To resolve this, please try again off campus or the next day.)

Complete these four training modules before starting the assignment.

More important tips on editing Wikipedia here. 

Week 4


Choose three of the following existing biogeochemical cycle Wikipedia pages to evaluate:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hydrogen_cycle

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Carbon_cycle

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nitrogen_cycle

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Oxygen_cycle

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Silica_cycle

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phosphorus_cycle

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sulfur_cycle

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Calcium_cycle

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Iron_cycle

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mercury_cycle

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Selenium_cycle

Take notes in your sandbox.  Create a section in  your sandbox titled &quot;Article evaluation&quot; where you'll leave notes about your observations and learnings. As you read the article you've chosen, answer the questions below in your sandbox as they relate to the article's content, tone, and sourcing.

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Evaluating content. Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you? Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added? What else could be improved? Is scientific information presented clearly, accurately, and without jargon? Does the article link to other Wikipedia articles for related topics? ======

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Evaluating sources. Check a few citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article? Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted? ======

Assignment Grading (13 pts possible):

1 pt: Edits made when logged into your Wikipedia account associated with your WikiEd account.

1 pt: Notes have been added to the correct place (in your Sandbox).

3 pt: Notes have been added about each of the three articles’ content.

3 pt: Notes have been added about each of the three articles’ tone.

3 pt: Notes have been added about each of the three articles’ sources.

1 pt: The writing is high quality (contains no spelling and few grammatical mistakes).

1 pt: Assignment is completed by the deadline.

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Second, find a place in your Wikipedia article (not in your Sandbox, although you can draft it there first) where one of your five sources (from the previous assignment) could help support a statement. Add a citation to that location in the article. Make sure to include all the necessary information so that the citation is complete. ======

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If you can't find an uncited statement, add 1-2 sentences to go along with your source as you learned in the Adding Citations training. Make sure the information you're adding isn't already covered in the article. If it is, check if that existing statement cites a source. If not, add yours! ======

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Third, add links from your article to other Wikipedia articles, and from other Wikipedia articles to your own. Link to 3–5 articles, and link to your article from 2–3 other articles. Read page 12 of Editing Wikipedia to see how. ======

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Fourth, add an image to your article. Wikipedia has strict rules about what media can be added, so make sure to take Contributing Images and Media Files training before you upload an image. ======

Finally, make sure to publish all the changes, and include brief summarizes of your changes each time you publish. Congrats! You just made your first changes to a Wikipedia article !
Assignment Grading (12 pts possible):

1 pt: Edits made when logged into your Wikipedia account associated with your WikiEd account.

1 pt: At least one new source from Assignment 2 has been added to the Wikipedia article.

1 pt: The citation is relevant and appropriate to the statement where it is cited.

1 pt: A complete citation has been added for new source.

1 pt: An image has been added to the Wikipedia article.

1 pt: A clear and concise caption for the image has been added.

1 pt: The added image does not violate Wikipedia copyright policies.

1 pt: The added text does not violate Wikipedia plagiarism policies.

1 pt: The article has been linked to 3-5 Wikipedia articles.

1 pt: The article has been linked from 2-3 other Wikipedia articles.

1 pt: All published changes have been annotated.

1 pt: Assignment is completed by the deadline.

Week 7


Now that you've improved your draft based on others' feedback, it's time to move your work live - to the &quot;mainspace.&quot;

Resource: Editing Wikipedia, page 13

Week 10






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To find the right sandbox for your assignment, visit your Dashboard course page and follow the Sandbox Draft link for your assigned article in the My Articles section. Create a draft of your article edits in that sandbox.

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1. Lead Section

Introductory sentence: States article topic concisely and accurately in single sentence.

2. Article

Content:<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif; text-align: inherit;"> Student has added at least 2 paragraphs of additional text to the article.

3. References

Citations:<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif; text-align: inherit;"> Student has cited an additional 2 books or peer-reviewed publications in the added text.

Remember: Nothing you add to your Sandbox can violate Wikipedia plagiarism and copyright rules!

Reach out to your Wikipedia Expert if you have questions using the  Get Help  button at the top of this page.

Resource: Editing Wikipedia, pages 7–9

Assignment Grading (8 pts possible):

1 pt: The draft has been added to the correct place (in your Sandbox).

1 pt: The draft text includes a lead section with a concise and accurate single sentence.

1 pt: The draft text includes at least two paragraphs of new text.

1 pt: The draft text cites 2 additional books or peer-reviewed publications.

1 pt: The citations are relevant and appropriate to the statements where they are cited.

1 pt: The draft text does not violate Wikipedia plagiarism policies.

1 pt: The writing is high quality (contains no spelling and few grammatical mistakes).

<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif;">1 pt: Assignment is completed by the deadline.

Week 11
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1) A lead section that is easy to understand.  The lead is the first section of an article. It usually states the most important information about the article's subject, and gives a good overview of the rest of the article. Good leads don't get too bogged down in detail, and don't simply repeat what's in the article below. You should be able to read the lead and feel like you have a pretty good grasp of what the article is about.

