Wikipedia talk:Education program archive/University of Western Ontario/Advanced Genetics (Fall 2014)/Grading

Grading
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Tom Haffie.
 * Earlobe - Cleared up previous claim of simple dominance in humans (with citation).

Adam Faller
 * Kai Greene – Clarified a sentence describing Kai's placement in the 2013 and 2014 Mr.Olympia contest, and have added the specific date of the 2014 contest final (with citation).
 * Pickering, Ontario – Fixed two minor capitalization and punctuation issues under "Crime" heading.
 * Phil Heath – Added record of Heath's 2014 win and stated his future plans under the "Bodybuilding career" heading.

Kristen Gibson


 * List of Canadian restaurant chains - Removed Q smokehouse from current restaurants in RCR Hospitality Group (closed in 2013)
 * Born and Raised (John Mayer album) - Added a review of the album (with citation)
 * Lockview High School - Added the postal code to the address

Travis Dilworth
 * Human Genome Project - Added a missing period at the end of the first paragraph of the history section.
 * Alloenzyme - Added information regarding a drawback of using allozymes in phylogenetic studies (with citation).
 * Characters of Warcraft - Revised some of the text in the Arthas Menethil section to improve clarity and grammar. Also added 3 citations.

Elena Mamycheva
 * Jejunum - Added a citation for the etymology of "jejunum".
 * Juggling - Provided a link to the 'Juggling in ancient China' page; wrote about Xiong Yiliao (with citation).
 * Neuroscience - Extended Brain Bee information to include the CIHR Canadian National Brain Bee (with citation).

Edward Higginbotham
 * Bruce Trail - added necessary citation in History section, and edited existing content to remove plagiarism
 * Crestwood Preparatory College - corrected information regarding school's location, and edited content for various grammar and syntax errors. Perhaps this is why enrollment has been dropping steadily...
 * The Band - cited book where 'citation needed'

Michael Iacocca
 * Muskellunge - added a personal image of a typical fishing lure used for this species when no previous images of common lures were present.
 * Whitby Fury - added additional information to this teams playoff history, updating their result from last year.
 * Cadherin - added information regarding how many types of cadherins exist in vertebrates and invertebrates, and how through RNA alternative splicing all these forms of cadherins are able to exist from multiple cadherin encoding genes (with citation).

Anthony Zarola.
 * Alessandro Florenzi - added an international career section and a couple of cited sentences/wiki links about his debut and first national goal.
 * London_District_Catholic_School_Board - fixed all links to school webpages in elementary school section because previous 404 error on ldcsb page.
 * The_Simpsons_Movie - changed sentence structure to read better and reduce ambiguity in last paragraph in plot section

Andrew Balardo
 * Ancaster, Ontario - added another recreation centre to the list (with citation)
 * Ontario - fixed punctuation under professional sports heading
 * Hamilton, Ontario - improved wording under crime heading

Jeffrey P. Palmer
 * DNA sequencing - added information of shotgun sequencing, concerning restriction enzymes.
 * DNA sequencing - forgot to add redirecting citation (with citation)
 * Restriction enzymes - added more information about recognition sites (with citation)
 * History of genetics - added Lysenkoism to the timeline (with citation)

Jess Uzonyi
 * Heart and Stroke Foundation of Canada - added the section 'Allocation of donations'. Includes a citation.
 * Green tea - spelling correction, changed 'geen' to 'green'.
 * Fish oil - added the EFSA's opinion on maximum intake. Includes a citation.

Anthony Gallo
 * 7 Days to Die - Added additional gameplay features.
 * Rooster Teeth - Added a new section for the company's latest show as well as a citation.
 * Mother Teresa Catholic Secondary School - Updated information about the school's background.

Will Cheney Marley Kafato
 * Languages of Denmark - Added source for Official Languages.
 * Glebe Collegiate Institute - Changed wording to make page more clear
 * Nicolas Jaar - Added Band name which made Remix was made under.


 * Nelson High School (Ontario) - Updated information, added a reference.
 * Dementia with Lewy bodies - Added a citation, updated Classification section information.
 * Dementia - Changed language and grammar.

Andrew Gu


 * Eliezer Yudkowsky - Provided Source for LessWrong's founding date.
 * Swimming (sport) - Use of drag: Fixed grammar, redundancies and wording in this section. Added citation needed for the mental effects of wearing drag suits.
 * Lysocline - Removed wrong usage of i.e.

