Wikipedia talk:Community de-adminship/Archive 1

I support this, but expect a lot of opposition once the admins find out about it. --Apoc2400 (talk) 18:37, 5 October 2009 (UTC)

I also support this. The community needs a way to remove adminship without having to go running to our parents to ArbCom. The requirement of 10 editors in good standing is a high enough threshold to avoid frivolous or malicious requests. Fences &amp;  Windows  01:59, 6 October 2009 (UTC)

I'd be happy for this to be in place - if I do something outrageous, I should be recallable Fritzpoll (talk) 12:01, 6 October 2009 (UTC)

Apoc2400 - I'm possibly the longest serving admin still active and I have NO issue at all with this process. I just read the guide and whoever wrote it (apologies for not researching who that was/they were) has clearly put some deep thought into what is a much-needed and long overdue process. At the moment I can't see any concrete objection I have to any of it. Sure the process is at some risk of WP:CANVASS type attacks, but then what WP process isn't? The only people who might object are the clerks (of which I am one) because of the increased workload. (But choosing the clerks to handle the paperwork does make good sense, given the remit of the clerks in general.) Well-done to all concerned. Manning (talk) 05:38, 8 October 2009 (UTC)

I have not been around nearly as long as Manning Bartlett, but I am hardly a noob and I am an admin, and I support this. I never cared for "recall" as it was too easy to game. Not naming any names, but the criteria on some of the recall pages is impossible to meet. I second all of Manning's statement above (btw ty for writing that out!) and feel this is a step in the right direction. KillerChihuahua ?!?Advice 00:44, 9 October 2009 (UTC)

I'm a relatively new admin., but I have no objections to this. I left a note for Uncle G., that you/we may want to list this over at: WikiProject Administrator. There are several efforts going on directed in this area - and I think if everyone works together, it might help improve things. If we all work together, to learn, grow, and make the in and out of "Admin." a bit less dramatic - perhaps it can improve the overall state of the project. — Ched : ?  05:45, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
 * The thing is, if we get enough admins supporting this - one of the few times I'll say that this is more important than non-admins accepting it - then perhaps we can get a critical mass. I think editors without +sysop might leap at any process that isn't going to be quashed as "too easy to game" by administrators.  I suggest gradually (very gradually) inviting other people over to look at this, and make any necessary tweaks before making it more widely known. Fritzpoll (talk) 08:03, 9 October 2009 (UTC)

I have not yet gone through the details, but I have no doubt at all that the general principle  - that admins must be subject to community sanctions if they fail to meet the standards required - is important and that some such system is necessary. Doubtless there will be admins who will disagree, but I think you will find that there are many who support the idea. Ben  Mac  Dui  19:17, 10 October 2009 (UTC) (admin)

I'd rather see this than anything else put forth, but I'm still a bit skeptical of it. Honestly, I'm not sure why what we've got doesn't work&mdash;ArbCom seems even more likely than in the past to desysop when needed, and honestly, I think the amount of deliberation and warning that leads up to that point is probably a good thing, as is having a body accustomed to dealing with the unavoidable complexities of such matters. So, my questions before supporting this would be: What is the actual problem, and why is this (rather than taking the offenders to ArbCom) the optimal solution? Seraphimblade Talk to me 06:39, 24 November 2009 (UTC)

Draft RfC
Please see WikiProject Administrator/Admin Recall and Talk:WikiProject Administrator. I hope this is self-explanatory. Please feel free to amend or comment. No idea if it has legs, but I think its worth a try. Ben  Mac  Dui  19:24, 22 October 2009 (UTC)

This initial process is now complete and the next step will most likely involved the creation of a next step here under a page title such as Community de-adminship/Draft RfC. Please see Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Administrator/Admin Recall. Ben  Mac  Dui  19:49, 20 November 2009 (UTC)

Reorganization
As per the meta-meta discussion at what is now /Archive 2, I have shuffled everything around in order to consolidate discussion to the CDA guide pages and the RFC draft pages. This should help with the confusion that people have been having when coming into this late in the game. Meta discussion about the RFC itself goes here, discussion about the process under proposal goes on the RFC draft talk page. It's kind of backward I guess now that I write it down, but that was what we had discussed. If someone wants to swap them, that would be fine with me. Just keep the archives with this page. Gigs (talk) 02:52, 18 December 2009 (UTC)

Update from WT:CDADR
The following are the results from the Draft RfC discussion as at 11:45 am GMT on 9 January 2010. These changes have been all been addressed prior to going to the RfC itself. Ben  Mac  Dui  18:29, 16 January 2010 (UTC)

Publicity
Proposal 3: Community Support for changing:

"Nomination by the Community at large requires the signatures of no fewer than 10 editors in good standing (defined below), within a period not longer than 3 days. Signatures must be placed in the nomination area of the requests, as a simple signed bullet point."

to "not longer than 7 days".

Concrete percentages
The only proposal with genuine support was

5.4 Add to the current wording:


 * "Thus, for an Administrator to be de-sysopped, a bureaucrat will review the discussion to see whether both a minimum of 50 editors and a general consensus supports de-sysopping. Consensus is sometimes difficult to ascertain and is not a numerical measurement, but as a general descriptive rule of thumb, above ~80% support for de-sysopping would be acceptable; while support below ~70% would not be, and the area between is subject to bureaucratic discretion."

More on this subject needs to go into the Community de-adminship/FAQ currently under construction.