For the peer review, you should comment on the following:  Looking at the lead by itself, do I feel satisfied that I know the importance of the topic? Looking at the lead again after reading the rest of the article, does the lead reflect the most important information? Does the lead give more weight to certain parts of the article over others? Is anything missing? Is anything redundant?

2) A clear structure.  Now, let's look at the article itself. Different aspects of the article should each have their own section. The difference between sections should be easy to understand, and each statement should have a clear reason for being where it is.

<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 600; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif; text-align: inherit;">For the peer review, you should comment on the following:  Are the sections organized well, in a sensible order? Would they make more sense presented some other way (chronologically, for example)?

3) Balanced coverage.  Wikipedia articles are summaries of pre-existing resources. They should be balanced according to the available literature. No aspect should take over too much of the article, and more well-documented viewpoints should get more space. However, a good article also presents minority viewpoints and positions.

For the peer review, you should comment on the following:  Is each section's length equal to its importance to the article's subject? Are there sections in the article that seem unnecessary? Is anything off-topic? Does the article reflect all the perspectives represented in the published literature? Are any significant viewpoints left out or missing? Does the article draw conclusions or try to convince the reader to accept one particular point of view?

4) Neutral content.  Wikipedia articles aim for a neutral point of view. That means they don't attempt to persuade the reader into accepting a particular idea or position.

For the peer review, you should comment on the following:  Do you think you could guess the perspective of the author by reading the article? Are there any words or phrases that don't feel neutral? For example, &quot;the best idea,&quot; &quot;most people,&quot; or negative associations, such as &quot;While it's obvious that x, some insist that y.&quot;   Does the article make claims on behalf of unnamed groups or people? For example, &quot;some people say...&quot;   Does the article focus too much on negative or positive information? Remember, neutral doesn't mean &quot;the best positive light&quot; or &quot;the worst, most critical light.&quot; It means a clear reflection of various aspects of a topic.

5) Reliable sources.  Good articles are built on good sources. When you've read the article, turn to the references section.

<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 600; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif;">For the peer review, you should comment on the following:  Are most statements in the article connected to a reliable source, such as textbooks and journal articles? Or do they rely on blogs or self-published authors? Are there a lot of statements attributed to one or two sources? If so, it may lead to an unbalanced article, or one that leans too heavily into a single point of view. Are there any unsourced statements in the article, or statements that you can't find stated in the references? Just because there is a source listed, doesn't mean it's presented accurately.

When you have reviewed your peer's article, you should leave a message on their User Talk page. Leaving a message on a User Talk page is different than leaving one on the Talk page of their sandbox (remember that every page on Wikipedia has a Talk page), and will notify them (whereas, leaving a note on their sandbox will not).

Tips:

Many students consider peer review to be difficult, because they don't want to criticize a classmate's work. Remember that critiquing doesn't equal criticism. That's why it's helpful to post your comments as useful ideas. For example, instead of suggesting an editor is biased one way or another, focus on the content within the article that suggests a bias. In the end, you aren't criticizing your peer, you are evaluating the article.

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Consider the following structure, drawing from your notes:


 * 1) First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?
 * 2) What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?
 * 3) What's the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?
 * 4) Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know!

<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 600; font-size: 16px; font-family: 'Source Sans Pro', sans-serif; text-align: inherit;">How to submit your peer review comments:

1) On the Articles' tab, find your peer's article that you have been assigned to review.

2) In the &quot;My Articles&quot; section of the Home tab, assign it to yourself to review.

3)  Find your peers' sandbox. Navigate there from the Students tab  <span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif; color: #324446; text-align: inherit;">on the Dashboard and click their username.

4) Go to the Talk page of their sandbox ( <span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif; color: #324446; text-align: inherit;">at the top left of the page) .  Click &quot;New section&quot;.

5) Add a subject, something like &quot;Samantha's peer review&quot;.

6) Leave your notes in the space below.  E <span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif; text-align: inherit; color: #324446;">nter your message with comments on all five of the categories listed above.  <span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif; color: #324446; text-align: inherit;"> Remember to sign with four tildes! (MethanoJen (talk) 16:05, 21 October 2021 (UTC)).  (Reminder: v <span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif; text-align: inherit;">isual editing is not available when using Talk pages. For tips on using Wikicode, see the back page of your  Editing Wikipedia brochure<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif; text-align: inherit;"> or revisit the  editing training<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif; text-align: inherit;">.)  Save the page.

Here is an example of how to navigate to New Section on a Talk page:



Assignment Grading (8 points possible):

1 pt: The draft has been added to the correct place (as a New Section in Talk Page of Peer’s Sandbox).

1 pt: The peer review is written respectfully and provides constructive criticism. (No personal attacks!)

1 pt: The peer review provides one paragraph of comments on the peer article’s lead section.

1 pt: The peer review provides one paragraph of comments on the peer article’s structure.

1 pt: The peer review provides one paragraph of comments on the peer article’s balance of coverage.

