Wikipedia talk:Articles for deletion/Mobility-as-a-Service

My situation
Hello Sam!

I am the author of the article Mobility-as-a-Service.

I am new to Wikipedia and this is one of my first contributions to Wikipedia. Before starting to write in Wikipedia, I had very thoroughly studied the guidelines for contribution to Wikipedia. Before making my article live, I had been developing it in my Sandbox space and had got the article reviewed from at least four wiki editors. I have been constantly criticized for the advert tone of the article. I have not ignored this remark and am working on to improve the article. If you look at the article (with references added), I have placed enough references to maintain the notability of the article. When you said that I have violated the copyright acts by using one of the readily available white papers, I did not understand. The reference white paper was readily available on the public domain. I consulted my mentor and he explained that I might have picked up content of the article directly from the whitepaper. I am a ‘writer’ by profession and do not enjoy infringing. However, I am currently restudying my article to verify your claim.

I have worked hard on my article and hope to contribute more to Wikipedia articles. I request you to not nominate the article for deletion. I would be happy to work on the article in my stub area under your mentorship. I had been looking for a mentor under the wiki computing projects and will be glad to get your help. PCJain (talk) 05:49, 14 April 2010 (UTC)