Wikipedia talk:Conflict of interest limit/Archive 1

Purpose of this proposal
This is a proposed policy. The purpose is to set a limit on some direct editing of articles when the editor has a financial conflict of interest for the subject of these articles. The proposal is minimal: It is not meant to capture all cases ever. It is instead meant to capture cases where there is a consensus that these should be limited as proposed. It is independent from other proposals. It is independent from existing policies and guidelines. It does not preclude further policies and guidelines in the future.

This proposed policy does not limit all paid editing, or even most of it. It does not limit an editor from being paid to edit articles. It limits an editor from being paid to edit some articles, that is, those articles which are on subjects with specific financial connections to the person who pays the editor. -- Atethnekos (Discussion, Contributions) 21:48, 9 November 2013 (UTC)

RfC: A minimal, independent limit on financial conflict of interest direct editing
Should this proposal, Conflict of interest limit, be made into a policy? Atethnekos (Discussion, Contributions) 21:45, 9 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Why not? This may take care of the majority of the cases.  Smallbones( smalltalk ) 01:03, 10 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Strong Support This is by far and away the best policy put forth so far because it convers both financial and non-financial conflicts of interest, and because it's simple and easy to understand. If nobody objects, I suggest adding that editors should not write articles about family members, significant others, roommates, etc. DavidinNJ (talk) 20:21, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Tentative oppose This is indeed better than the competitive proposals, but it is unenforceable. It will be in the interests of the best paid editors to follow it; it will be in the interests of most of them to evade it. And it does not even begin to deal with the problem of unpaid COI due to strong personal advocacy, which is the more intransigent problem,. I also note the ambiguity of the word "client". There are some organizations of which we are all in some sense clients.  DGG ( talk ) 01:00, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I removed "client" from the page . I agree with you that the word is ambiguous. -- Atethnekos (Discussion, Contributions) 02:09, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
 * DGG, About I week ago, I was thinking about the problem of unpaid COI, but its difficult to define. I don't think you want a ban on people editing articles of organizations to which they belong.  Otherwise, nobody would be able to edit articles on colleges that they attended, political parties that they are registered in, etc. Because of its controversial nature, I don't think you'll ever see a consensus on how to deal with unpaid ideological advocacy. As the author of this policy states above, this proposal doesn't seek to ban all forms of COI, just ones where there is a consensus. From my perspective, I don't expect Wikipedia policies to deal with every wrong.  I just want a policy that prohibits serious and definable conflicts of interest without interfering with the majority of people who edit in good faith. DavidinNJ (talk) 09:25, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
 * DGG, you have a much less favorable view of PR people and paid editing contractors than I do. Your assumption is that they are mainly rogues who will go black-hat if their practice is outlawed, or akin to the kooks and fanatics who push their POV on controversial pages. They are rational businessmen who are walking through a door Wikipedia is leaving open. Any paid-editing restrictions will greatly reduce the practice. There already are rogue PR people using sockpuppets and small company owners and others with COI directly editing their pages, and nothing is going to stop that. But the idea is to curb this rampant "advertorial" industry, operating openly, which is a disgrace that Wikipedia (or the Foundation, if Wikipedia won't act) can and should act against. Coretheapple (talk) 12:07, 11 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Comment. (It's wonderful to see a small proposal.  Thank you.)  I'm unclear how it would be enforced: it will be hard to measure adherence to the policy, if the only measure is looking at the output. If it is indeed unenforceable, then it is really only a guideline and not policy.  And if so remade as a guideline only, it may be close to duplicating the existing WP:COI.  —Sladen (talk) 09:08, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Support It's a measured step in the right direction.-- Ubikwit  連絡見学/迷惑 15:41, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Support Agree that it is a step in the right direction. Coretheapple (talk) 22:54, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose Still no way to enforce such a policy, and it doesn't even mention people with various conflicts of interest who use Wikipedia to attack notable people and companies. POV and COI policies already cover both anyway. First Light (talk)
 * Even with the improvements, I'm still uncomfortable with any meaningful and clear enforcement, except to essentially accuse an editor of COI by notifying them of this page, and then bringing it to an administrator. All such enforcement efforts run afoul of our basic philosophy of focusing on the edits and not the editor. NPOV does just that, and quite well. First Light (talk) 22:18, 22 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Hi User:First Light, thank you for coming back and reviewing.  One of the key issues driving the desire to have a COI policy (as opposed to guideline) is the use of this public good that is WIkipedia, for private gain by companies like Wiki-PR and WikiExperts, who sell Wikipedia-editing services to companies to help them manage PR.  Right now there is no Wikipedia policy that forbids this sort of activity, and the result is that we have scandal after scandal, and we lose credibility in the eyes of the public.   How do you propose we close the door on that sort of activity?  And what actual harm do you see a COI policy that outweighs the good it will do?  (those are both real questions - not rhetorical)  As for me, I don't understand why an institution as important as Wikipedia doesn't have a COI policy, when almost every company (nonprofit and for profit) has one; it is basic good governance.  I do hope you reply.  Thanks again for having a second look. Jytdog (talk) 05:14, 23 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your efforts, which have been sincere, civil, and intelligent. I am also against PR firms hiring themselves out to write crappy articles with a strong POV. But I support the right of individuals and companies to hire someone to defend their articles from personal attacks, criticism-oriented articles, and overall negative slant. I've seen too many BLP articles that were used as attack pages by the person's enemies, and the corrections were extremely slow at times. I have less experience with company pages, but have seen enough to convince me that they are similar. I think that the public good that is Wikipedia is much more threatened by hate-filled zealots, whether corporate, personal, religious, political, or ideologues (who are against free market commercialism, for example).


 * While our current policies don't shut the door on the corporate/PR ideologues, their focus on the edits and not the editors is the best way to prevent such abuse, in my opinion. As far as the potential harm that might outweigh the good with this policy: Too many editors are rabid about their opposition to any company editing their article, or even discussing on the talk page. One editor in particular has posted frequently on these pages and on Jimbo's page, using truly vile language to describe people who write for corporations. He has personally convinced me that the harm from Wikipedia editors like himself "welcoming" corporate editors will harm Wikipedia's reputation more than any of the dangers that we've seen from PR editing. We need to behave professionally, and we need to engage paid editors in a positive and constructive manner. While our current policies aren't perfect, I believe they are better than the changes I've seen proposed.


