Wikipedia talk:Articles for deletion/BMI Appraisals

hello all,

i m alerted by my article guide, Anna, about this deletion alert. I understand there are some issues with BMI group and BMI appraisals, but more importantly I think we are concern about the references. I think the part where it said suggested unreliable and self-published source, can you kindly refer me to? That's only because those sources are published by 3rd party companies about the work that we do, and those published documents must be approved by Hong Kong Stock Exchange prior they can be published. So, perhaps there's some misunderstanding on unreliable and self-published sources?

On the other hand, as user Anna (Anna Frodesiak's talk page) has suggested, the BMI article should only state fact and not any unnecessary embellishment. Anna also suggested how competitor sees BMI Appraisals should be a good angle writing this article. In any case, there's a re-write on it to fulfill the standard required.

perhaps i should post the draft somewhere prior publishing on the main BMI page? like SandBox?? Which I have just learned of this feature by Anna.... I need to look into it on how to use it.

In any case, it's wroking on it. Please give sometime, as I can only do it during free time.....

thx,

busybee007Busybee007 (talk) 15:51, 28 October 2011 (UTC)

rewrite - history section
hi all,

making progress on factual info., however, not complete yet. please don't take current form as final. I just saved it there for now.

re-working on it.

thanks,

busybee007 Busybee007 (talk) 09:54, 31 October 2011 (UTC)

** Deletion update notice **
Hi all,

Saw the deletion update notification; in fact it was Anna (my "guidian" angel) who kindly inform me of this update.

Much appreciate the wiki's team spelling out exactly what I am missing. I hope the wiki team understand that what the article try to convey is that this BMI company forms the lubricant (for lack of better words) to enable many companies to be listed on HKEx. It is therefore unlike other trivial companies, not likely they would have gotten their name published along with these publicly trading companies in HK on public notice.

I would hope the Wiki to understand that although HK has only 7,000,000 population, but the stock exchange has bigger value then London Stock Exchange. In other words, there are alot of money floating around in this market and to prevent the market from becoming another Enron debacle or Bernie Madoff, BMI is a company that is put in place to help hundreds of companies and many investors to ensure the check and balance system is in place.

Perhaps BMI is a regional focus company, but according to their track record, it seems to have helped companies with total value capitalization over HK$100 million to be in business and continue to be traded publicly. It was never the intention to shovel-on the references, but they are to show how many companies in HK has relied on BMI and hence was only trying to satisfy the notability requirement. Again this is a regional focus company, hence the 3rd party references are also local focus. If notability standard is one that requires international presence, then please kindly inform me.

The wiki team has kept on suggesting that the user has clearly violated the COI requirement, but to be frank I am proud of being one of the members in an entity that is providing services such that many other companies can publicly traded and solicit funding openly. That said, perhaps I am one of the members, but I am also an individual who wants to write an article on a company how it has helped other companies and investors in the financial world within the asia market.

I am in process of trying to write again based upon the suggestions made by wiki's team, and please give further pointers when necessary.

thanks,

busybee Busybee007 (talk) 03:05, 1 November 2011 (UTC)