Unless there is a reason for it I (MacDui) suggest removing the tildes.

Possible outcomes short of full desysoping
Support for 8.2

"Instead, allow for more discussion and not simple bulleted !votes." This diff shows how I addressed this issue. Needs a few more eyes I think. Ben  Mac  Dui  16:19, 9 January 2010 (UTC)

Clarify restoration
11: No serious opposition (although little support for) adding: "without the permission of the Arbitration Committee or another person or group empowered to lift those restrictions."

Canvassing
15 Limited support for "Parties to the CDA process may legitimately contact other editors to provide input, but must at all times do so in strict accordance with WP:CANVASS."

Improve language
These specifics received support.


 * Under "What this process is not":
 * Dispute resolution or other discussions: Dispute resolution should proceed through the normal channels. Disputes with an administrator should be discussed first with that administrator, and then via the normal channels of third opinion, mediation, request for comment, and arbitration.


 * Under "Before nomination":
 * Consider that nominations that do not address the core issue of whether the community as a whole does or does not trust the account to have the sysop right will likely fail, and possibly backfire spectacularly. Determining that is the purpose of this process. If this is not the issue in your case then you are in the wrong place.

I regard the following as a friendly amendment to the above:
 * Tighten wording regarding prior discussion with administrator
 * "Disputes with an administrator should be discussed first with that administrator, and then via the normal channels of  third opinion, mediation, request for comment, and arbitration."

I would like to see wording at the end of the notice along the lines of:
 * Tighten wording regarding multiple resubmissions
 * Repeated resubmissions of failed RfDA's may result in measures taken to protect the project from repeated frivolous submissions that may include, but are not limited to, suspension of editing privileges.

Wording, of course, is open to suggestion.

All done. Will ask about positioning of final one. Ben  Mac  Dui  15:43, 9 January 2010 (UTC)

Reasons for speedy close
Suggestion to spell this out.

Certification vs Quorum
Discussion about the conflict between nominations and WP:CANVASS.

On re-reading I don't think this requires any action. Ben  Mac  Dui  16:22, 9 January 2010 (UTC)

Before a CDA nomination
Suggestion and general agreement that wording be tightened: "A CDA request may be initiated only after substantial community discussion at a suitable venue, such as Administrators' noticeboard or Requests for comment/User, has failed to produce a resolution."

Proactively scheduled review
...after say 5 CDAs. Done, although I made up the wording. Ben  Mac  Dui  16:12, 9 January 2010 (UTC)

"All editors"
Not clear to me what this was intended to amend. Perhaps a default statement about using standard RfA procedures needed? Ben  Mac  Dui  11:58, 9 January 2010 (UTC) Small changes added. Ben  Mac  Dui  18:29, 16 January 2010 (UTC)

Language request
OK, this is probably slightly off topic, for which I apologize, but I have a heartfelt request to make of all "listeners" here. Could people please refreain from referring to this as "deadminship"? Using "de-adminship" shouldn't really be that difficult, and it avoids the issue that "deadminship" often reads as something like "dead man ship". Thank you for your understanding. — V = I * R (talk to Ohms law) 00:56, 12 January 2010 (UTC)

Quite agree myself. Ben  Mac  Dui  18:30, 16 January 2010 (UTC)

Statement on blocked users
Under the discussion sub-section, the paragraph titled 'Anyone can participate in discussion', a proviso is made that blocked editors can comment if the CDA is about their block. This is obviously a good thing, however it should not mean that they are allowed to evade the block to do so. Something needs added or clarified there, no? NJA (t/ c)  09:02, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Secondly, it's said that nominees must personally sign, but we allow for block users to discuss. Therefore shouldn't a proviso be added that uninvolved admins or crats may sign on the behalf of a blocked user where the CGDA is relevant to their block (and of course they meet the same 3 months, 500 edit threshold). NJA (t/ c)  09:45, 28 January 2010 (UTC)

I've moved the relevant blocked user detail into the Nomination section, and added the various proviso's there. And I've pointed the detail on blocked users (etc) in the section below to point to it. Matt Lewis (talk) 13:11, 28 January 2010 (UTC)

Speedy closures
There's a section on speedy closures, and then there's two sentences (at the end) of the 'before nomination' section. The former section says any uninvolved admin or crat can close, whilst the latter two sentences are un-clear who closes. Can we get some clarification and possibly merge these into one clear statement? Cheers, NJA (t/ c)  09:15, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * I think Speedy closure is better in its own section. It will need clarifying though, if it's not made good already. Matt Lewis (talk) 12:35, 28 January 2010 (UTC)


 * I apologise for undoing a lot of what you did here but as they all came after a large and un-discussed change it was going to be very difficult to sort out which changes applied to the previous version and which were changes to the changes. I will have a look at them as soon as I can and see what I think can be usefully put back. I'll also take a look at the questions you raise. Ben   Mac  Dui  09:36, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * I didn't realise there was a big change before I edited. I re-added a few of my clarifications, leaving out the other contested changes. NJA (t/ c)  09:45, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * OK - thanks. It is not that you need "permission" to make changes as that very shortly prior to an RfC it is pretty crazy for a previously fairly stable page to undergo large and undiscussed changes. Ben   Mac  Dui  10:25, 28 January 2010 (UTC)