 * Note: Those of us who have been opposing some of these changes have been painted by certain prominent Wikipedia persons as all being paid editors or their agents/defenders. I've never edited for pay. I don't know anyone who has. I don't even work in the corporate world—in fact my relatively long life has been spent entirely working for a non-profit. Because of my life experiences, I see much more danger to Wikipedia's good from people who are motivated by bigotry, greed, religious hate, misplaced political idealism, nationalism, and personal hurts. Again, I believe that our focus on the edits, rather than the editors, is the best way to fight such things — as long as we support anonymous editing. First Light (talk) 05:57, 23 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi User:First Light, thanks for your kind words, and for your thoughtful reply. I am sorry you felt the need to make the disclaimer at the end of your statement but it is helpful.   It sounds like your mind is pretty made up, but please allow me to respond to a few things.  I hear you, on the danger that inappropriate efforts to enforce this policy, should it be enacted, could harm Wikipedia.  I suggested (and am grateful that the suggestion was accepted) a section on Administration to govern how the policy would be implemented, because I share your concern along those lines.  The section provides clear procedural guidance for editors with concerns about other editors, and makes inappropriate expression of concern about COI sanctionable. So your concern along those lines seems to be already addressed.   More generally, one is going to find people on the extreme ends of all controversial issues, including this one, and I hope you do not let their behavior and positions dominate your thinking about the core issues at stake here.  I think there is room to build consensus around moderate solutions if enough of us can keep our eye on the ball.  Finally, I also share your concern that POV editing, especially by "activists opposed to X" is problematic.  So, I suggested an additional category of COI, which was originally as follows "Involved in litigation with the subject of the article, compete with the subject of the article, or are involved in activist or lobbying activity against the subject of the article."  This was accepted in the following form "engaged in competition, litigation, or lobbying for or against the subject".  I wish "activism" would have been included but you can see there is an effort to cover the kind of opposition you discuss in this policy.   Again more broadly, I hear you that there are volunteer editors who are really committed to positions on various controversial issues, and on some articles their perspective has dominated.  People volunteer to edit, and passion on an issue will lead someone to volunteer their time, while moderation is not much a motivator.   So skewing on some articles is to expected.  Fortunately some editors here are passionate about Wikipedia's mission and care enough about a given issue to spend time on it;  for most prominent issues there are editors working to keep articles NPOV and well sourced.   Which leads to what I think is the core of our disagreement, namely your statement: "But I support the right of individuals and companies to hire someone to defend their articles from personal attacks, criticism-oriented articles, and overall negative slant."   It seems (and I apologize if I mischaracterize you) that you see "anti-X advocacy" as a bigger problem than paid advocacy, and that paid advocacy (assuming that a paid advocate follows the 5 pillars) is a sort of necessary evil to counter anti-X advocacy.  If I am correct, I can say (again!) that I completely hear you on the problem of anti-X activism on Wikipedia;  I became interested in the issues around genetically modified food a while ago, and found Wikipedia's coverage of those issues to be skewed by anti-GMO activist perspectives.  I spent the last year and a half working to bring those articles as close to good article status as I could and have been the subject of lots of personal attacks because of it.   Nonetheless, I still think that your strategy of welcoming paid advocacy as an antidote is sort of making a deal with the devil. I assume (and I could be wrong) that houses like Wiki-PR will work to make their clients look good in order to obtain and keep business.  The business model and mission is built on pleasing clients, and not on writing NPOV articles, which is our goal.  There is a fundamental COI there and I think that in order to survive, paid advocates will usually choose the interests of their clients over WIkipedia's interests, whenever a specific bit of content forces that conflict to the fore (which is the only time it really matters).  As for me, I still think we need a COI policy, like every responsible organization.  For our own sake, to retain the trust of the public, and to shut the door on Wikipedia-editing PR houses.  Thanks again for talking! Jytdog (talk) 13:08, 25 November 2013 (UTC)
 * PS. Interesting door you left open at the end there; I agree that if we ever required RW identities for editors, this would be a different  conversation.  But let's not dwell on hypotheticals.Jytdog (talk) 13:08, 25 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Oppose Tentative Opposeupdated 23:29, 13 November 2013 (UTC) This is a step in the right direction, but the proposed "if they are either" list should include something that covers all commercially-motivated COI. For example: "or otherwise financially benefits if their edit makes the subject of the article more or less successful or widely-adopted". This is to cover edits by people whose careers/investments are enhanced by positive perceptions of some brand/product/service, or who would benefit from presenting other brands/products/services negatively. For example, if your career is based on expertise in brand X, you shouldn't be allowed to promote it or denigrate its competitors without declaring your interest. - Pointillist (talk) 22:25, 12 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Pointillist, As the author of this policy states above, this proposal doesn't seek to eliminate every type of conflict of interest, just ones that there is consensus to ban. Several of the early proposals on paid editing tried to prohibit more types of financial conflicts, but they have largely been rejected. Your proposal is very aggressive and would likely reduce expertise in many fields. For example, there's fairly broad agreement that a wine reviewer for the New York Times should not edit the NYT Wikipedia page, but your proposal would potentially bar the wine reviewer from editing winery articles. DavidinNJ (talk) 00:01, 13 November 2013 (UTC)
 * this is more about products than concepts, and my immediate concerns are to do with technology expertise, especially in computer-related areas. For example, a lot of people in technical careers specialize in products from a small number of complementary vendors. When these products are successful, their expertise is in demand and their jobs are secure. But having focused on a single "stack", such people may have little knowledge of alternatives. If other approaches become more popular, they'll have to scramble to catch up. Their employers might be disinclined to re-train them, preferring to recruit new expertise from outside. So they'll clearly have a conflict of interest if they write about their stack or its rivals. Indeed technical contributors who have invested years acquiring expertise in X arguably have even greater motivation to promote X than the PR shills we usually think of as paid advocates. I can't think of a direct comparison in the alcohol/winery world, because wine reviewers tend to be generalists, but technical people who back the wrong horse for too long face their careers imploding and maybe never being employable for similar $$$ thereafter. That's what "financially benefits if their edit makes the subject of the article more or less successful or widely-adopted" is about. - Pointillist (talk) 00:29, 13 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Pointillist, I understand your point, and the same potential problem exists in non-technical areas. I've heard of alumni of business schools trying to improve the online image of their school in order to increase their potential future salaries. The author of movie, book, or wine review could use Wikipedia to indirectly draw attention to their own articles. The question is how to prevent people from using Wikipedia for financial gain without losing expertise. It's a difficult balance to obtain. For example, an article on a highly-specialized type of software or scientific device will likely be written by a person who currently or formerly worked in that industry, and who may be affected in the future by the performance or non-performance of the product. I think that we could add a prohibition on "editing with the intent of present or future financial gain." DavidinNJ (talk) 03:58, 13 November 2013 (UTC)
 * That's a good suggestion. We also need a way for good-faith contributors to say that they may have a COI. Ideally this needs to be attached to the actual edit in the history, and of course it needs to be done in a way that doesn't mean the editor has to "out" them-self in order to comply. I have no idea how this could be done. When it is a matter of direct employment perhaps WP:SOCK should allow an alternate account to be used as a signal, e.g. instead of just Pointillist I could be Pointillist at Google or Pointillist at NSA etc (not my actual affiliations). But this doesn't help with my main concern: names like Pointillist who has bet his career on stack X and knows nothing about stack Y aren't going to work. - Pointillist (talk) 08:14, 13 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I would see this proposal as an incremental step toward implementing a policy that may become more comprehensive with time. The point is to leverage the legal provisions against covert advertising and advocacy in a manner that echos and reinforces the statement by WMF recently that the Terms of Use prohibit editors from misrepresenting any relationship with an entity (i.e., misrepresent a COI).
 * The fact that the proposal is not comprehensive does not legislate against implementing the policy in an incremental manner.-- Ubikwit  連絡見学/迷惑 11:04, 13 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Oppose. Unenforceable and counterproductive. Those that it is aimed at and who wish to carry on editing will just not declare who they are.  And think about some of the things this would ban: a person would not be able to remove vandalism, insults, or obvious errors from their article.  And for crying out loud, banning roommates from editing?  That is just instruction creep gone mad.  Spinning  Spark  01:12, 13 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Spinningspark, Roommates are NOT banned from editing. Two roommates can both edit Wikipedia under this policy.  What this policy prohibits is one roommate creating or editing an article about the other roommate. No publication looking for unbiased work would allow a person to write an article about their roommate. DavidinNJ (talk) 23:23, 13 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes, but we're not like most institutions. I agree that a paper encyclopedia would be mad to let a contributor write about their roommate, but wikipedia |is not a paper encyclopedia. I might be the only person sufficiently motivated to start an article about my roommate - and, sure, although I try to use reliable sources it's a bit too positive to start with. But now at least there's an article, and other wikipedians can help to hammer out the POV later on. Quite honestly, there are very few editors who create an article (on any subject) perfect and free from POV from day one. We all have our little biases, whether it's an obvious 'conflict of interest' or just the fact that I have my likes and dislikes. But that's why it's a collaborative project - over time most of these problems get resolved. The danger with banning 'COI' editing right from day one is that you also prevent the opportunity for some good articles to arise and develop through the community process for which Wikipedia is rightly known.-- K orr u ski Talk 10:21, 25 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Oppose: Again, please focus on the edits, not the editor. In some cases we are glad to get support from people covered by this policy. Some articles about artists benefited from the contributions of the subject's descendants who donated pictures of the artwork along with the permission to put them under a free license. What should be the problem with their edits if they conform to existing policy and are checked against bias? --AFBorchert (talk) 19:42, 13 November 2013 (UTC)
 * In a perfect world focusing on the edits would be the key principle, but unfortunately it is very time-consuming to check other editors' contributions and examine their sources to see whether they genuinely support the claims in an article. I did this a couple of days ago at Pablo Rodriguez (computer scientist) and it is such a miserable process stamping [citation needed] and [not in citation given] after promotional puffery. In the real world focusing on edits is wasteful, because it takes so much more time to validate other people's edits than it does to author your own contributions. Furthermore, there's no co-ordination: maybe some other editors are also performing the same checks on this article, so your effort is duplicated and wasted. But if you don't check, perhaps no-one else will. Wikipedia has a limited and perhaps dwindling supply of experienced people who have an appetite for checking other users' contributions for bias. It is much more efficient to have a system aligned to editors' reputations. - Pointillist (talk) 22:31, 13 November 2013 (UTC)
 * If you want to have a system aligned to editors' reputations then this is no longer the Wikipedia anyone can edit. If you want to focus on the editors instead of the edits, you will get witch hunts. As you can see from WP:NPA it is one of the fundamental pillars to focus on the edits, not the editors: Comment on content, not on the contributor. --AFBorchert (talk) 08:01, 15 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I see your point but – with more articles and a perceived commercial advantage to manipulating them, yet fewer active editors and admins – ongoing quality assurance must be as efficient as possible. Manually checking other people's edits and sources is very inefficient. A middle ground might be feasible, in which "anyone" can still edit, plus there's a class of editors whose contributions aren't expected to need checking, like autopatrolled but specifically recognizing the account's history of making only neutral well-sourced edits. This distinction already exists informally to some extent: I'm more likely to check a contribution from an IP address than one from a recognized account name, especially in articles about technology products and companies. Don't you do the same? I'm not sure how WP:NPA is relevant. If you use "reputation" to help you skip some checks and give more time to others, you are still checking the content not the contributor. - Pointillist (talk) 09:28, 15 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Support. This is clear, and it does not go much farther than Conflict of interest (WP:COI), which says, "You should not create or edit articles about yourself, your family or friends."  The important difference is that this is concise.  It does not have wiggle room; ideally, it would also be a policy, while WP:COI is a guideline.  It also does not ban positive things like Wikipedians in Residency.  The British Museum could still pay a Resident to write about the War of the Roses using their collection.  They just couldn't pay them to write about the British Museum.  If people misuse certain provisions, we may have to clarify them.  For instance, it would be silly to say an Amazon.com employee can't write about Hershey since that's one of Amazon's multitude of business partners (a supplier).  Superm401 - Talk 05:36, 15 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Support. This would work. I wouldn't get into details such as roommates – "or in some other way closely connected" would do instead. Also, I would add a summary of the provision in WP:BLPFIGHT: "an editor who is involved in a significant off-wiki ... dispute with another individual ... should not edit that person's biography or other material about that person ...". But these kinds of issues can be sorted out if the proposal becomes policy. SlimVirgin (talk) 04:42, 16 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Support - When corporations or political candidates hire someone to edit their own Wikipedia pages it annihilates/invalidates/obliterates a core Wikipedia policy: that articles be written from a neutral point of view. Otherwise, the world’s most-used repository of human knowledge is not reliable. ```Buster Seven   Talk  07:54, 16 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Comment - I don't understand why this is separate from the existing conflict of interest guideline. -- John Broughton (♫♫) 22:52, 16 November 2013 (UTC)
 * WP:COI is too long, and worse, many parts are indecisively worded ("discouraged", "encouraged", "advised to disclose", "advised to refrain", etc.). It's also a guideline, not a policy.  The length and deliberately ambiguity mean we probably don't simply want to vote to promote WP:COI to policy.  This offers clear, concise wording without wiggle-room that can be promoted to policy. Superm401 - Talk 01:41, 17 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose: per AFBorchert. Chris Troutman  ( talk ) 05:48, 17 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose: per AFBorchert. It forbids common sense edits while at the same time rewarding non-disclosed COI.Agathoclea (talk) 05:47, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
 * To AFBorchert, Chris Troutman, and Agathoclea: My own experience is that editors with conflicts of interest disregard policies in favor of the so-called "truth". A few months ago, a new editor modified the article Old York Cellars to contradict information verified by published sources.  This editor stated that he formerly had worked at Old York Cellars for 10 years, and that the article had mistakes in it.  When myself and another editor requested sources, he cited himself and local newspaper articles from the 1980s that weren't on the internet.  The problem with permitting editing with conflict of interests is that sources are not always so easy to check.  I have access to an old newspaper archive, but many people do not. DavidinNJ (talk) 12:41, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Any serious work for articles requires sources that are not on the Internet. Most of my articles (at de-wp) were created from offline literature, sometimes after months of research and hunting of possible sources. Per AGF we should be able to trust such references unless proven otherwise. It is always possible to verify this, provided you have access to unrestricted library services like that of a university library. There are always editors around with such access who can verify such references, if necessary. WP:RX and its very resourceful German counterpart are good locations to find editors with excellent library access. If someone comes and changes an article in a way that appears to contradict its previous sources and contents, then this could be a good thing. The Wikipedia anyone can edit benefits from casual users who want to fix an article that appears to be incorrect. While you may need to verify and/or to rework the changes of a new user, it is always helpful to learn that relevant literature has not yet been evaluated for an article. --AFBorchert (talk) 06:28, 19 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Oppose - Once again, we are 'playing the man, not the ball'. If I happen to be well-informed about my notable brother-in-law and (unlike other wikipedians) motivated to do some good-quality work on his article, then why shouldn't I? If, on the other hand, I make unsourced or biased edits then revert them. We already have rules against that.-- K orr u ski Talk 16:51, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose. Even if it were enforceable, it would stop legitimate editing. —me_and 18:08, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
 *  Conditional Support if a section on administration is added (I suggested language below) Jytdog (talk) 02:11, 19 November 2013 (UTC) (changed to full support; administration section was allowed in.Jytdog (talk) 00:22, 20 November 2013 (UTC))
 * Oppose This proposal is limiting the editors and if it were to become policy, it would be pushing all possible COI editors underground. We need transparency, not unenforceable, restrictive policies. --FocalPoint (talk) 07:05, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose Persecute the edits, not the editors.  Konveyor   Belt  19:24, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Support for having clearly written that paid advocacy and Co. are not allowed, and this proposed policy does this. --Danh (talk) 21:16, 20 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Oppose As worded this policy would disallow any edits on articles of interest to the institution by a Wikipedian in Residence and if the institution was funding that position. Bad policy idea. --Mike Cline (talk) 19:22, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
 * User:Mike Cline, I've inserted an exemption for Wikipedians in Residence. Does that alleviate your concerns? Coretheapple (talk) 20:04, 21 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Actually no, for a couple of reason. This language A Wikipedia COI is an incompatibility between the aim of Wikipedia, which is to produce a neutral, reliably sourced encyclopedia, and the aims of an individual editor. COI editing involves contributing to Wikipedia to promote an editor's own interests, including an editor's business or financial interests, or those of an editor's external relationships, such as with family, friends or employers. When an external relationship undermines, or could reasonably be said to undermine, an editor's role as a Wikipedian, that editor has a conflict of interest. sets an unequivocal standard. It says anyone with a COI is essentially incapable of providing NPOV, reliably sources content.  This language Edits on articles of interest to the institution by a Wikipedian in Residence are permitted, whether or not the institution is funding that position. say oh by the way, if you are a paid "Wikipedian in Residence", your COI can be ignored because ????. We've created a special case of COI editor essential exempt from COI rules.  The second reason is even more germane.  A Wikipedian in Residence is just a title, not officially bestowed by anyone or any body of authority.  Anyone, at any institution or organization could be designated a "Wikipedian in Residence" and thus be exempt from this policy.  Still not good policy --Mike Cline (talk) 20:21, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Mike, I rewrote the intro because I agree with you that an editor could possibly write a good article even with a conflict of interest. I inserted language that defines what a conflict of interest is.  As for the Wikipedian in Residence, that's a concept that the WMF created, and I do think we need a separate discussion about how to handle their edits.  DavidinNJ (talk) 21:30, 21 November 2013 (UTC)

(restore indent) What if we return to Jytdog's version? It's fresh language, and I like it. It's lofty, it associates Wikipedia with that great world out there. Mike, what do you think of this?

