Wikipedia talk:Articles for deletion/Howard Nassiri

Editors: I am a new contributor/editor, and have posted "Howard Nassiri" with the confidence that the law firm is notable—by citing a combination of local and national sources about the firm, and quoting the firm, on the notable work they are doing in Southern California.

In creating this entry—I referred to other published Wikipedia law firm entries for Wiki format and style, especially with practice areas and external links, ex. Levin & Perconti, Quinn Emanuel Urquhart & Sullivan, and Sheppard, Mullin, Richter & Hampton.

I have however received feedback stating that the page reads like promotional copy. If this is true, how are the other law firm pages that I cited still published on Wikipedia? And how do you recommend editing this page in order to make the post less like marketing? Thank you! Vhoward1600 (talk) 15:21, 7 April 2011 (UTC)

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I have since edited the post extensively and tried to re-write from a more neutral tone, to avoid sounding like advertising, and added more verifiable sources to prove notability. Any other feedback is greatly appreciated.

Also, as a first user, I originally (erroneously) chose a username that was similar to the post (vhoward1600) and have since changed my username, as I am an independent contributor--to avoid a conflict of interest. Thanks! --MZNGR4 (talk) 17:52, 8 April 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by MZNGR4 (talk • contribs)