 * No -there was nothing crazy about my edit, and I've discussed the major changes here and on the draft page too. I've worked a lot on this matter now, so please show some respect here! With respect to you both, you have to take the time and look at the page afresh - too much work has gone into this now. Huge reverts are not helpful unless there is a specific detail-based reason. I reverted back to NJAs additions and ce's to my edit of last night. It really is easier to work from now, and I think NJA proved this, as he's been the first 'ouside' editor to tackle this page. Matt Lewis (talk) 10:30, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Well to be fair I didn't take notice of the large changes. I just finally got around to reading through it and I felt the wording (as I read it) had a lot to be desired. My main concerns are addressed here, ie two issues with the intro, the speedy close statements, and this sub-section on the confusion regarding blocked users. NJA (t/ c)  10:36, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Huge reverts are I'm afraid the consequence of huge and undiscussed changes. I am sorry this has become so difficult but it is not just that I have not read the big change you made - its that it includes significant changes that have not been agreed. If you spell them out clearly I'd be happy to discuss them. NJA - I am truly sorry you have wandered into this morass - I certainly appreciate your efforts, but without a stable platform from which to discuss changes the process has just become circular. I'm glad you think the major points you have raised are still easy to see. Ben   Mac  Dui  10:38, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Losing the "in good standing" proviso (which appeared throughout) seemed to become consensus in the draft page talk - nobody was fixed on keeping it, and we all could see problems with it. Regarding my parag that addressed NewYorkBrad's concerns (which I copied here in the section above) - I felt the only way to highlight it (and effectively get it in) was amongst a general tidy up. I've always had the strong impression that people haven't been properly reading through the actual CDA proposal (or even reading it at all). I admit that I'd only been scanning it periodically myself, as it just didn't easily flow. Matt Lewis (talk) 11:09, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Broadly, I agree with MacDui here. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:18, 28 January 2010 (UTC)

Active and inactive admin: is CDA for both, just active ones, or should it leave it open?
I've removed all references to both the activity and inactivity of admin, to leave things more flexible, and avoid people raising the question "what is active"? I think around 800 admin are classed as 'inactive' (by someone's criteria), and I think it is simply best not to go into it at CDA. It is highly unlikely that 10 editors will open a CDA on a truly inactive admin, and if that actually happened, it would likely be a serious matter of 'discovered' CDA-worthy behaviour in an inactive admin, from someone who could theoretically re-appear at any time. But rather than change to "all administrators (whether active or not)", I think we should just say "administrators" let the matter play out. Regarding the 'inactivity' paragraph in "What the Process is not", I don't think anyone is really likely to confuse CDA with the matter of culling long-gone admin, and detailing it just raising difficult (and unnecessary) questions on what is active and what isn't. Matt Lewis (talk) 15:08, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * The language appears to have been restored, quite appropriately. There is no consensus to remove the sysop right from inactive accounts and CDA should not be an end run around this general principle. Christopher Parham (talk) 18:40, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * I agree with Christopher. Such a change has never been discussed, and there is no reason to make it unilaterally. In fact, there is no reason to make it at all: the existing language creates no problems, and is just common sense. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:15, 28 January 2010 (UTC)


 * Do you really both think that 10 editors will try and get together to use CDA to clear up inactive admin? If they have found a valid reason to start a CDA, they would have to have massive proof of consistent wrongdoing, so they may as well have a go. And where is this 'consensus' anyway? I challenge it. What the 'inactive admin' paragraph actually does is raise doubts on what an 'active' admin actually is. Why have that ambiguity when it is not needed? The parag is full of irrelevant stuff on consensus too, and is part of the remaining cruft that takes the shine off CDA as a serious stand-alone proposal imo. All the unnecessary third-level (in one day) reverts and rewriting now is doing, is making the thing more verbose and less fluent. Why? We have to try not to grind each other down. Matt Lewis (talk) 19:52, 28 January 2010 (UTC)

Stale signatures
RE: "When a nomination is made by 10 editors, those editors:
 * must all have signed the nomination personally, within the 7 day period. 'Stale' signatures are invalid, and must be re-signed to be made valid."

<-- Stale? Either they were signed by editors with 3 months and 500 edits standing within 7 days, or they were not. Either remove, or please clarify what this means and when it would apply? Thanks (NJA) -->


 * Yes, what makes the signatures stale? Matt Lewis (talk) 12:16, 28 January 2010 (UTC)


 * As answered also at my talk: they become "stale" after 7 days. There are 7 days to collect the signatures for nomination, and after that, one has to sign again. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:17, 28 January 2010 (UTC)


 * I can't see an answer on your Talk. Why would someone sign again? Do you mean all the first lot of 'nomination' votes are put aside, and there is a second phase of voting, which can be added, removed or changed during the discussion phase? Matt Lewis (talk) 20:13, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * I've re-worded it. This really isn't so difficult. You can't have a failed nomination sitting around for months waiting for a tenth editor to finally show up, if the first nine editors have lost interest. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:23, 28 January 2010 (UTC)

Tidy and significant safeguard changes
I made a number of changes in one go. Most were cosmetic, but two were very important.

1) I removed all reference to "of good standing" regarding the 10 editors, per the emerging draft page talk consensus.

2) I added this parag per NewYorkBrad's (and others) concerns:


 * "An Arbitration member or Bureaucrat may withdraw the validity of an editor, or editors, who are considered to be potentially unreliable nominees. This is generally done in extreme cases only, and usually when the nomination has been submitted. One full day is to be allowed for any replacement nominee(s) to be found."