Wikipedia is a public good, created by an online community interested in building a high-quality encyclopedia, and hosted by the nonprofit Wikimedia Foundation. While Wikipedia's motto is "the free encyclopedia that anyone can edit", there are limits to what editors can do, which are expressed in policies governing content and user behavior. See Wikipedia's Five Pillars and the policy on sock puppets.

Conflicts of interest ("COI") policies are used extensively in the for-profit and nonprofit sectors, and are essential for good governance. Our COI policy exists to regulate the use of this public good for private or personal gain, and provides guidance for editors with conflicts of interest, establishes methods for the community to handle situations where conflicts of interest arise, and helps maintain the trust of the public in the integrity of our articles.

A Wikipedia COI is an incompatibility between the aim of Wikipedia, which is to produce a neutral, reliably sourced encyclopedia, and the aims of an individual editor. COI editing involves contributing to Wikipedia to promote an editor's own interests, including an editor's business or financial interests, or those of an editor's external relationships, such as with family, friends or employers. When an external relationship undermines, or could reasonably be said to undermine, an editor's role as a Wikipedian, that editor has a conflict of interest.

This policy addresses a form of COI in which persons and organizations seek to gain a commercial advantage from the Wikipedia brand, thereby profiting from the substantial time and effort invested by the Wikipedia volunteer community. Such editing can be seriously counterproductive, and can damage the reputation of the intended beneficiaries. That is because this kind of activity has come under heavy criticism from the press and general public, and is widely viewed as inconsistent with Wikipedia's educational mission.

(end of quote). --Coretheapple (talk) 21:49, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I'm not going to speak for Mike, but from my perspective the problem with that intro is the assumption that a COI editor inherently will be involved in advocacy: COI editing involves contributing to Wikipedia to promote an editor's own interests, including an editor's business or financial interests, or those of an editor's external relationships, such as with family, friends or employers. That's not necessarily true. Part of the reason that governments and corporations have COI policies is the perception of impropriety. Maybe a judge could be completely neutral when his brother is a litigant, but we don't allow it because (a) many people cannot be neutral in such circumstances even if they think they can be, and (b) even if they are neutral, observers won't believe it thus undermining the credibility of the court.  The same applies to Wikipedia.  If companies are paying people to edit articles about them or if people are creating articles about themselves, Wikipedia loses its credibility.  In my modified intro, I remove that sentence, and include a general definition of a conflict of interest.


 * Oh,OK. Sorry, didn't mean to bypass you. I assumed you were on board with it. Not sure I share you opinion of it, frankly, but I can't really focus on it at the moment. Coretheapple (talk) 02:59, 22 November 2013 (UTC)
 * That's fine. I've been busy, and didn't really take part in the discussion about the intro. I'm going to revise it to restore Jytdog's lead sentence with its lofty language, but leave the material on the definition of COI that I added. DavidinNJ (talk) 04:04, 22 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Mike Cline, the wording has changed over time, so your opposition may or may not still apply. Which text in particular do you believe forbids the Wikipedian in Residence (WIR) program?  I believe the current text allows it, since it is not in violation of any the numbered points (unless the actual article being edited is the WIR organization, e.g. British Museum, which would indeed be bad practice). Superm401 - Talk 07:48, 25 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Still opposed because this is such bad policy in principle, let alone the vague language that will lead to nothing IMHO but inquisitions when someone has grief about an editor. They'll pull the COI card and cite this vague policy in doing so. (I will put together list of plausible scenarios and how these vagaries might play out below later today). Bottom line, we should be evaluating contributions against NPOV, RS, etc. first. Not creating a playing field where its OK for the COI police to pounce anytime they feel like it with impunity irregardless of the quality of contribution. COI can be a big problem, but trying to regulate it in this vague way is just bad policy. --Mike Cline (talk) 12:17, 25 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Oppose per AFBorchert. We need to make it easier to work with us, not create more rules forcing COI editors under ground. Monty  845  22:34, 22 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose. I am against paid editing in advancement of corporate interests and have supported a previous proposal to that end. But this policy would not create a sufficient exemption for individuals seeking to remove factually incorrect information about themselves, as is allowed now under WP:BLP. It would allow people to remove only vandalism and libelous content. That's not enough. Figureofnine (talk • contribs) 18:22, 26 November 2013 (UTC)
 * The current conflict of interest guidelines has a passage regarding removing incorrect information; does this align with your thinking? isaacl (talk) 18:47, 26 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes, it does. Figureofnine (talk • contribs) 21:10, 26 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose per WP:BLPEDIT and WP:BLPSELF. BLP issues are, I feel, of greater importance than COI. furthermore, a COI brightline policy would be redundant to WP:DISRUPT and/or WP:NPOV. if an editor has a COI, he or she must follow the same rules as anyone else, and are not problematic if they do. we already have policies prohibiting POV pushing and other such forms of editing. a rule specifically for COI seems to go against WP:BURO... -- Aunva6talk - contribs  05:57, 27 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose. We need to focus on harmful edits, not encouraging users to suspect each other's motives. I am yet to be convinced that an experienced, top-quality and professional writer who has been paid to write a top-quality article that abides by all our polices should be blocked. Biased editing occurs all across Wikipedia everyday - some of it is quite subliminal. People tend to work on topics they like - pop stars, football teams, countries, schools, religions, etc - and in the process of editing they may consciously or unconsciously move the article toward positive comments. I don't think we should be proposing any form of policy which restricts or sanctions editors merely because they are editing articles they may have an emotional interest in. Rather, lets ensure our existing guidelines and procedures can efficiently deal with biased editing when we encounter it. To put it simply - blocking an editor for writing a featured article simply because they have been paid to do so is a Bad Idea; blocking an editor because they are fucking up an article, regardless of if they are paid or not, is a Good Idea.  SilkTork  ✔Tea time  11:02, 28 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose While I'm entirely sure that this was made in good faith, all these paid editing proposals are beginning to feel like forum shopping. They're essentially all unenforceable and focused on contributors over content, and they've all been rejected for those reasons. Just let it go. --BDD (talk) 21:46, 28 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose, even though I would like to support something like this. However, I cannot support this, per the issue I raise below at . --Tryptofish (talk) 00:21, 29 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Nope - Per DGG, An outright prohibition will not work. All it will do is make things more confusing and complicated for BLP subjects and companies who want to play by the rules, while black-hat companies will continue to operate. Unless we block based only on suspicion, it's basically unenforceable as providing any hard proof would violate WP:OUTING. The only way to put a dent in that practice is to make it possible for white-hat organizations to operate with proper disclosure. Having to propose anything other than vandalism reversions on the talk page is too impractical to be useful. And the fact that it needs so many examples of things that don't count as a COI means the wording is probably fatally flawed. If you can come up with 4+ edge cases that need to be clarified before it even goes into effect, that's not a good sign. Mr.Z-man 19:18, 29 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Support A big step in the right direction. Wikipedia is far too lax on COI editing; which is a cancer on the project that needs to be reigned in soon or it will grow out of control. For the past few years we have erroneously enlarged and abused policies such as outing and harassment, "anyone can edit", and NPOV, distorting their original purposes and spirit to build a wall that prevents much-needed scrutiny.  Contra most editors above, we absolutely need to be vigilant and apply common-sense scruples on who may edit which articles.  Anyone is free to be an editor here, but nobody should be allowed to edit our pages with nefarious intent. "Legitimate" editing ends where a COI begins. Promoting yourself or hiring another to do so is unethical, dishonest, and brings discredit on the project as a whole. This proposal is far from perfect, but is the best one proposed so far and an adequate starting place.


 * A few commentators above seem to forget that a COI only occurs when an editor's mission is contrary to the mission of the encyclopedia. Spammers, promoters, SEO manipulators, POV changers et al. fall under this category, but not, for example, Wikipedians in residence.  Them From  Space  00:50, 30 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Note the Wikipedian in Residence page states that Wikipedians in residence should avoid conflicts of interest by not editing pages directly relating to the organization. Editing Wikipedia on behalf of the organization is conspicuously absent from the list of characteristics. isaacl (talk) 01:42, 30 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Oppose Editors who behave problematically are the problem, not editors with a COI. It is should be acceptable for the subject of an article to edit their article so long as they abide by our policies. We should encourage them to disclose their COI, and to lean on the talk page heavily, particularly for contentious edits. We should not bar them from contributing directly. Not only would barring them increase the backlog on, but it would also discourage editors from disclosing their COI, since doing so then limits their ability to participate. We should not sanction editors who contribute positively based on a fear they may not some day.  &mdash; Jess &middot; &Delta;&hearts; 02:03, 1 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose - Focus on the edits, not the editor. So long as the cult of anonymity reigns — where IP editing is allowed, anonymous editing encouraged, multiple accounts proliferate, there is no real name registration or sign-in-to-edit in place, and where so-called "outing" is regarded as a punishable wiki-crime — this is absolutely unenforceable. You want to take a hardline ban approach to paid editing? Get rid of the cult of anonymity and count me on your team. Obviously, that is not forthcoming any time soon. Until then: concentrate on edits and take action against editors violating NPOV for whatever reason. And leave the paid editors who contribute uncontroversial, useful, NPOV content alone. Carrite (talk) 05:34, 1 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose It's not at all clear to me that people or organizations should under no circumstances be allowed to edit their articles. I think editors with a COI should be strongly encouraged to edit in a transparent and constructive manner, and being explicit about a higher bar of standards for editors who have a potential conflict of interest would go a long way towards clarifying policy.  But an absolute topic ban before any edits take place is unsupportable. aprock (talk) 00:11, 2 December 2013 (UTC)
 * support as a first step. Hobit (talk) 15:05, 2 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Strong support This policy does a great job of providing clear guidelines that are already pretty well adopted by the Wikipedia community. As for enforceability, our three core content policies are often unenforceable. We have thousands of articles that are not notable, are unverified, and not neutral. But shouldn't these still be policies? I think so. -- Ross Hill  •  Talk  •  Need Help?  • 00:59, 3 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose': per AFBorchert, Agathoclea and more generally use of WP:COI the edits, not the editors. Babakathy (talk) 11:19, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Support Well worded and clear. Even if it is difficult to sometimes uphold it will improve the reputation of Wikipedia as we are at least attempting to deal with the problem. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 02:56, 5 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose. So as a university employee I am barred from writing any article about any university because they're all theoretically in competition with my employer? Far too broad. —David Eppstein (talk) 06:59, 5 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose, unenforceable and only encourages people to assume the worst about editors when there is already enough of that going around. Sportfan5000 (talk) 02:27, 8 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose This doesn't seem any more coherent or sensible than the other proposals. Enforcement would therefore be subjective and so would encourage favouritism and other unethical considerations. Warden (talk) 21:25, 8 December 2013 (UTC)

