Wikipedia talk:Articles for deletion/Eddie Grey (Composer)

Question?
What needs to be taken out and what needs to be left in for this page? Clearly Edd Grey being the composer for an Emmy winning show is significant. But at what point does it become factual and notable to turning into promotion? I am jewsus (talk) 02:24, 14 August 2016 (UTC)
 * Right now, all the article is, is basically a laundry list of a number of "jingles" he's written, with virtually no content present. What you need to do is:


 * 1) Add third party sources written about him by journalist and/or professional writers. Not things like IMDB, but more like AllMusic, Billboard (magazine), major newspapers like New York Times or Washington Post, etc.
 * 2) Add some actual content besides a bare list of songs he's composed. How did he get the gigs to create them? Why did he create them the way he did. Were there roadblocks/hurdles to overcome? Accolades for his work? Negative reception for his songs? Something of interest beyond song titles (especially considering his work isn't the type of work to be recognized by name exactly.) Sergecross73   msg me  17:51, 22 August 2016 (UTC)
 * If the only item of significance that we can list for Grey is that he composed the music for Born This Way, then the article about Grey should be reduced to a redirect to the article about the show. (See WP:BLP1E.) WikiDan61 ChatMe!ReadMe!! 18:03, 22 August 2016 (UTC)

Thank you ::, I will edit the article with all of your suggestions. I appreciate your feedback.