Sheena Wang


 * Calvin and Hobbes - changed to correct use of an idiom
 * High-density lipoprotein - added citation for the effects of ABCA1 on regulating cholesterol efflux
 * Agatha Christie - added another POV character that Christie used in several of her short stories

Deborah Lelis


 * capZ - Added further explanation about what capz protein actually means. (with citation)
 * Montes Claros - Added missing information about the universities that the city hosts.
 * xuxa - Removed wrong usage of word ("of").

David Wright


 * Liberia - added information about a deal made with Norway to stop deforestation in Liberia under Economy and Infrastructure, 1st paragraph (with citation)
 * Long interspersed nuclear element - added info about L1 and schizophrenia under In human heading (with citation)
 * Jim Sandlak - added information about Jim Sandlak's son playing in the NHL under playing career (with citation)

Christopher Dumigan


 * Binding site - Added in a few sentences about protein to protein binding. (Citation included)
 * Nymphaea odorata - Added in the section about edible and medicinal parts. (Citation included)
 * Calliergon giganteum - Fixed the confusing grammar in the second sentence.

Taylor Lyons


 * Toronto Premium Outlets - Added citation
 * The University of Western Ontario - Added undergraduate faculties
 * Georgetown, Ontario - Added library reopening date after renovations (citation included)

Deyi He


 * Macedonian phalanx - Added information on phalanx sarissa usage (citation included)
 * University of Toronto Schools - Added information on House events
 * Bicycle messenger - Added another example of media featuring bike messengers

Kin Chiu


 * Nestea - Expanded 'Canada' section
 * Perrier - Updated to include more recent activity (citation included)
 * Impacted wisdom teeth - Edited grammar for clarity

Gurman Singh


 * Travis Scott (musician) - Added associated acts
 * Gordon Graydon Memorial Secondary School - Changed grammar and mainstream was the colloquial term, changed to academic
 * PartyNextDoor - Added citation for new album release date

Samantha Kallies


 * Brave Frontier - Added more information about Super Brave Bursts.
 * Dundurn, Saskatchewan - Added Education section (including citations).
 * Jennifer Rowe - Added number of children in her family.

Melissa Wong
 * St. John's-Ravenscourt School - Updated from major renovations 'being planned" to those major renovations "nearly complete"
 * Whiteshell Provincial Park - Added citation to fact about lake sturgeons
 * Rural Municipality of East St. Paul - Added a comma and deleted a comma for particular grammar rules and clarity, respectively

Craig Matthews


 * Player's Handbook - Added 5th Edition heading and release date (citation).
 * Girl (short story) - Added that the story is made of only one story.
 * Dead Men's Path - Specified White supervisor's position.

William Burke
 * St. Patrick's Catholic High School - Created page including a citation
 * Tha Carter V - Added news with citation
 * George Johnson (American football) - Added updated stats with a citation

Meerna Homayed
 * Lasalle Secondary School - Added information about SHSM and SHAL programs and updated VP names
 * Aaron Taylor-Johnson - Added his character's name in the movie Savages
 * Laurentian Media Group - Added information about new Sudbury Living publications, including citations

Raman Kalaichandran -
 * Jon Snow (character) - Revised awkward wording regarding the description of Samwell Tarly
 * List of A Song of Ice and Fire characters - Added "s" to "antagonist" underneath House Lannister
 * Lucky Luciano - Added "The Last Testament of Lucky Luciano" to media portrayals with citation

Natalie Thoman -
 * The Breakfast Club - Corrected spelling of athelete to athlete in opening monologue quote
 * Sandwich Secondary School - Updated staff information: trustee and vice principal
 * Developmental Biology - added citation for drosophila melanogaster as a model organism

Claire Atherton -
 * Synesthesia - added information about synaesthesia and its potential link to autism (with citation)
 * Iroquois Ridge High School - changed "stories" (American spelling) to "storeys" (Canadian spelling)
 * Sistrurus catenatus - added Species at Risk Act under Conservation Status (with citation)

Brad Ververs -
 * Elmvale, Ontario - Corrected the date for the murder committed by Gregory Scott White from 2001 to 2011
 * List of Star Wars characters - Added information regarding Ki-Adi Mundi
 * Umeå - Added information concerning the bus system in the city (with citation)