Family member
"Family member" here is undefined. Does this mean that (for example) no descendant of King John of England could write about him? (I picked him because 42 of the 43 people who have been president of the U.S. can trace their ancestry back to him.) And if not, what precisely does it mean? - Jmabel &#124; Talk 03:25, 13 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Family member is a relative who you've met in your life even if the person is deceased now. DavidinNJ (talk) 04:01, 13 November 2013 (UTC)
 * So under this policy my writing the Lena Levine article would have been considered inappropriate, and indicating on the talk page that I was related to her (as I did in accord with current COI policy) would not have been sufficient, correct? - Jmabel &#124; Talk 05:07, 13 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Jmabel, Our COI policy prohibits writing about your family and friends per Conflict_of_interest, and that rule is not new. That being said, WP:COI is a guideline not a policy so it doesn't really matter.  This proposed policy would absolutely ban writing about your family. DavidinNJ (talk) 14:10, 13 November 2013 (UTC)
 * It seems to me "immediate" or "nuclear" family should cover what you have in mind. Distant family isn't where our main problems lie; and we're all related at some level.  –  SJ  +  20:19, 15 November 2013 (UTC)
 * SJ, I agree. If a person wants to write an article about their fifth cousin, twice removed, who lives six states away, I couldn't care less.  I didn't use the word "nuclear" or "immediate" because that might lead to some degree of confusion. DavidinNJ (talk) 06:25, 16 November 2013 (UTC)

Conflict of interests outside of Wikipedia
Most organizations, government bodies, and businesses have policies on conflict of interests. With all such policies, four things are true: (a) they can be hard to enforce; (b) there are gray areas with low-level and indirect conflicts; (c) despite this conflict of interest rules are vitally necessary; (d) most people will follow the policy if it is reasonable. The same is true on Wikipedia. If we want Wikipedia to have articles written from a neutral point of view, we must prohibit editing for financial gain. This proposal is easy to understand and limited in scope so there are less gray areas and most editors will comply with it. We have developed a method to investigate sockpuppetry, so we can design a way to investigate conflicts of interest. DavidinNJ (talk) 04:21, 13 November 2013 (UTC)

Intention to close
Okay, so when this vote and discussion got started, it was the seventh simultaneous vote on roughly the same question. (I'm including "Proposal number 99999: Declare that you do paid editing" in this version of WP:AN ... that discussion, and the section it's in, were very active if not widely advertised.) I've closed 3 of the 7 so far; I'm leaving the main two discussions alone.

Some call what we're doing here "votes" and some say they're "discussions" ... but it has to be both a vote and a discussion. If it's not a discussion, then it's much too easy to game the system, since voting is completely anonymous ... and of course, the free exchange of ideas, the attempt to find and gain consensus, is the most important thing that's happening here. But if the result clearly disrespects the voting, Wikipedians begin to feel disenfranchised, and stop participating. So this is, in part, a vote. Some people feel strongly about the issue of paid editing, and may notice this page on the "Paid Editing Proposals" template or notice the RfC, and come vote. But most Wikipedians spend most of their time going about their business, and have limited time for project-space discussions; most don't invest the time to show up for seven different discussions on largely the same question, and the time to carefully examine the changes, and the time to repeat the things they've said the previous six times. Therefore, when I'm closing, I'm going to be looking at votes and comments made in the previous six discussions (which have been largely critical), in addition to the votes and comments on this page. This may or may not result in an early close; I'll have to see whether consensus develops that the changes in this proposal overcome previous objections. Thoughts on any of this are welcome. - Dank (push to talk) 19:54, 13 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Also: this edit (a few minutes ago) changes the proposal (which may be a good thing, we'll have to see, but be aware that the more changes there are while voting is ongoing, the harder it is to prove consensus for the final version, unless previous supporters specifically okay the change). - Dank (push to talk) 21:19, 13 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Oppose Closure Proposals should be a given an appropriate time period to be evaluated. The default time period for policy and request for comment discussions on Wikipedia is 30 days, and this proposal has only been open for 4 days. The only way that I would endorse an earlier closure is per WP:SNOW if there was minimal support. This proposal has a number of supporters, and would benefit from further discussion. DavidinNJ (talk) 23:16, 13 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Oppose early closure Let's give this more time and add DavidinNJ's "editing with the intent of present or future financial gain" to the project page as an option. I'd welcome suggestions for how editors could/should declare potential COI. - Pointillist (talk) 23:32, 13 November 2013 (UTC)

Alternative
I think rather than closing each discussion on its own, what is needed is a refactoring of these proposals into separable elements:
 * Definitions (COI, serious COI?, paid advocacy, ...)
 * Specific issues affecting p.a.
 * Specific examples of, and exceptions to, p.a.
 * Limits on editing for COI, specific limits for p.a.

I see individual proponents missing or not paying attention to one part; presenting an idea that addresses a piece of all four, and getting feedback that says "you got this subpart wrong". The things addressed uncontroversially in some proposals, but controversially in others, include:
 * 1) Overbroad definitions of COI ('friendship', 'any relationship')
 * 2) Overbroad definitions of paid advocacy ('any financial interest', language that includes subject experts)
 * 3) Overbroad examples of p.a. (covering some typical GLAM use cases)
 * 4) Overbroad limits (no exception for simple factual corrections)
 * 5) No distinction between types of COI (describing a standard that may be useful for PR farms, but applying it to anyone writing about a product made by a former company's competitors, or about a fifth cousin)
 * 6) No reference made to existing COI guidelines (e.g.: why discuss this here, rather than discussing those guidelines?  what makes these proposals different?)

Addressing one element at a time would be clearer. – SJ  +  22:16, 15 November 2013 (UTC)


 * One of the goals of this proposal was to be simple to understand and less broad in its prohibitions. I agree that we may need a definition section to clarify some gray areas, but other than that this policy meets your aforementioned requirements. DavidinNJ (talk) 06:35, 16 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Subject experts are not generally paid by the subject of the article, but work in a field related to the subject of the article with respect to which they are an expert on the topic matter thereof.-- Ubikwit  連絡見学/迷惑 21:26, 16 November 2013 (UTC)


 * I think "paid to edit the article" makes sense, but simply "paid" may not. As written, this could imply that anyone who has ever gotten a government grant cannot edit an article about that government.  What about being paid via a passthrough - being staff at a government-sponsored institution?  How far does dilution extend?  –  SJ  +  02:51, 17 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Some degree of common sense is needed in interpreting any rules. If you want to be really nit-picky, a person who receives any government benefit cannot write an article about the government in question. I disagree with using paid to edit as that would change the context of the prohibition, and create a loophole that didn't exist before.  I think it would be better to have examples that illustrate what's permitted, and what's not. DavidinNJ (talk) 04:07, 17 November 2013 (UTC)

Question about this policy
There's one scenario I'm wondering about when it comes to this and similar proposals. Let's say Editor X is an employee of Corporation A. He is not paid to edit Wikipedia, nor is he directed to do so by his superiors. If Editor X intends to be neutral, edits during his non-work hours, and receives no compensation for his edits, can he edit articles relating to Corporation A? This should be made clear in the policy. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 173.190.170.93 (talk) 07:14, 18 November 2013 (UTC)

Administering the policy
I put this same note on an old discussion of a former proposal, here....

This draft lacks clarity on how Wikipedia will administer this policy and several opposers above, opposed because there is no clarity in how to administer it. Providing a policy on paid editing/COI is very important and I fully support it. But for this to be a useful tool for the community, the policy needs to clearly describe a) what an editor should do if he or she suspects another editor of violating the policy. But currently the draft says nothing about what editors should do about other editors they suspect of violating the policy; it should also make clear to editors how not to handle suspicions of COI editing, and possibly provide sanctions for inappropriate expressions of such suspicions.   As many have pointed out here, we need to preserve and underline WP:AGF -- to do that and avoid witch hunts, and to ensure that investigations are fair and swift, we need to provide clear guidance about what to, and what not to do, when editors have concerns about other editors.

Concretely, I propose that a section called "Administration" be added as follows:


 * If an editor has concerns that another editor may be violating this policy, the concerned editor should politely and without accusation, call attention to this policy at the subject editor's Talk page. If the behavior of the subject editor does not change, the only appropriate forum for raising concerns is the Conflict of Interest Noticeboard (COIN).  The concerned editor must notify the subject editor of the posting at COIN and must present specific edits that raise the concern.  Administrators at COIN shall a) use appropriate Wikipedia tools (checkuser, etc) to determine whether the subject editor has violated this policy. may have a commercial motive; b) interact with the subject editor offline and confidentially in order to obtain disclosure of the subject editor's interest in the topic; c) review the subject editor's edits; and d) post a summary of findings at COIN and state relevant sanctions (as described below), if any.


 * Editors who have concerns that another editor may be violating this policy and do not follow the procedure above, may themselves become subject of sanctions.  Civility, with its assumption of good faith, is a pillar of Wikipedia and this policy remains subject to that pillar.  If an editor discloses a financial interest, it is expected that others will scrutinize the changes made by the editor while not commenting on the editor. Hounding of editors due to their actual or suspected financial interests is not allowed and hounding behavior is subject to sanctions.  Furthermore, Wikipedia's "outing" policy expressly prohibits the disclosure of personal information of any editor, including editors who have disclosed a financial interest related to their participation in Wikipedia.

There you go. Thanks for considering this.Jytdog (talk) 02:10, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Jytdog, I like it, except that I would modify the last sentence of the first paragraph to say the following: Administrators at COIN shall use appropriate Wikipedia tools (checkuser, etc) to determine whether the subject editor has violated this policy. I would not add the other information as it might ties the hands of admins, and over time we may develop other methods of investigating COI. Feel free to add this new section to the proposed policy. DavidinNJ (talk) 14:56, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I made the change above, and will copy the amended text into the proposal. Thank you! Jytdog (talk) 16:09, 19 November 2013 (UTC)

Agents of the subject
In reviewing this proposal, I noticed that it did not explicitly prohibit agents of the subject from paying editors. I added "anyone acting on behalf of the subject." That just clarifies things; I trust it shouldn't be controversial. Coretheapple (talk) 22:37, 19 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I agree with this addition. DavidinNJ (talk) 00:39, 20 November 2013 (UTC)

