Wikipedia talk:Contributor copyright investigations/BhagyaMani

Question
Hi MER-C, Wizardman and others involved in this CCI cleanup!

Can I support your work, e.g. by reformulating content that I added, in particular to articles that you did not yet check?

If you agree to this, I propose to use this talk page for listing the initial edits together with the one showing the reformulated text, so that you can compare. Please let me know whether this would facilitate your work. -- BhagyaMani (talk) 12:10, 2 November 2013 (UTC)
 * It probably would help, since this way we could see if you do in fact understand copyright now; if the edits originally are bad but your revisions are good, then we know it shouldn't be an issue in the future. Wizardman  15:31, 2 November 2013 (UTC)

Then let me use this in the article Amur leopard as a sample, which I propose to reformulate this way:
 * In the 1970s, three fragmented small populations still existed in Russia. After the turn of this century, only one population survived that lives in the southwest of Primorsky Krai in the Chinese and North Korean trans-boundary area. This area comprises about 3000 km2.

followed by the reference ref name=Hoette03. This reference is for download at this address, see page 34, section 3.1 Historic and present status of the Amur leopard.

Is the reformulated text okay? -- BhagyaMani (talk) 17:09, 2 November 2013 (UTC)