Mackenzie Kingston -
 * Crabby Joe's Tap & Grill - Updated the upcoming locations in the franchise section
 * Springbank Park - Added information about the seals departure from Storybook Gardens (with citation)
 * Metro International - Fixed spelling error of 'launced' to 'launched' in the North America section

Ryan Murphy -
 * You're the Worst - Updated viewership information (with citation)
 * Fergie's Fledglings - Edited awkward sentence structure under the 1990's Fledglings heading
 * The Beautiful Game - Added information about Nike's usage of the slogan "'Joga Bonito'" during the 2006 Fifa World Cup (with citation)

Fasih Shah -
 * Olympique Lyonnais - Updated the completion date of the new stadium. Added the name of the new stadium (with citation)
 * Nokia Lumia 1020 - Updated ability of phone to run Windows Phone 8.1 (with citation)
 * J. Clarke Richardson Collegiate - Removed inaccurate information, and fixed sentence structure as well as grammar. Also added correct population of school

Chris Kongas -
 * Tuck rule - Added history of tuck rule in hockey (with citation)
 * 2011 Dutch National Track Championships – Men's keirin - Fixed inconsistency with written numbers and numerals in sentence
 * EPSOS - Added information about applications (with citation)

Wes Robinson -
 * Metalworks Studios - grammatical correction
 * Rik Emmett - grammatical correction
 * Western Ontario Mustangs - Added information about the 2013 Yates Cup victory (with citation)

Meagan Botnick -
 * David Booth - Added that he scored the shootout goal in first preseason game (with citation)
 * Unionville - Added information about Unionville Festival (with citation)
 * Grey's Anatomy - Added the premiere date for 2014 (with citation)

Emma Reble -
 * The Bishop Strachan School - Corrected grammar from 'grade' to 'ground'.
 * Kirk Wipper - Added Order of St. John (with citation)
 * Lykke Li - Added release of latest music video

Wang Hansong -
 * Start_codon - Added a reference in response to a request on Talk page.
 * Stop_codon - Added a link to another wiki article because an important part of the process explained here was missing.
 * Translation - Added a comparison to start codon.

Yannick Lyn -
 * St. Aloysius Gonzaga Secondary School - Updates to the Staff List and Spelling corrections to names
 * Yukie Nakama - (Added further detail on Nakama Yukie's newer accomplishments and career.
 * Okonomiyaki - Citation of Local Food provided.

Amratha Chandrakumar
 * Port Credit Secondary School - Added citation in the general section
 * Michael Ondaatje - Grammatical corrections in sentences which were hard to read
 * Derek Jeter - Updated information about the 2014 season and added citation

Brenley Johnston -
 * Fibronectin binding protein A - Added info about biofilms and cited
 * OUEA - Updated participating schools and official OUEA website
 * Port Perry Mojacks - Changed twenty-six win to twenty-six wins (in 1991 paragraph)

Hiroshi Chakma
 * London Central Secondary School - Added citation to the Junior Football AAA Championship 2014.
 * University of Western Ontario - Updated information of the current chancellor of UWO in the administration section (with citation)
 * University of Waterloo - Added information of the new chancellor to succeed for UW in the administration section (with citation)

Matthew McKeen
 * Jack Chambers Public School - added clubs and sports section with citation
 * Jake and Amir - changed error on number of facebook followers
 * Speedrun - added paragraph under completion section

Dianne Le -
 * A.B. Lucas Secondary School - removed sports and clubs no longer available, and added notable alumni.
 * Western Ontario Mustangs - changed current team of David Lee to Saskatchewan Roughriders. Edited a sentence regarding Vanier Cup to be more coherent with citation.
 * Illscarlett - added information about new single Down for Whatever with citation.

Trisiah Tugade
 * Reddit - updated information about user accounts
 * Dwight Schrute - added more detailed information about character behavior
 * Counseling (The Office) - added more details to the plot of the episode

Bi Kim
 * Transformers: Beast Wars - made simple formatting change - italicized the title of work listed.
 * Calvin (Calvin and Hobbes) - made simple formatting changes - non-italicized the word 'organized'
 * Pseudomonas meliae - fixed internal link p.meliae to Pseudomonas meliae
 * Thermoacidophile - added information, expanded the article, and add references

Darren Ramcharan
 * Turner Fenton Secondary School- edited list of sports offered at the school
 * Phi Gamma Delta- edited punctuation in founding
 * Genetics- added information about semi-conservatism with a citation

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