Significant Connection
I removed the new prohibition against editing by someone with a significant connection to the subject of the article. I'm not sure what the term "significant connection" means, and it seems very vague and open-ended. Specifically, what kind of connections are we trying to prohibit here? DavidinNJ (talk) 00:42, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * The criterion was derived from this comment. The idea, as I understand it, is to generalize a bit more than "roommate". Some people may rent rooms in a common boarding house without particularly spending any time together, while some neighbours may be quite friendly with each other and so have a potential conflict of interest. isaacl (talk) 01:34, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Isaac, What you say makes sense, but I think we may be entering the world of the un-legislatable. Can an alumnus of a university write an article their alma mater, or is that a significant connection? What if the mayor of my town is notable, and I've met him or her a couple times.  Is that a significant connection? I think if this policy is enacted, that term has the potential of causing a lot of disagreement. That being said, I am open to stricter COI limits if those limits are well-defined (e.g., prohibition if legal conflict with subject). DavidinNJ (talk) 02:32, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Some commenters have expressed concerns about the looseness of the term "family" (if, as you've expressed, any family member you've met is off limits, then perhaps a mayor you've met is also a possible conflict of interest) and "roommate". My suggestion is to look for some criteria that emphasizes the nature of the connection between the editor and the subject, and doesn't rely solely on the superficial label for the connection. ("Roommate" to me is particularly tenuous, as there are many more categories where there seems to be a roughly similar chance for conflict of interest, such as "neighbour", "colleague", "teammate", "classmate", "friend", and "parent of child's friend".) isaacl (talk) 03:00, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I decide to read some non-Wikipedia conflict of interest policies to see how various organizations handle it - American Medical Association and British Charity Commission. Most organizations view it as a conflict of interest if there has been monetary payment or the person is a family member. I don't see "roommate" listed in any non-Wikipedia COI policy, so maybe we should remove it.  As for family members, I find it to be a tricky area because people interact differently with relatives - some families are very close, some aren't, and with Wikipedia being a global website, the possibilities abound. What criteria are you thinking of that emphasizes the nature of the connection. DavidinNJ (talk) 03:53, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Perhaps something along the following lines: are personally acquainted with the article's subject to an extent that it is a strain to maintain a dispassionate attitude while editing the article. isaacl (talk) 08:45, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I removed the word "roommate". DavidinNJ (talk) 10:58, 20 November 2013 (UTC)

This is the only game in town
I just wanted to mention that the two other proposals on this issue have failed. The oldest one was closed today.. The "paid advocacy policy proposal" also was closed recently. Are there any others I've overlooked? Coretheapple (talk) 22:40, 20 November 2013 (UTC)

University professors
I was surprised to see no exemption added for university professors editing on their field of expertise. While I don't see how anyone could possibly object to that kind of editing, I notice that this keeps on being raised by opponents of these kinds of strictures as a kind of hobgoblin-type menace that would be created by strictures on paid editing, so I added language from a post by Jimbo to deal with the subject. Coretheapple (talk) 16:36, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
 * The exemption makes sense, but I modified the verbiage a bit. DavidinNJ (talk) 18:16, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Yeah, much better. Coretheapple (talk) 18:21, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Hmmm...note Mike Cline's concern in the RfC about the Wikipedian in Residence program. I think that maybe Jimbo was referring to this in his phraseology. Anyway, I'll try to deal with this in the text. Coretheapple (talk) 19:59, 21 November 2013 (UTC)

WMF cease and desist letter
Cross-posting this from Jimbo's talk page: I just noticed on one of the many paid editing discussion pages that the Foundation's lawyer today wrote a strong letter, with sweeping language, to Wiki-PR. See

The way I read this letter, it appears that paid advocacy editing is already prohibited by the Wikimedia Foundation, which owns Wikipedia. It also leaves the door open to further action by Wikipedia and the Foundation. Moreover, in an Oct. 21 letter, the Foundation's chairperson already stated that paid advocacy editing is prohibited : "Unlike a university professor editing Wikipedia articles in their area of expertise, paid editing for promotional purposes, or paid advocacy editing as we call it, is extremely problematic. We consider it a 'black hat' practice. Paid advocacy editing violates the core principles that have made Wikipedia so valuable for so many people."

Therefore, what I think needs to be done is to reduce the daylight between Wikipedia and the Foundation, and reflect the above principles, which already are a kind of "unwritten rule," albeit one that has been explicitly stated by the Foundation and may already be incorporated in the Foundation's terms of use. Whether they are or not, I think that this policy, if it is adopted, would simplify matters tremendously. Coretheapple (talk) 23:17, 19 November 2013 (UTC)


 * CoreApple, What's interesting is that the letter says that Wiki-PR violated the Terms of Use, but the Terms of Use do not mention paid editing or conflict of interest. DavidinNJ (talk) 00:51, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * The letter highlights a key applicable passage in section 4 of the terms of use. isaacl (talk) 01:36, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Okay. If they engaged in sockpuppetry, then they did violate the terms of use.  However, if a company was to engage in paid editing from a single account, I don't see anything in the terms of use prohibiting it. DavidinNJ (talk) 02:11, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I don't either. It's possible something is buried in there, but I don't have the time or the inclination to puzzle it out. I'm frankly losing patience with the Delphic and inconsistent character of what has emerged from Jimbo and the the Foundation over this. Volunteers have put thousands of man-hours into this, and it all seems like a big waste of time. Coretheapple (talk) 04:16, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * The WMF has typically deferred to the individual communities of each Wiki to define the policies that their contributors must follow, beyond some common principles and polices. For better or worse, Wikipedia currently makes decisions following a consensus approach, which requires a lot of collaborative discussion in an asynchronous manner, and so takes a lot of time. The key is to shepherd the discussion in a way that allows for incremental steps to be agreed upon and taken, making forward progress. It's the slow but steady approach that will gradually evolve the community norms. isaacl (talk) 08:52, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes, ordinarily. But that hasn't happened with paid editing. As I understand it, the community has grappled with paid editing, on and off, since 2005. At a certain point, Wikipedia's owners have to step in and admit failure of the ordinary processes to deal with this problem. I think that this policy we're working on here, as it reads at this time, would be a good step forward. It's clear, it's simple, it's common sensical. But it runs counter to the general sentiment in the community and thus I doubt very much that it has any chance of being adopted. That means that either nothing is done, or a policy that makes things worse is adopted (e.g., permitting paid editing if there is disclosure and "not advocacy," which is meaningless as nobody every openly engages in advocacy unless they're utter fools). That puts the ball back in the court of the WMF. Several days ago Jimbo said that the board was coming out with a statement. Then, yesterday, there was a statement, regarding the letter that we're discussing, but it's not clear if that was the statement he was mentioning. So as I say, I've run out of patience. I think that what you'll see is that this proposal will be swamped by the Paid Editing Lobby before it gets any chance of being enacted in anything resembling its current form. Coretheapple (talk) 17:03, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Consensus is a slow process; I think there is a general sentiment to prevent direct editing by those with a financial conflict of interest, but there is disagreement on what approach would improve upon the current situation. Regarding advocacy, I've seen a lot of open advocacy; for example, there are many editors who argue for mentioning some occurrence in order to bring it more visibility. As with many potential improvements to Wikipedia, investment of time from conscientious editors would help move matters forward (whether it is through careful discussion and analysis of policy proposals, thorough vetting of administrator candidates, or considered review of article changes and proposed changes, for example). So perhaps a good approach is to figure out what types of people could help satisfy these needs, and how they can be recruited to join the Wikipedia community. isaacl (talk) 18:31, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Just today, an RfC on a paid advocacy proposal was closed as not adopted. It would have made the current situation worse by allowing direct editing by paid advocates. Yet even that proposal was rejected, because the disclosure aspect of it was considered too much by the majority of persons participating. That kind of thing leaves one with little hope that there will be a change in the overwhelming support that paid editing has within Wikipedia. Coretheapple (talk) 19:11, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * As has been expressed by a few people, having the multiple proposals being discussed in parallel made it difficult for them to gain traction. It is an example of how unstructured discussion can fail to concentrate everyone's efforts towards consensus. User:Beeblebrox/The perfect policy proposal has good advice on how to guide a policy proposal; PC2012 and WP:Requests for adminship/2013 RfC illustrate how the community can be guided to converge to agreement. (I know some people think the RFA 2013 RfCs were a bit of a bust. While it's true the implemented proposals did not have as much impact as hoped, I think the overall process worked well: ideas were generated, agreement was reached to try some, and they were attempted. It would be great if the community could iterate through ideas, learn the best aspects of each, and try to take advantage of these best aspects to further improve the system.) And if you think the existing community is not engaged in the way you'd like, then perhaps it would be good to invest some effort to develop and expand the community to be more engaged. isaacl (talk) 19:45, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes, that may be so, about the fragmented nature of the discussions. However, I don't believe better organization would have resulted in a different outcome. As for expanding the community, that's hard. When I mention the idea to people I know I get little interest. In my case, I was thinking of editing a while back, created a user name, but only motivated myself to do anything a few years later. Coretheapple (talk) 19:51, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Both of the examples I provided featured a lot of diverse opinions that had to be carefully sifted through to thresh out the common ground that could be agreed upon. As I think there are some fundamental agreements with this issue, I do believe at least some small consensus can be formed, which can be a starting point. isaacl (talk) 20:01, 20 November 2013 (UTC)

Isaac and Core, The fundamental problem that I see is not a lack of consensus among editors who want paid editing to end, but editors who are opposed to any restrictions on COI or paid editing. Look at this proposal - we've been able to come to agreements on administration, agents, negative connections, and just about every other issue that has come up. However, in spite of that consensus we currently have 7 people who support the proposal, 2 tentatively opposed, and 9 completely opposed. Increasingly, I feel as that I'm wasting my time, and this will need to be something imposed by the WMF like the rules on copyright and child porn. DavidinNJ (talk) 20:52, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes, exactly. You've eloquently summed up my frustrations on this subject. That's why I generally have restricted my participation in this subject to Jimbo's talk page, in the hope that posting there will have the greatest impact in terms of getting the Foundation to act. Indeed, I've found that Jimbo is sympathetic. Though sometimes his posts are ambiguous, and he does not always respond to questions asking for clarification, his position has been clear and forthright in recent days. But I'm growing weary of the constantly efforts by paid editing apologists, and some who aren't apologists but just clueless, to obfuscate, confuse, and throw in red herrings. It's a frustrating process and I've pretty much thrown in the towel, pending action by the Foundation. I agree that it is fast becoming a futile exercise and a waste of time. Coretheapple (talk) 21:02, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Looking at the opposes again, I don't see general opposition to "any restrictions on conflict of interest" editing. Some of them do not believe the proposal will improve matters; a few think that emphasis should be placed on the edits themselves rather than the editor (which is a view in support of avoiding conflict of interest editing). Thus I believe there is a common ground that can be achieved. isaacl (talk) 21:21, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * But Isaac, what you've just described are "dealbreakers," fundamental philosophical opposition. I see no common ground here whatsoever. On the contrary, it is a totally different conception of how Wikipedia should be policed. While editors don't usually come out and say "I am against regulation of COI," that is what it amounts to. Coretheapple (talk) 21:27, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * One thing to keep in mind, with regard to these discussions generally, is that we have no way of gauging how much they are influenced by paid editors. Indeed, Jimbo himself made that point in one of the early discussions. He said: "every discussion that arises brings in paid advocates making lots of noise and engaging in bad argumentation to cloud the issue." I didn't know what he was referring to at the time, but now I do, and I've had a bellyful of it. Coretheapple (talk) 21:31, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Everyone has expressed support for avoiding conflict of interest editing, so there is a fundamental philosophical agreement on this point. Rather than placing labels on those who have expressed their concerns, I think it would be good to continue trying to find creative ways to express the areas of agreement succinctly. Maybe this means reworking the existing Conflict of interest guideline; maybe something else. For better or worse, unless Wikipedia moves away from a consensus-based decision model, changes are only going to be made by those who work patiently at them. isaacl (talk) 21:41, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Regarding the motivations of those expressing concerns, personally, I feel Ockham's razor applies: I appreciate the concerns raised and feel they are reasonable, and so I don't believe it is necessary to look for underlying reasons beyond what were expressed. I do agree that in the typical open Wikipedia discussion format, it's easy for any given editor to swamp the conversation. This unfortunately derails many of not most of the contentious topics in the Wikipedia community. This is one of the reasons why I think a more structured discussion (such as the ones I pointed you towards) would be helpful. isaacl (talk) 21:50, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * What's disturbed me about some of the comments in these various proposals is that, in fact, they are not opposed to COI editing, only COI edits that are outwardly inappropriate, and have no concerns about compensation to editors whatsoever. I haven't done a historical survey, but I would not be surprised if that has been the general objection over the years. Jimbo appears to be opposed to paid editing, but has deferred to the consensus model. However, it has not been effective and is unlikely to be, and it has now been eight years, at least. Other editors who have been involved in this discussion in the past have stayed out of this one out of sheer fatigue. The possible paid aspect that Jimbo referred to is what makes this issue different from the others; it stacks the deck against change. Coretheapple (talk) 21:55, 20 November 2013 (UTC)

isaacl, to test our your hypothesis that a consensus or compromise is possible I've inserted language intended to address the concerns of editors who have good-faith problems with this proposal, such as the impact upon academics. Let's see if people opposing this as a policy are willing to compromise or to work to fix this policy rather than to ditch it. In the past it has been impossible, but maybe not this time. Coretheapple (talk) 20:11, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I think a desirable approach would be to break down the issues from the various points of view, and look for areas of agreement that can be used as a basis for a consensus agreement (similar to what was done for pending changes). While adding another bullet point to this proposal can help spark discussion, I don't think it will serve as proof or disproof of the ability for the various parties to converge onto a new policy. isaacl (talk) 20:24, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Well time will tell if there is interest in creating a proposal or just defeating it. Coretheapple (talk) 21:10, 21 November 2013 (UTC) As if it wasn't perfectly obvious. Coretheapple (talk) 22:41, 22 November 2013 (UTC)