I actually don't mind if little like this is there at all, but I put it in to work on.

Regarding the new section formatting - it is largely for the RfC. The section headings (ie the '='s) can be reduced if need be, if the CDA proposal gets through. Matt Lewis (talk) 01:36, 28 January 2010 (UTC)

Yes- I undid all that as I neither support the changes nor could make any clear sense of the diff. Better to suggest changes first and avoid these large diffs. Ben  Mac  Dui  09:33, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * As you also undid an hour of someone else's work this morning, I'm going to put it back. It was just too difficult to clean it up an then make the c/e changes. Sorry, you'll have to read through it - but it's actually worth looking at it with a slighly fresh eyes. If it helps; this is my diff again is here, and this is the diff of NJA's edit after mine here. NJA seems to be a lawyer (which could have obvious uses here) and an admin, and I'm happy he wanted to work on the changes I made last night. The combined edits represent a few hours work, and I think the result is a much better edit to work from than the previous harder-to-follow edit. I actually think NJAs copy edits improve the language significantly. It is at a stage now where we can really just focus on the outstanding details, imo.Matt Lewis (talk) 10:03, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Sorry this is nuts. We now have three different editors adding new material. The process has become all but incomprehensible. If you want to make changes of significance you should be proposing them and adding them in piece meal not as a huge diff. End of story. Ben   Mac  Dui  10:29, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * CDA always was a little bit nuts! (since I've been watching it anyway). 3 editors working together is not untypical in 'article space' - I suppose we need to see it as similar to general editing this point. I think it was heading for a period like this, as it needed a good tidy as well as the various detail changes. Getting things in is often a jolt. The 'catch 22' for me was that I would have had to make about 5 proposals to lay up acheiving what I wanted. Of course, I'll accept any detail/copy changes you want to make. Matt Lewis (talk) 11:22, 28 January 2010 (UTC)

It sure seems to me, as it has for some time now, that Matt's agenda for Cda has grown increasingly unilateral and disruptive. The entire Cda process is in danger of collapse, in my view. Jusdafax  18:15, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Please make these childish comments on my talk page. I'm growing tired of them now. Matt Lewis (talk) 20:00, 28 January 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to comment that I at least largely agree with Jusdafax about that, and I say that with sorrow. There have actually been some edits that were helpful, but I've just had to expend an excessive amount of time undoing a lot of damage. But the solution to bad editing, is good editing. There is no reason to conclude that anything is collapsing. The sky has not fallen, nor will it. --Tryptofish (talk) 18:46, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Excuse me Tryptofish, but what "damage" exactly? You like to stand in the middle in these matters I know, but I'm not here to do any damage, and nor do I. I'm not a punch bag either. I've been a copy editor by trade - please show me my bad editing. Regarding the parts you disagree with - just deal with them. You have actually made a large amount of copy edits of your own now. I think I deserve a little more common respect. Matt Lewis (talk) 20:00, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * A lot of my copy edits had to undo the damage of your copy edits. And copy edits are one thing, but making major changes to the meaning on the whim of the moment, in the face of a couple of months of consensus to the contrary, is far from copy-editing. I stand by what I said. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:06, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * I actually thought you said "largely disagree" - but "largely agree" with what Judafax just said?!? I'm really not happy with that at all, and I'd like you to take it back. I can see now all your edits today really have been very much WP:OWN. You clearly don't want the text you are happy rolling with changed, but you should have respected the work of others. What is the sense in alienating people by reverting so much work unnecessarily? There was never any "consensus" on the text - you have just assumed that there is because nobody apart from you up until now has fiddled with it. It had to have those various copy and content changes made. Matt Lewis (talk) 00:53, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

About canvassing
I've just now noticed that someone deleted a word from the section on canvassing, and I've added it back. Please note that WP:CANVASS does not allow one to contact other editors to provide specific input, and please note the previous discussion here, where you need to read carefully what it says under oppose and neutral. --Tryptofish (talk) 21:27, 29 January 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm not too bothered by it. Cheers, NJA <em style="color:#63D1F4">(t/ <em style="color:#63D1F4">c)  13:11, 30 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Good, resolved. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:16, 30 January 2010 (UTC)

After the most recent edits
After the rather too-hectic round of recent edits, I think it has come back to something pretty close to what the community has been telling us they want. There is, however, one section where things are not entirely clear to me yet. Recently, Newyorkbrad raised some concerns that the previous "editor in good standing" language would present problems to ArbCom: persons who had perhaps very mild or unrelated sanctions, perhaps long ago, asking to have their "good standing" restored. The "good standing" language has now been clarified, and I think has consensus in the present form (?). However, other language was added as well as deleted, and I think some confusion remains. It is in the section about the nominators.


 * You will see a bullet point that I added back, after it had been deleted, that says "needs to be discussed" at the end. I propose that it be retained. There was no need to delete it, and it clearly reflects the wishes of the editors who have been commenting all along.


 * There is also a newly-added passage called "The following terms and restrictions also apply:" with three bullet points of its own. I propose that it be deleted. It is partly redundant, and partly a solution in search of a problem.