1 pt: The peer review provides one paragraph of comments on the peer article’s neutral content.

1 pt: The peer review provides one paragraph of comments on the peer article’s reliable sources.

1 pt: Assignment is completed by the deadline.

Week 12
You probably have some feedback from other students and possibly other Wikipedians. Consider their suggestions, decide whether it makes your work more accurate and complete, and edit your draft to make those changes.

Resources:


 * Editing Wikipedia, pages 12 and 14
 * Reach out to your Wikipedia Expert if you have any questions.

Week 13
Now that you've improved your draft based on others' feedback, it's time to move your work live - to the &quot;mainspace.&quot;

Resource: Editing Wikipedia, page 13

Continue to expand and improve your work, and format your article to match Wikipedia's tone and standards. Remember to contact your Wikipedia Expert at any time if you need further help!

Exercise
Add links to your article

Now's the time to revisit your text and refine your work. You may do more research and find missing information; rewrite the lead section to represent all major points; reorganize the text to communicate the information better; or add images and other media.

Week 14
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Finalize and publish the changes to your article.

Ensure that the final version contains the following:

1. Lead Section

Introductory sentence: States article topic concisely and accurately in single sentence

Summary: Summarizes all major points in the article

Context: All information included is also present in body of the article

2. Article

Organization: Clear organization ofheading and subheadings; appropriate transitions and  clear language/grammar

Content:<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif; text-align: inherit;">  Accurately covers scientific information relevant to assigned topic; links to relevant Wikipedia articles for background.

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Tone:<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif; text-align: inherit;">  Tone is neutral and appropriate for an encyclopedia audience.

Images:<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif; text-align: inherit;">  Images improve the reader’s understanding of the topic. Captions are clear, concise.

Wikilinks: the article is thoroughly wiki-linked

3. References

Citations:<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif; text-align: inherit;">  Every statement can easily be associated with a supporting reference

Sources: Includes citations for at least ten peer-reviewed publications.

Completeness: All references added include completely filled-out citation template or are otherwise complete.


 * Read Editing Wikipedia page 15 to review a final check-list before completing your assignment.
 * Don't forget that you can ask for help from your Wikipedia Expert at any time!

Assignment Grading (15 points possible):

1 pt: The final article has been published (moved out of Sandbox).

1 pt: The writing is high quality (contains no spelling and few grammatical mistakes).

1 pt: The article contains a lead section that summarizes all major points in the article.

1 pt: The lead section’s introductory sentence states the article topic concisely and accurately.

1 pt: All information in the lead is also present in the body of the article.

1 pt: The article is well-organized, with heading and subheadings.

1 pt: The article accurately covers scientific information relevant to assigned topic.

1 pt: Any relevant technical terms are linked to a Wikipedia article (contains no undefined jargon).

1 pt: The article presents balanced coverage without favoring one side unduly.

1 pt: The tone is neutral and appropriate for an encyclopedia audience.

1 pt: Every statement can easily be associated with a supporting reference.

1 pt: The article cites at least two books or peer-reviewed publications.

1 pt: All references added include completely filled-out citation template or are otherwise complete.

1 pt:  The article has been corrected based on the peer review.

1 pt: Suggestions for modifications from the peer reviewer have been changed.

<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-ligatures: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: 400; font-size: 15.008px; font-family: 'Open Sans', sans-serif;">1 pt: Assignment is completed by the deadline.

Nominating your article for Did You Know

Week 15
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Present a 7 minute PowerPoint presentation on your Wikipedia assignment, addressing the following points:

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 * Critiquing articles:  What did you learn about Wikipedia during the article evaluation? How did you approach critiquing the article you selected for this assignment? How did you decide what to add to your chosen article?
 * Summarizing your contributions:  Include a summary of your edits and why you felt they were a valuable addition to the article. How does your article compare to earlier versions?
 * Connections to the classroom:  Did you include information we covered in class? What new scientific information did you write about?
 * Peer Review:  What did you contribute in your review of your peers article? What did your peers recommend you change on your article?
 * Feedback:  Did you receive feedback from other Wikipedia editors, and if so, how did you respond to and handle that feedback?
 * Wikipedia generally:  What did you learn from contributing to Wikipedia? How does a Wikipedia assignment compare to other assignments you've done in the past? How can Wikipedia be used to improve public understanding of our field/your topic? Why is this important?

Assignment Grading (8 pts possible):

1 pt: Student presented a 7-minute PowerPoint presentation during assigned lecture period.

1 pt: PowerPoint slides are well organized and contain no spelling mistakes.

1 pt: Presentation addressed assignment questions about critiquing articles.

1 pt: Presentation summarized student contributions.

1 pt: Presentation covered connections between article topic and EAS 4220/6200 content.

1 pt: Presentation summarized peer review process.

1 pt: Presentation summarized Wikipedia editor feedback (if any).

1 pt: Presentation summarized student’s experience with Wikipedia Project as a whole.

Week 16
Everyone should have finished all of the work they'll do on Wikipedia, and be ready for grading.