Include intro statement saying why we have this policy?
This policy proposal lacks an intro, that explains what it is for and why have it. I propose adding to the beginning something like the following:


 * Wikipedia is a public good, created by an online community interested in building a high-quality encyclopedia, and hosted by the nonprofit Wikimedia Foundation. While Wikipedia's motto is "the free encyclopedia that anyone can edit", there are limits to what editors can do, which are expressed in policies governing content and user behavior. See Wikipedia's Five Pillars.


 * Conflicts of interest policies are used extensively in the for-profit and nonprofit sectors, and are essential for good governance. Our COI policy exists to regulate the use of this public good for private or personal gain, and provides guidance for editors with conflicts of interest, establishes methods for the community to handle situations where conflicts of interest arise, and helps maintain the trust of the public in the integrity of our articles.

What do you think?Jytdog (talk) 23:56, 20 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Not a bad idea, and one approach might be to include language from the Foundation's terms of use that apply. Some were used in that cease-and-desist letter. Coretheapple (talk) 00:41, 21 November 2013 (UTC)

In the interest of making steps towards convergence with Wikipedia's guideline on conflicts of interest, I'd be more inclined to use its first paragraph, which I think is an excellent, concise overview of the topic:


 * A Wikipedia conflict of interest (COI) is an incompatibility between the aim of Wikipedia, which is to produce a neutral, reliably sourced encyclopedia, and the aims of an individual editor. COI editing involves contributing to Wikipedia to promote your own interests, including your business or financial interests, or those of your external relationships, such as with family, friends or employers.[1] When an external relationship undermines, or could reasonably be said to undermine, your role as a Wikipedian, you have a conflict of interest. This is often expressed as: when advancing outside interests is more important to an editor than advancing the aims of Wikipedia, that editor stands in a conflict of interest.
 * [1] Note: the word interest is used here to refer to benefit or gain, not to something you are merely interested in, such as a hobby or area of expertise.

isaacl (talk) 00:44, 21 November 2013 (UTC)]


 * I considered that, but I find that statement to be pretty deficient in that a) it is too long (!) and not punchy enough b) it doesn't say enough about why we care and what is at stake; and c) doesn't relate it to other wikipedia policies; d) does focus too much on who you are as opposed to what you do.  I also wanted to specifically address concerns that many opposers have raised, that it is "about contributor not content", that it violates our motto that "anyone can edit".  There are already limits on what editors can do; this is just another one, similar to the others!  I hope that makes sense.Jytdog (talk) 01:23, 21 November 2013 (UTC)


 * The COI policy concerns me because what's in boldface places the COI in the mind of the editor, whereas this policy, correctly, establishes it as an objective fact created by a commercial relationship. JYTdog's wording is really not bad, in that it goes beyond what's in the COI guideline and places Wikipedia in the universe of other organizations that need such policies. Were this policy to be adopted, I suspect that the COI guideline would have to be altered. Coretheapple (talk) 00:49, 21 November 2013 (UTC)


 * thanks! (I think you mean "COI guideline" btw) Jytdog (talk) 01:23, 21 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Oh gawd, you're right. Yes, I'm in concurrence with you on the preamble. I would beef it up myself with stuff from the WMF terms of use, but honestly I'm just burned out on this subject. Coretheapple (talk) 01:41, 21 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Boldly added both paragraphs to the intro... also changed 2nd person "you" to third person, for consistency and formality. Jytdog (talk) 09:38, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Also added reference in lead to Sock puppetry which is a policy that is very much about the contributor, not content, to address arguments raised above that wikipedia policies should only be about content, and not about contributor.  It's not true - we have policies really focused on contributor's behavior per se, not just content they create.10:21, 21 November 2013 (UTC)

I think the preamble is very good. I added some language that I adapted from the lawyer letter on the Wikimedia Foundation website,. It specifically addresses paid editing in careful language, and why it damages Wikipedia. Or we can go full-tilt and just quote the letter, rather than borrowing its language. Coretheapple (talk) 15:25, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Coretheapple, I modified the intro to give a definition of a COI, explain the difference between this policy and the current COI guideline, and to make clear that intentional violations of this policy could lead to blocks. I suggest we include a link to the WMF letter. DavidinNJ (talk) 21:20, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Do you think we can add back in some of the language from the letter itself, perhaps with direct attribution? What I'm trying to do, and I think the Jytdog language helps with this, is to provide more background on why we're doing this, in a broad sense. The hope that I have is that it will not only provide useful background to persons engaged in this practice but also, that the more we cite the Foundation's position the stronger the case we have for getting this accepted as policy. Coretheapple (talk) 15:39, 22 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Oh sorry, you did include language from the letter. My bad. Sorry. Coretheapple (talk) 22:02, 22 November 2013 (UTC)

Sorry for the late reply: note the text I suggested taken from WP:COI is actually shorter than Jytdog's original proposal (113 words to 132 words). Regarding the comment on intent of the editor: financial conflict of interest, a subcategory of conflict of interest, can be defined without referring to an editor's intent, but I would not want to define conflict of interest as a whole as consisting solely of this subcategory. isaacl (talk) 16:58, 23 November 2013 (UTC)

Negative connections
Should direct editing also be prohibited for people with a strong negative connection? Something like:

4) Involved in litigation with the subject of the article, compete with the subject of the article, or are involved in activist or lobbying activity against the subject of the article.

I was working on an article about a company and another editor showed up and started adding lots of negative content (badly too); on Talk she revealed she was in litigation with the company. The second phrase is trying to be broad, to catch things like one company hiring people to add negative things to a competing company's article, or about a competing product. In an example of the third phrase, I was participating in a discussion off-Wiki in which the head of an activist group was also participating under his RW identity, who disclosed on that board that he had edited Wikipedia articles on the subject of his activism. Jytdog (talk) 12:11, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Note the suggestion I made would cover negative connections as well. isaacl (talk) 13:32, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I added a prohibition against editing when "engaged in competition, litigation, or lobbying for or against the subject." DavidinNJ (talk) 15:55, 20 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes, that's a very important change. It's easy to forget that this is a potentially serious problem, one that is given inadequate attention in the discussion of paid editing. Coretheapple (talk) 22:17, 20 November 2013 (UTC)

I don't understand how 2. and 5. are different. I'm not sure I understand the basis for this numbered list, it seems a bit arbitrary -- can this be sourced to an existing common COI policy of professional organizations? We shouldn't need to make up our own "definitions of conflict sources" here. Nevertheless, I tried to make the language more parallel so that it is clear. – SJ  +  08:14, 21 November 2013 (UTC)


 * I see your point re 2 and 5. They sound similar and are a bit duplicative. However, 2 only refers to persons acting on behalf of the article's subject. 5, for the sake of comprehensiveness, includes people acting on behalf of the article's subject and family members, partners, competitors, etc. Good point about COI of existing organizations. There may be a model COI policy we can cite. The problem is that such COI policies tend to be far more sweeping than what we have here. Coretheapple (talk) 15:33, 21 November 2013 (UTC)

Hi - Thanks for accepting my suggestion. I like the broadening-out that happened with respect to my suggestion to include both negative and positive activities, but the term "activist" was dropped and we didn't discuss it. Can we include that, please? I suggested that because an activist - someone committed to a cause and takes action to promote it ("active-ist") has a COI with respect to Wikipedia content on that issue, and this policy should apply to such editors, too. Including it would also address some of the concerns that have been raised that this proposal leaves unpaid advocacy unaddressed and is overly focused on paid advocacy. Thanks for considering this. Jytdog (talk) 13:39, 25 November 2013 (UTC)

The challenge of COI for Wikipedia
Someone above used the phrase “fundamental philosophical opposition” to describe some of the opposition to the current attempt to “regulate” COI on en.wikipedia. Indeed there is fundamental philosophical opposition, but it continues to be obscured in ways that don’t allow us to resolve these issues and move on. So here’s some talking points (my opinion) that try to summarize such fundamental philosophical opposition. My two cents -- Mike Cline (talk) 16:28, 23 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Everyone agrees that Conflicts of Interest can exist in all enterprises
 * Conflicts of Interest can be caused by a myriad of influences or causations.
 * When a Conflict of Interest exists, it can or may lead to behavior that is counter to the norms of the enterprise.
 * Any given enterprise may choose to limit (regulate) behavior that could or might be attributed to a Conflict of Interest (known publically or held in confidence). Such regulation is usually commensurate with the need to protect the credibility of the enterprise.
 * Most enterprises (government, for profit and not for profit) that have Conflict of Interest policies have more or less direct control (employer/worker relationship, organization/volunteer relationship) and can easily explain, train, set expectations and enforce COI policies within their enterprise via that direct control of the workforce.
 * At en.Wikipedia, no such direct control exists as our workforce is 100% volunteer, global, has some stability, but it essentially of a highly transient nature. Every member of the workforce has varying degrees of understanding and application of the enterprise norms, different cultural understandings of COI, and there is no employer/employee relationship.  The enterprise has a very limited ability to explain, train, set expectations and enforce COI policies within the enterprise except in a one on one, random application to individual members of the workforce (~127K at last count).
 * For the most part, all the “paid” related policies and guidelines being proposed focus on only one causation for an individual’s COI—some sort of monetary or financial gain. This is based on the obvious assumption that if a “paid” COI exists, then the resultant behavior will be contrary to the norms of en.wiki.  Other causations for COI that could plausibly exist seem unimportant, even if they might result in behaviors contrary to the norms of wiki.
 * Since the reason for having a COI policy is to prevent behaviors contrary to the norms of en.wiki shouldn’t all causations of COI be regulated? Exempting anyone or any particular causation of COI just creates special exempt classes within the workforce.  It is OK for one class of editor to have a COI that may cause unwanted behavior but not another class.
 * We know however, that it is incredibly difficult to regulate all causations for COI. We should stop trying to create special classes of editor and focus on the behaviors we want. (NPOV, RS, V, Civility, etc.) from our entire enterprise workforce.
 * Cautioning editors about the pitfalls of having a COI (regardless of causation) as it relates to the behaviors we believe are good for the enterprise is a good thing. But promulgating policies that essentially say “COI trumps NPOV, RS, WP:Five, etc)” while creating special classes of editors exempt from that policy is just bad enterprise policy.