--Tryptofish (talk) 20:01, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * The first bullet was in place of the sanctions (etc) detail, which is widely worried about, and could ruin the proposal. I suggest we discuss it without it in, as nobody heas really objected to its removal. The second bullet solved an ambiguity, the third bullet was initially just text (which is now duplicated). I don't understand how you can just assume the 'community' is behind the all existing wording-- most people couldn't even read it - and that's an absolute fact. It HAS to be readable. Matt Lewis (talk) 20:58, 28 January 2010 (UTC)

Good work - things are not quite as chaotic as I feared. A few points:

First mention of "Stewards" could do with a link.

Before nomination: "note of Dispute resolution" - I don't think this needs a capital 'D'.

"may not be subject to Arbitration enforcement editing restrictions" - "needs to be discussed". I agree it should be retained and I have a caveat. This is not an issue in which (to the best of my knowledge) any of those who have been consistently active have much expertise. Even if I don't agree with them, when folks like NYbrad and Elonka turn up suggesting issues relating to this statement be cleared up I sense a need for caution, yet attempting to become proficient in this complex area of Wikipedia is not practical in the short term. How about this as an alternative?
 * The RfC states at the end that "If the RfC ends in consensus to implement, such implementation will then be subject to review by the Bureaucrats". It would be possible to add a short Q in the FAQ asking why this is necessary along with an answer that this in particular is an area where we might specifically ask the 'crats to discuss and if necessary amend the wording.

"The following terms and restrictions also apply:" I have not found the thread or logic behind the inclusion (which may be lack of diligence on my part), but I agree that it serves no genuine purpose and is bordering on instruction creep. Ben  Mac  Dui  20:55, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * See my above comment. And please AGF in the sense of reading the changes thoughtfully. Matt Lewis (talk) 20:58, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Matt, I do assume GF. You have worked hard on this proposal and I admire your diligence. If you make points worth considering everyone will listen. If you repeatedly make changes without any serious attempt to discuss them it puts people off. As I said above I don't see the need for these three bullet points but if you can muster a cogent argument for them I will be happy to read it. Ben   Mac  Dui  21:08, 28 January 2010 (UTC)


 * I've given an argument above and elsewhere. One bullet was exisiting text (which I've just removed the duplication of again), one bullet was an alternative to the sanctions stuff which is so problematic, that it should be discussed while it is temporarily removed from the proposal (which is the sensible way to do it I think), one bullet is information on a blocked editors, in the place people would actually expect it to be (instead of in brackets in the section below).


 * I know you didn't like the fact that I made the my changes in one edit, but it meant that I made changes that worked across the article. Tryptofish has fixated on the old version, and made 20 changes one after the other. He has made a couple of errors really, which I don't think is fair as much as anything. The old edit very was hard to read, and no way sacrosanct. We have to give each other some space. Matt Lewis (talk) 21:28, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * At the moment, I am one of those persons who are put off. MacDui, I've made the link to Stewards (and Jimbo); please check if that was the same as what you intended. About that capital D, I could go either way, and it's no big deal. It refers to a section heading above it. Maybe quotation marks and lower case would be better? And about the "terms and restrictions", yes, let's delete it unless a cogent argument for it comes up. And as for the sort of complicated rewrite of the related paragraph, I'm leaning towards thinking that we are over-thinking it. Maybe we should just go forward with the present language for that paragraph, and treat it as something that will be refined after implementation. I don't see it as something that will make people vote "no". --Tryptofish (talk) 21:17, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * You are cheesed off? You have run rough shod the past few hours. You might not have liked what you saw, but I wish you could see that you can't just methodically revert. We have to be gentler with each other. We disagree on a number of points. Matt Lewis (talk) 21:28, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Matt, you are now in violation of 3RR. I suggest that you self-revert immediately. --Tryptofish (talk) 21:39, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Here is the link to the version that shows both sets of language, with both labeled as needing to be discussed, before Matt edit warred it to his preferred version. --Tryptofish (talk) 21:45, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * With respect to this reversion, I object because Matt has unilaterally changed it to his preferred language, which, at this point in this talk, appears to be favored only by him, against a large number of editors who have agreed to the earlier wording. I favored leaving both sets of language, indicating the areas of disagreement, and discussing it to decide which to use. You can still see both in the link just above. And about this reversion, my reasoning is it is easier for the reader to not have to search for another section to find out what is being said. And, again, it was the existing language. --Tryptofish (talk) 21:58, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * I think your language betrays you in your comments above (before you think a little bit and edit it). I simply don't want to edit in this playground. I didn't notice I hit 3RR, but seeing as you've put it like that Tryptofish - I actually won't do anything. I don't think you've behaved very well today at all. You've made a battle out of far more than you have a right to. And for what? Where is this existing consensus for the format of the page? You could see the time people had spent last night and today finally updating this, and you are squbbling over almost nothing. It is very close to WP:OWN, as you feared yourself on your talk page. By all means report me - a block would at least get me out of this utter foolishness. I do want to help see this bouncy rail cart through to a professional CDA proposal, but I don't want to have to deal with all this nonsense. Matt Lewis (talk) 22:05, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * I am giving myself the same advice I so often have had to give you: to drop it. Other editors can look at this and decide what the best wording would be. And, no, I don't intend to report you. If I did, I would have said it on your talk page, not here. --Tryptofish (talk) 22:09, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Good man, it's been good advice. I'm having a break right now too. It can't be too far off now, despite these disagreements. My main worry is 80%. I'll go with 80 if I have to (as I personally don't mind it), but I've just got a horrible feeling we'll regret it on the day. We need more arb type input regarding the sanction stuff. Matt Lewis (talk) 22:22, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you. I appreciate that. Please understand that what I am very concerned about (and I infer that Ben MacDui and Jusdafax are too) is that we have had a document here that a very large number of editors have (hopefully) looked at in the course of some very lengthy and thorough polling and discussion, and that the last 24 hours or so have been marked by a large number of edits by you and by NJA that changed the content a lot from what had been a hard-won consensus, and did so without really justifying it to the rest of us. NJA and I have talked at my talk page, and I tentatively am hopeful that we are now in agreement on all of the questioned points. Some of the changes you made have been helpful, including some clarifications of wording and the creation of sections. However, I'm trying to run interference between those of you who want to spend a lot more time revising, and others who very understandably are beyond-impatient to get things going at last. It seems to me that we are within a day or two of being ready to go live, but the recent edits have too often seemed unneeded, and seem to set us back from being able to move forward. I've spent much of my day today trying to make sure the page remains what editors have said they want. It wasn't that I wanted to undo you. It was that I wanted, and want, to preserve what so many editors have vetted. --Tryptofish (talk) 22:40, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * I think "have (hopefully) looked at" are the key words here. You say a "very large number of people", but I honestly don't think all that many people have had much more than a quick run through it, and many haven't read it at all. Firstly, the various CDA pages were for a long time very hard to navigate (I myself could not find the proposal for ages). They are not exactly seamless now, but there is little more we can do to rectify that. Secondly, the proposal simply wasn't an inviting read (again I'm using myself as a benchmark). Thirdly, people keep either owning up to the fact that they haven't read it, or that fact becomes clear in their comments. One person told me they would vote for any form of CDA, so wasn't concerned about the actual details. Others have postponed it, like NJA who finally read it today.