 * Well, then why not simply do two things to the current guideline, WP:COI:1. Stiffen its language. When it says "strongly discouraged," change that to "prohibited." 2. Upgrade it to a policy. That way, all forms of conflict of interest are prohibited. Coretheapple (talk) 16:47, 23 November 2013 (UTC)


 * I would ask this: Is our goal here to eliminate any editors whose COI might result in behaviors contrary to WP norms from editing EP or is our goal here to promote behaviors consistent with WP norms despite inevitable COIs by all types of editors? This is the question the answer to which continues to elude us. --Mike Cline (talk) 17:01, 23 November 2013 (UTC)


 * We wouldn't be eliminating editors with a COI. We would simply be eliminating COI editing. Editors with COI could still edit, but in areas where they don't have a COI. Coretheapple (talk) 17:21, 23 November 2013 (UTC)


 * So under that assumption, a Wikipedian in Residence, who is being "paid" to further the interests of an institution via Wikipedia can't edit Wikipedia if such editing furthers the interest of the institution even if such editing is completely compliance with NPOV, RS, etc. Am I correct in that assumption? --Mike Cline (talk) 17:31, 23 November 2013 (UTC)


 * No, because Wikipedians in Residence is a Wikimedia Foundation project. So by definition it's not a conflict of interest, because the Foundation, which owns Wikipedia, has authorized it. You can't have a conflict of interest in an organization if you are specifically designated by the owner of the organization to do something. The conflict comes when you're exploiting an organization, without consent, for your own selfish ends. We have an exemption in this proposal for WIR, but that's not necessary and was done just to reassure people. We don't actually need to exempt things that Wikipedia's owner does and authorizes. Coretheapple (talk) 17:45, 23 November 2013 (UTC)


 * We are going around the same circle, and in this case, a circle aggravated by a false conclusion. A WiR is just a title, not authorized by WMF.  Any one can become a WiR, call themselves as WiR and no involvement or authorization is required by the WMF.  The WiR is just a form of outreach promoted by the WMF.  What I am adamantly opposed to is the idea that one class of editor can get paid to edit Wikipedia without concern about the impact of any COI, yet another class of editor if paid is inherently judged to be incapable of editing behavior that is compliant with our norms.  That's vicious reality of selective COI enforcement.  If I was being "paid" to edit Wikipedia by an institution or organization to further the aims of that organization, I would do so in compliance with Wikipedia content policies.  But I would also immediately designate myself as a Wikipedian in Residence to exempt myself from this crazy COI stuff. I don't believe there is any WMF or Wikipedia policy that would prevent that. --Mike Cline (talk) 18:13, 23 November 2013 (UTC)


 * But if you get yourself named a WIR, who wouldn't be doing a thing to help yourself promote your instituion. If you look at the Foundation's outreach page on the Wikipedian in Residence program, under "core characteristics," you can see that it specifically says that the WIR, apart from engaging in various things that further the goals of the Foundation, "Avoids Conflicts of Interest by not editing articles directly relating to the organization." If the WIR were to abuse his position, and edit about his or her employer, he'd be breaking the rules of the Foundation and risk the same penalties as anyone else. Coretheapple (talk) 21:30, 23 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Are you aware of the WIRs engaging in such conduct? If so, they are not protected by their WIR status. However, yes, this program does provide an opportunity for abuse, I guess, if in fact Coretheapple University is a particularly sleazy (and not very intelligent) organization. Coretheapple (talk) 21:33, 23 November 2013 (UTC)


 * @Coretheapple: You are rationalizing WMFs role in designating anyone a WiR. It doesn't happen. The outreach page is just that, outreach, hype, marketing, promotion, etc. Can you find any evidence that someone has to get the WMF's permission to call themselves a WiR or they have to agree to specific WMF terms to be called a WiR?  If you can't, don't rationalize the outreach page as some sort of policy.  No one who edits WP should be exempt from our COI guidelines yet this proposal does just that.  This whole idea of banning "paid" editing is fraught with complications that will IMHO make life on WP and the encyclopedia worse, not better because tremendous community energy will be focused on the Inquisitions that will inevitably result.  In a sense they've already started as in this example here where an editor, unhappy with the editing of a particular class of editor--the student--is claiming they are "paid advocates". Inquisitions will abound if some thing like this is promulgated.  Still very bad policy. --Mike Cline (talk) 14:51, 24 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi Mike. The proposal was, and I believe still is, an attempt to have a minimal limit on certain financial conflict of interest editing behaviors. The issue of whether one is in any way a part of Wikipedians in Residence should be irrelevant, because it won't affect in what way one is being paid, etc.


 * Yes, you are right, all negative behaviors should ideally be prevented. That's why this policy proposal is  independent:  It does not affect the regulation of anything other than what it specifically addresses. It does pretend that the other bad behaviors are good behaviors just because it does not address them.


 * No one's editing is perfect. No one edits in a perfectly neutral fashion.  No article is perfectly neutral.  No article covers all aspects of a topic.  No one expects a Wikipedia article on a topic to contain all the information which she or he would want to know about the topic.  However, when there is a lack of neutrality in an article, or when there is hole in the coverage, and the article is written by some one with a significant financial conflict of interest, then this a betrayal of trust, because in such a case there is always a reasonable suspicion that such a flaw is caused by the conflict of interest.  Take the Springer Encyclopedia of Climatology.  The article on aerosols is written by Robert A. Duce, a professor of climatology at Texas A&M.  If it was found out that a statistic he put in the article was incorrect, and that it underestimated the effect of the American aerosol industry on ozone depletion, then this would be noted and, being a good scholar, Duce would try to amend the error, and Duce's and Springer's reputations would be affected in almost no way.   Now, if it was later found out that Duce had taken money from the National Aerosol Association (a lobbying group for American aerosol producers) in order to write the article, then this would be a scandal. Can one prove that Duce put in the faulty data intentionally, because he was paid to do so?  Absolutely not, because he could have made the error without being paid.  So then why would there be a scandal?  Because the trust is betrayed.


 * Right now, there are many people arguing that such a practice, which would be a scandal in the academic world, is to be accepted here, because it doesn't matter who is editing what while being paid by whom. And so far, these people have won, because there is no policy at all which prohibits such a practice.  Instead of ignoring the best practices of the academic presses, which in policy regulate certain COI writing (whether such are effective in practice or not), we should learn from them.  After all, they are the reliable sources that we seek to emulate and represent.  That is, just as we do with article content, instead of doing our own original research as to whether certain forms of COI writing is problematic, we should instead follow the reliable sources. -- Atethnekos (Discussion, Contributions) 21:54, 23 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Nice lecture, we all know what the adverse consequences of serious COIs. That's not the issue here. --Mike Cline (talk) 14:51, 24 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I believe an issue is that, in your view, we are speaking of editors that have a serious conflict of interest, and that we should welcome them to edit relevant articles, and merely caution them to follow the normal content policies. I have said, and it is true, that such a liberal position would never be taken by editors for encyclopedias in the respected academic presses.  Say that scandal with Duce did happen:  If the editors for the next edition of the Springer Encyclopedia of Climatology shared the position you mention, their response would be to say that, apart from one, now corrected, factual error, there is no problem, because Duce's article was reviewed and edited according to the normal content policies, and that they will be accepting articles written by people with such serious conflicts in the next edition.  This would lower Springer's reputation, and they would not do right to publish such a work.  So the issue is that the position you mention is one which is uninformed by the best practices in the respected publishers and would as such lower this encyclopedia's reputation. -- Atethnekos (Discussion, Contributions) 22:35, 24 November 2013 (UTC)


 * A completely incorrect characterization of my position here. I believe that anyone with a serious COI should not edit in areas where that COI exists.  We already have a guideline that stresses that.  This proposal paints "paid" editing as a serious COI, but the starts carving out exemptions where being paid to edit is either not COI or is OK.  It sets dual standards a that are confusing and can only be enforced through iinquisitions.  As crafted it is just bad policy and won't solve whatever problem you are trying to solve.--Mike Cline (talk) 23:23, 24 November 2013 (UTC)
 * This proposal, at no revision, has ever painted unqualified "paid" editing as a serious COI. It has addressed paid editing only when such editing is done on a subject which is the person or group doing the paying, etc.; i.e., only when that paid editing involves a significant conflict of interests.
 * So let me clear on your position then. Do you believe that we should have editors with a serious conflict of interest directly edit articles?  Or do believe we should not have this? -- Atethnekos (Discussion, Contributions) 00:13, 25 November 2013 (UTC)


 * I think I've been pretty clear in my position. I think our current COI advice is good and edits by individual on topics where serious  COI exists are bad and should not be allowed.  What I object to are the exemptions and the inevitable inquisitions that this language fosters.  An editor shall not edit an existing article directly if he or she is:...paid by or acting on behalf of the article's subject;.....Acceptable conduct includes: ...... edits by a Wikipedian in Residence to articles connected to their institution are permitted, irrespective of whether the position is funded.(exemption #1); A professor can edit an article about their area of expertise, but not an article about themselves or research colleagues.(Exemption#2)  Why do we allow two different classes of editor (the WiR and Professors) to be paid by an institution and edit articles that further the interest of the payer with impunity when all other classes of editor I presume are banned from doing do under this language.  What about librarians?, university or college instructors (paid TAs and graduate assistants, or other instructors who are not "professors"?  What about secondary school teachers?  What about university administrative or executive staff?  What about employees of University sponsored research, advocacy, liaison or other specialized organizations, many of which might also hold professor positions.  This list could be endless.  My advice is either take out all the exemptions that inevitably set a confusing double standard, or don't try to improve on current COI guidelines which in my view are sufficient.  --Mike Cline (talk) 04:24, 25 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Exemption two is not an exemption, it's an example of what would be allowed and what wouldn't by the wording of the policy. Professors, secondary school teachers, everyone, are all in the exact same class under the proposal: Not allowed to make certain edits directly when they have the specific conflicts of interest enumerated.  It does not make an exemption for them at all.  Exemption one was specifically put in to address your concern above, so I've removed it now that you don't want it.  You say "edits by individual on topics where serious  COI exists are bad and should not be allowed".  Well, there is no policy that disallows this.  There is a guideline which says it is discouraged or even strongly discouraged, and should not be done.  This has been consistently interpreted, by administrators included, as meaning that it is indeed allowed.  Could you offer up some suggestions for a proposal that would disallow at least some individuals with serious conflicts of interest from directly editing articles?  That has been the goal here. -- Atethnekos (Discussion, Contributions) 04:46, 25 November 2013 (UTC)


 * If Could you offer up some suggestions for a proposal that would disallow at least some individuals with serious conflicts of interest from directly editing articles? That has been the goal here.  This very question is the real issue - why do we feel the need to disallow some but not ALL serious COI.  By that standard, I assume there would be serious COI that was allowed.  Why not just ban editing on topics by all editors that have a serious COI related to the topic without exemption for special classes of editor while at the same time don't create selective definitions of serious COI that differ between selective classes of editor.  Why not just propose a simple, one sentence policy Editors who are paid or otherwise compensated by any institution, organization or government agency may not edit articles that further the interests and aims of the institution, organization or government agency.  Its clear, concise, and essentially unequivocal.  The only real subjective question would be whether or not any given article was an article that furthered the interests or aims of the organization.  Doesn't need paragraphs of explanation that  inevitably create exemptions and confusion. --Mike Cline (talk) 05:14, 25 November 2013 (UTC)


 * We do want to preclude all. But precluding some, does not prevent us from precluding all, it in fact gets us part of the way there. The proposal is not about making exemptions and creating special classes. If this proposal fails to capture all the bad apples, it's not because it treats those uncaught bad apples as if they were in a special class. It's just because no policy is perfect and solves every problem. We could make one, single line policy: "Edits which are negative for this encyclopedia are prohibited." Theoretically such a policy would prohibit every possible bad edit ever done, but it would not actually solve anything.-- Atethnekos (Discussion, Contributions) 05:35, 25 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi User:Mike Cline, first let me thank you for your very thoughtful and clear laying out of the issues. That is so helpful.  Picking up on various threads being discussed above, I want to discuss your 6th and 7th bullet points in particular.  You are on the money, that the vast plurality of editors are not employees and thus are not subject to reporting relationships and training that companies (nonprofit and nonprofit) have - you have articulated the key difference between Wikipedia and pretty much everybody else, very clearly.  Thank you for that.  My conclusion, however, is the opposite of yours.  Wikipedia is governed by our policies, to which every editor is accountable.  The policies are our only "bosses" and they form the basis for all rational discussions that we have with each other, about content and editor behavior.  Our lack of a COI policy leaves us confused and without guidance on this crucial issue; in my view we really need one and have to do the hard work of reaching consensus to erect one.  Yes, Wikipedia doesn't provide the sort of training and mentorship that companies provide to employees; folks learn the policy and procedure ropes "on the job".   (Finding better ways to do that is an unmet need but one that plenty of folks are working on as part of efforts to attract and retain new editors, and is kind of outside the scope of this discussion)  With respect to your 7th bullet point, 2 things. First, this policy does attempt to address the broader issue of POV editing in the "negative" bullet defining COI,  which I originally suggested as follows "Involved in litigation with the subject of the article, compete with the subject of the article, or are involved in activist or lobbying activity against the subject of the article." This was accepted in the following form "engaged in competition, litigation, or lobbying for or against the subject". I wish "activism" would have been included but you can see there is an effort to cover the kind of volunteer advocacy you discuss, in this policy.  Secondly, I want to say that paid advocacy in particular -- the focus on financial motive - is in my view an appropriate focus for discussion.   In my analysis, houses like Wiki-PR will work to make their clients look good in order to obtain and keep business.  There is a structural problem.  The business model and mission is built on pleasing clients, and not on writing NPOV articles, which is our goal. There is a fundamental COI there and I think that in order to survive, paid advocates will usually choose the interests of their clients over WIkipedia's interests, whenever a specific bit of content forces that conflict to the fore (which is the only time it really matters).   That's all I wanted to say.  Thanks again for your initial post and for your time in continuing the conversation. Jytdog (talk) 13:33, 25 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Jytdog: There are some clues to the fundamental flaws to this proposal in this statement Secondly, I want to say that paid advocacy in particular -- the focus on financial motive - is in my view an appropriate focus for discussion. In my analysis, houses like Wiki-PR will work to make their clients look good in order to obtain and keep business.  There is a structural problem.  The business model and mission is built on pleasing clients, and not on writing NPOV articles, which is our goal. There is a fundamental COI there and I think that in order to survive, paid advocates will usually choose the interests of their clients over WIkipedia's interests, whenever a specific bit of content forces that conflict to the fore (which is the only time it really matters).  Your reference to Wiki-PR begs the question, is this policy being designed to deal with the extremes (as Wiki-PR) was, or mainstream, everyday editors?  Anyone getting paid by an entity is naturally going to have some affinity (positive or negative) with that entity?  The big question is when does that affinity have a high probability of causing adverse impact of Wikipedia (POV editing, attack editing, etc.) and what are the boundaries of that affinity (How far away from the paying entity must editors go before the probability of adverse impact on Wikipedia because of that affinity is low enough to ignore?)  In my view, this COI policy as written will not prevent or stop POV editing, it will merely create a playing field where editors disgruntled for whatever reason with other editors will have grounds to challenge and discredit their contributions on the basis of vague COI.  It is just an invitation for energy sapping inquisitions. See my scenarios below for a bit more detail on these thoughts.--Mike Cline (talk) 14:40, 25 November 2013 (UTC)
 * As I wrote below, I am not clear on where you are coming from. I think agree with you that the language needs to be tinkered with (e.g. I think it would be better focused on "content" than "articles") but beyond that... not sure. Maybe in the thread below, we can understand each other better.  I do object to your use of the term "inquisition" as the proposal has an administration section which lays out what should happen and makes clear that going outside that procedure is sanctionable.  This policy would not enable witch hunts or hounding; indeed it would prevent both. Anyway, let's continue below.20:36, 25 November 2013 (UTC)

Intention to close 2
Despite the potentially fruitful discussions, I'm looking for advice on timing and wording for the closing statement. As most of you know, the proponents are looking for this to become policy. That's an unusual first step; most "policies" either are imposed from above (or sound that way), such as certain legal policies, or else they're the final result after years of tinkering and negotiation. (See WP:Update to get an idea of the struggles that have given rise to our content, deletion and enforcement policy pages ... pages that, thankfully, have largely stabilized now.) For anyone who considers themselves a proponent: would you be satisfied with some other result? Would this page work as a guideline, or as a community collaboration with the WMF Foundation (which is in the process of taking action against WikiPR and others), or as a mission statement for a wikiproject focused on these goals? - Dank (push to talk) 13:49, 25 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi Dank. Thanks for your note, and for the questions!  I am proponent of Wikipedia having a COI policy - we already have a COI guideline.   I acknowledge that I am ignorant about how new Wikipedia policies are actually created (the archive to which you link doesn't seem to show any policy creation, but rather policy editing).  I assume that new policies happen like this - a policy is proposed and we work to find consensus, which effort sometimes fails.  Jimmy Wales, on his Talk page, and a representative of the WMF legal office, whom I contacted through email, have said that the Wikipedia community is responsible for creating and maintaining the policies that govern it;  based on that I am not looking for any sort of deus ex machina here -- we need to do this work.  As you write, it may take years of work, and as I understand it there have been years of discussion;  this is just the most recent iteration.  Therefore - and please forgive my ignorance - I don't understand what you see as unusual or why you call this a first step - can you please explain more? Also, if you have big-picture ideas about other or better ways to reach consensus on a COI policy I for one am all ears. Jytdog (talk) 14:12, 25 November 2013 (UTC)
 * I just changed that to "I'm looking for advice" ... it's fine to start this process here. Normally and ideally, the background of the closer(s) should be irrelevant, but there have been a lot of different groups, both in the 7 recent votes/discussions/RfCs/whatever and historically at WP:COIN, WP:UAA, WP:COI, WP:NPOV, etc., who have different POVs and who generally are looking for some sympathy for their POV, so just to let you guys know, I'm aware of the various POVs, I'm sympathetic to all of them, and I've done a lot of work in the trenches in the past, although my work in the last few years has been mainly with military history and copyediting (and the current and future project is automation of copyediting). I've worked with policy for a long time (I've done almost all the work at WP:Update since 2008, for instance), and I spent a lot of time speedy-deleting promotional pages in my second and third years on WP, and I'm sympathetic towards any Wikipedian who's interested in volunteering time to help us with these problems, as you guys are here ... but we're not even close here to the levels of support that traditionally give rise to community-generated policies. That doesn't mean that you're doing anything wrong by discussing it or pushing for a policy, but these COI discussions have been unusually difficult, and the community is unusually "stuck" and hesitant to do anything other than launching into endless discussions. For instance, WP:No paid advocacy hasn't been rewritten yet in line with the closing statement of that RfC ... which probably reflects both dissatisfation and an unwillingness all around to get closure, even in small steps. But small steps and clarity are exactly what's needed; no casual observers are going to digest the mountains of text we've got on the subject, and that effectively disenfranchises most of the Wikipedians who have a stake and an opinion, and Wikipedians get cranky when they're disenfranchised. - Dank (push to talk) 14:50, 25 November 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for this explanation. Very interesting remark about WP:No paid advocacy not being revised as per the closing remarks...so that is how new policy is usually developed?  Someone puts out a proposal; it gets commented on, discussion is closed and summarized, and version 2 is put forth taking into account as many of the criticisms as possible, is commented on, then closed, etc and iterate, until you get to something that enough people agree on.  Is that accurate?   In our situation, I have appreciated you driving closure of the simultaneous proposals.  There remains a bit of active discussion here (although it is certainly not tons of people).  What do you reckon our next specific steps should be, once this one is closed? I would be willing to work on the next draft of a proposal... or should we do more preliminary, consenus-building steps first? Jytdog (talk) 20:08, 25 November 2013 (UTC)
 * You guys and Mike are getting closer to a meeting of the minds than we've seen between opposing sides in previous RfCs ... if that's working for you, then keep it up. If you guys can put something together you all like, then we can think about how to generate some discussion on your proposal. If you want to get the levels of support needed for a policy ... if that's the only acceptable goal ... then in a way, that simplifies the job here: the policy will have to identify and deal with all the significant POVs on this issue. It's a big job, but I don't know of any stoppers, it's just going to take a lot of heavy listening. I've got time for it if you do. - Dank (push to talk) 03:54, 26 November 2013 (UTC)

Helpful discussions
These discussions, the precedents you are finding in existing COI policies of other organizations, and the language being worked on here (and at the COI guideline in the past) is useful. It has certainly helped me understand current practice and ways to describe alternatives. Thank you. I think a brief intro would be welcome. – SJ  +  08:12, 21 November 2013 (UTC)


 * Why thanks. I think the intro that's been added is pretty good. I beefed it up a little. What do you think? Coretheapple (talk) 15:27, 21 November 2013 (UTC)


 * I hope these discussions continue and develop. I generally support the proposal.  However, whereas I think Paid editing policy proposal was too broad and weak, my first impressions are this proposal may be too broad and strict.  Including family and especially colleagues may be going too far.  Have people looked at COI guidelines from other respected organisations, such as medical journals?

The dispiriting problem I've mostly seen is articles about corporation X or services that X provides that are often clones of marketing by X, or have sourced criticism blanked. In such a case we know the edits violate policies WP:NPOV], [[WP:NOR and WP:CON; they probably violate WP:SPAM and may or may not violate WP:VERIFY, WP:COPYVIO and WP:NOTRELIABLE; and we can be fairly sure this is because they break the behavioural guideline WP:NOPAY. I actually think a good faith NPOV edit adding uncontroversial and non-promotional details about one's employer (especially if it's a statutory/governmental organisation) might be acceptable, although I've never done it because of COI worries.  I'm concerned with the gross cases where someone has either misunderstood the purpose of Wikipedia (believing ownership of "our" Wikipedia page) or wantonly ignored that purpose.  What is needed there IMHO is a clear dedicated "metapolicy" that puts all the Wikipedia principles in the context of COI promotion, and which it is easy to refer the involved editor to, and a strong system of detection and enforcement and effective sanctions (including guidelines on when to effectively use banning, blocking and negative publicity).  Otherwise everyone, Wikipedia, the editors involved and the subject all lose credibility; the other danger being a slow edit war which your average editor loses.  --Cedderstk 10:56, 26 November 2013 (UTC)