 * So I really believe that the majority of people (outside of the really committed) haven't fully read all the details, and most of those who have, will have assumed it is to be tidied up, revised and re-written, partly because of the way it was written. I just can't imagine that there is any consensus at all for it being an actual 'text'. Some of the points in it may represent consensus (like points previously polled, though I do contest some points really represent the community, like the 'inactive admin' matter - and some of those polls have been seriously disputed in terms of representing consensus) – but much of the general content I really do not think represents anything.


 * I just wish we went through all this stuff at some less nerve-wracking point in the past, instead of right before the inevitable 'zero hour'. But when could we have done it? For me the whole January deadline thing was a really bad idea. By Jan 10th we were only half way up the mountain, if even that. 5.4 came from a self-weakening spread of polls, and was unclear on a major point. It was no wonder so many people were taking the mick out of 'us' - we were seriously running ahead of ourselves, and it was very much them/us thereafter. These things are simply done when they are done. We can't do a non-proposal RfC now (for obvious reasons – though it seems to be what Jehochman wants), but tomorrow I'm going on a personal fact finding mission to see what some of the more vocal critics actually want at this point in time. I just want comments which are honest and/or productive, and not semi-cryptic comments, which are mainly taking the piss out of (or plain ignoring) us.


 * PS. Unfortunately MacDui reverted that last edit. I expect it was to his favoured edit (though he seemed to have stepped back), but I think even this is problematic, because we are essentially a small crowd offering support within ourselves, and consequently pissing each other off. I did hope someone new and less jaded would come in and edit next, whatever that edit was. We desperately need more people imo, and I hope NJA still sticks around. The hard-to-avoid tl;dr aspect is another reason perhaps - has everyone even got to it? Matt Lewis (talk) 00:21, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

I think at this point the issues under debate are only those marked "need to be discussed" although in some cases I am not at all sure why. Perhaps this could be spelled out. Let us hope that these can be dealt with in a collaborative spirit. Ben  Mac  Dui  23:14, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you! From my perspective, the issues are what I said at the very top of this talk section. --Tryptofish (talk) 23:18, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
 * If we are using that 'template', I'm going to add it to 80% as my last edit tonight. Whatever happens, it certainly can't be ignored. Matt Lewis (talk) 00:21, 29 January 2010 (UTC)


 * I have addressed both of the above two remaining issues named by Tryptofish. We are agreed about the 3 bullet points, I don't see a specific reply or alternative suggestion re the single bullet point issue. I see no need to continue to discuss the others. There is imply no purpose in trying to second guess these issues when the question we are asking is about the overall principle. No matter what is said someone will disagree with the specifics. I do not believe that it is our role to start including new issues or debate old ones that were not raised during the extensive earlier discussions. They are simply debating points that both common sense by Bureaucrats and actual experience will iron out. Ben   Mac  Dui  09:06, 29 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Two people shouldn't decide what is and what is not a current issue. While I do not agree with Mr Lewis on some things (as noted here), I do think that aversion to clarifications by citing a consensus of 1-2 weeks ago is insufficient. To be clear, I think there are only just a handful of ambiguities left in the current version. I've worked on new and established policy guidance before, and these ambiguities are things that should be addressed, and they could easily be fixed now without too much discussion as generally it's contradictions and clarifications to be made. Anyhow, as noted in the section directly below I have two issues with the nominator's sub-section, one in the related processes section, two in the the before nominations section, also a concern about the wording of allowing blocked editors into discussion, and possibly some rewording of the community restrictions bit (though not terribly important). I'd like to be WP:BOLD and use common sense to clarify them, though I'm not up for having clarifications undone again just because 2 weeks ago it looked okay. What makes sense to those who've been working on it for weeks, does not necessarily make sense to everyone else. <em style="font-family:Trebuchet MS;color:#6600CC">NJA <em style="color:#63D1F4">(t/ <em style="color:#63D1F4">c)  09:57, 29 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Hello all. After sleeping on this, I've gone over all the comments since I was here last, and I'm going to offer, here and below, my best thoughts on it as of now. On the specific question I raised at the top of this talk thread, I see it the same way that Ben MacDui does in his most recent comment above. I agree with that entirely. I've also read carefully all of NJA's comments here and on my own talk, and I want to say very sincerely that they are frequently eye-opening for me, in that they often rightly point out things to which my own eyes had simply glazed over and could no longer see. NJA has done us all a very great service in this regard and I, for one, am grateful. I acknowledge that Matt may also have been trying to draw attention to some of the same things, but I somehow understand it from the way NJA communicated it, whereas I didn't "get it" from Matt. I'll make separate comments below about the issues NJA raises below.
 * Let me draw attention, particularly MacDui's, to what's smoldering near the bottom of Wikipedia talk:Community de-adminship/Draft RfC: my somewhat derailed attempt to get a good plan on announcing the RfC on watchlists whenever it does open, and the sometimes trollish, sometimes valid discussion about how to format the RfC page. I'm not advocating wading into the distracting nastiness, but I do think we need to make sure we are all on the same page about what we will actually put forth. I remain hopeful that we can work through all the various issues within a few days, and still go live pretty soon.
 * Now let me return to the specific issue being discussed here. I note NJA made this edit. I don't see it discussed below, and I remain concerned, as I indicated at my talk yesterday, that it goes against discussion here. Where NJA says just above that two people (MacDui and I) shouldn't decide, well, OK, but neither should NJA and Matt, and the fact remains that there were quite a few editors who looked carefully at it in the talk I just linked. My concern here is that we may be undoing a consensus wording to satisfy just NJA, and I do not really understand why. Please explain, specifically, what problem(s) the newer language is trying to fix, because I just do not see it. --Tryptofish (talk) 17:54, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Out of the serious concerns noted below, this is the big deal? Okay cool. But it does appear that any change of the text is being heavily resisted, which just isn't what this is all about. All I was trying to do is add clarity and remove odd language not commonly used in policy guidance or by other english speakers. First sentence: it's the process that is addressing the issue of trust, not the nomination itself. The nomination is simply part of that process. As for the second sentence, I believed administrator sounds better as that's what being questioned, but I suppose the generic term account is okay, though less precise. Next we have the "possibly backfire spectacularly bit", which is very poor wording for policy guidance, as we don't know if that is true, but we do know if the core issue isn't addressed then it will fail (which is what the revised wording says). The third sentence was just filler, as it's already been made clear that if the core issue isn't addressed the process fails (ergo its purpose has failed). So why mention it, particularly mid-way through the paragraph? Moving along, I suppose the words 'pattern' and 'history' are interchangeable, but I think history captures the fact that it's been repeat (ie there's a history of it), thus it just makes the wording cleaner. The (s) after behaviour is obvious. The last bit: I think it's also clearer, and the wording 'bright light you are about to shine' sounds very regional. This is en-wiki, so let's get to the point of the sentence without odd language, ie your conduct will be considered too.

Saying all this, if it's a concern then we can discuss it, but regionalisms and telling people outcomes will backfire spectacularly and such is not policy guidance language. <em style="font-family:Trebuchet MS;color:#6600CC">NJA <em style="color:#63D1F4">(t/ <em style="color:#63D1F4">c)  18:41, 29 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks again, and I appreciate the prompt reply. Actually, amid all the prompt replying, you have probably by now seen that I did reply also below. (I'm typing as fast as I can, really! (smile)) Anyway, this is now the first time that I could understand your thinking. Some of the minor copyedit things, such as pattern/history, are, well, minor, so we can certainly just agree about that. On what I see as the more substantive parts, the passages that sound to you colloquial or predictive, we disagree. I guess you seem to see it from the perspective of writing law, whereas I see it from the perspective of telling fellow editors, some of whom may come to the eventual CDA page in anger and in haste, to understand what they should not be getting into. It's the way I think we communicate on-Wiki. These are not things that would (I think?) become the basis for a Wikilawyering complaint, so it's not a matter of making them airtight as policy. Rather, it's a way of grabbing an angry editor by the collar and saying wait a minute. I don't suppose DICK would pass muster with your analysis either, but this is the right way to say it, I think, as did others here. Let's see what others think now. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:02, 29 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Agreed. The language is very odd to me (I've done other policy work on wiki), and it isn't common terminology I'd use. I try to keep the law out of things, but as a younger lawyer in the UK we are trained to use unambigious language, and to make things as clear as possible, particularly when dealing with international speakers of English. Anyhow, let's point out the differences and see what people think. <em style="font-family:Trebuchet MS;color:#6600CC">NJA <em style="color:#63D1F4">(t/ <em style="color:#63D1F4">c)  19:08, 29 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Yes, agreed. (Young, a lawyer, and in the UK: I'm zero for three with those!) I'll try to make the agreed-upon changes described in the sections below. (I looked back at your user-draft, and noted that you seem to think I or others were pushing back against changing the in-good-standing language. Actually no, I was the one who asked Brad about it to begin with, and I made some of the changes myself.) Thanks again. --Tryptofish (talk) 19:28, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Most recent
So, for those without a scorecard, here are, as of the present, the two alternative wordings under consideration. NJA's wording, currently on the page, is:
 * Note that the purpose of this process is to address the core issue of whether the community as a whole does or does not trust the administrator to have the sysop right. Nominations that do not address that issue will likely fail. If this is not the issue in your case, then you are in the wrong place. In all but the most extreme cases, there should be a demonstrable history of unacceptable behavior(s), and not just one single incident. This process will result in intense scrutiny of all involved parties, thus realize that your conduct may be questioned as well.

The wording that I favor, based on the discussion here, but modified now by me to account for some of the simple copyedit type issues about which NJA and I agree is:
 * Note that nominations that do not focus on the core issue of whether the community as a whole does or does not trust the administrator to have the sysop right will likely fail, and possibly backfire spectacularly. If this is not the issue in your case, then you are in the wrong place. In all but the most extreme cases, there should be a demonstrable history of repeated unacceptable behavior, and not just one single incident. Processes like this one usually result in intense scrutiny of all involved parties. The bright light you are about to shine on a particular administrator will reflect on you as well.

What do other editors, with fresh eyes, think? --Tryptofish (talk) 19:52, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Comment: I'm not a fresh face, but I have a strong point. I think CDA could be really hard-won at the RFC, and that it has to be as professional-looking and watertight a proposal as possible to get through. People might want to put in colloquial language if it gets through, but that is whenever. I suggest sticking with the professional copy throughout the text, and use bullets/sub-sections etc where they clearly help (which is most places). Put the right points in the right sections (not in brackets where people wouldn't expect them!!). Make the page readable, clear, and as professional looking as possible. If it looks like it is already policy, it could be half way there. Matt Lewis (talk) 23:16, 29 January 2010 (UTC)

Comment: Thinking about this some more, I was also drawn to thoughts about it being really hard-fought at the RfC. Think about the comments from editors who oppose it, and think about comments from editors who tend towards support but who have had reservations. Time and again, there is the not-unreasonable concern that good administrators, doing the ugly tasks that administrators have to do, will be dragged through the mud of a bad nomination by editors who have an ax to grind but who do not have a valid basis for CDA. Even if such a nomination fails, or even if it is rejected in the subsequent poll, the community, rightly, wants to minimize the number of good administrators put through the process. Now, think about the upcoming RfC. This concern will come up again and again, for sure. The language I'm endorsing was discussed thoroughly here and no one complained that it was colloquial, predictive, or blunt. Ultimately, NJA's language differs in being nicer, less blunt. My preferred language will be better suited to answering the criticisms that will arise at the RfC. The community does not want genteel language about this. They want it to be blunt, to be attention-getting, to get the attention of editors acting in anger and haste, to cause those editors to pause. If we choose the prissier language, I feel this proposal will go the way of Obama's health plan. --Tryptofish (talk) 20:32, 30 January 2010 (UTC)

Goal for finishing talk
Per comments by me and by Ben MacDui above, I'm going to say that we should set a goal of settling the remaining questions in this talk by late in the day on Wednesday, February 3. I'd like to ask involved editors to make a good faith effort to ask/answer remaining questions between now and then. I think there is strong and growing sentiment that this discussion cannot go on indefinitely. If at all possible, we will try to "go live" with the RfC shortly after that, and therefore, not be able to continue to respond to pre-RfC concerns beyond that time. --Tryptofish (talk) 23:04, 30 January 2010 (UTC)
 * I stongly object to this, and I think it's been done for all the wrong reasons. There are serious matters we simply havent resolved yet. It is done when it is done! There is not a "strong and growing sentiment" that this is "going on indefinitely" at all! There is a strong feeling that we getting close now, but still have to iron a couple of things out. Yet again you and MacDui are simply speaking for yourselves. For heavens sake, think of the wider community and show some patience. The criticism of 'railroading' is ever-present, and is always teetering on the brink of truth. Matt Lewis (talk) 23:22, 30 January 2010 (UTC)


 * We've got the time & the space, let's use it. GoodDay (talk) 23:26, 30 January 2010 (UTC)

Tryptofish's All-Purpose and Absolutely Brilliant Law of How Wikipedia WorksTM: Question: How many Wikipedians does it take to screw in a light bulb? Answer: However many are online. The first Wikipedian will put the light bulb in, and then each of the others will say how they could have done it better. MacDui observes above that the process can go on forever unless someone says there is a deadline. And I didn't even do that. I asked editors to make a good faith effort. If anyone has a problem with that.... In the mean time, I suggest people calm down and actually try to ask and answer the remaining concerns. It's not that difficult. --Tryptofish (talk) 23:36, 30 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Please let's not mention any dates at all until we are all happy. With all the travelling gone on etc, I'm more than happy not to jump before the 3rd - it's only right and fair given the commitment those people have put into the project. If it does suddenly fall together before the 3rd, I promise not to put it forward before that date. I'm sure there are things we can discuss in between, and really - who knows about dates right now anyway? We need to be very careful and cautious. Matt Lewis (talk) 23:53, 30 January 2010 (UTC)
 * If anyone makes it fall together before that time, it won't be me, and I won't like it. Yes, let's discuss in between, that's all I'm saying, but let's do it with an understanding that there has to be a resolution. We're very close to that resolution now. --Tryptofish (talk) 23:58, 30 January 2010 (UTC)