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Fahmi T.
 * The Kite Runner - added a line mentioning his new work with reference to the page.
 * Huron University College - added a history date and indicated that its the oldeds affiliated college of UWO (with citation)
 * Finance - added last line on introductory paragraph
 * London, Ontario - fixed spelling mistakes in the education section
 * Canada - Updated demographic statistic figures as of July 2013.

Tom Haffie.
 * Earlobe - Cleared up previous claim of simple dominance in humans (with citation).

Marcel B. Nadine F.
 * Professional golf career of Tiger Woods- corrected grammar, added posession to name Nicklaus, specified wins to PGA wins (with citation).
 * Richard Ivey School of Business-updated information regarding UWO location (with citation).
 * Blackberry Ltd- updated employee figure (with citation).
 * Roaring Fork River- added personal winter photo with information.
 * UGG Australia- added information to history about 2012 marketing campaign to attract more male based sales (with citation).
 * Sir Gawain and the Green Knight - added information to plot summary (with citation).
 * The Secret of Moonacre - Corrected grammar and spelling mistakes, added information.
 * Dorchester, Ontario - updated and added information regarding current events (with citation).
 * List of pipe bands - added to list of Canadian Pipe Bands, with external link.
 * London Transit - added a new route to 'regular routes'. Fixed Improper formatting of table.

Jordan B.
 * Holy Trinity Catholic High School (Simcoe) - Added background information (with citation).
 * Los Angeles Kings - Included assistant general manager (with citation).
 * Snowboarding - Added information on a large snowboarding competition.
 * Rob Blake - Added information about Stanley cup championship, and awards.
 * Ice hockey arena - Completed the list of current National Hockey Arenas in Canada, and the United States.

Nadia S.
 * The Immoralist - added information about a character in the novel as well as a reference list (with citation).
 * Peter Stumpp - added information under Accusations regarding his victims (with citation).
 * Fawad Afzal Khan - added information under Career about work alongside (with citation).
 * Nadia Khan - added information about the banning of her morning show (with citation).
 * Ross Geller - added information under Family about the "Routine" (with citation).

Nyla J.
 * Canadian Canoe Association - Included an external link to Member Clubs of CKC, Capitalized whitewater disciplines to avoid subtle hierarchy of prestige.
 * New Hamburg, Ontario - Beefed up green spaces info, Organized page, updated and categorized 'Annual Events" "Local Businesses" and "Religious Congregations" inserted Links where no wiki page available, added References List (with citation).
 * Skip-Bo - Added Gameplay Varient
 * Cheesecake- Corrected improper use of semi-colon in first sentence.
 * Masonville Place - Added photo

Erik S.
 * That's It, That's All - Added new page (with citation).


 * Travis Rice - added information under Video Parts (with citation).

Catherine G.

Erin B.
 * Toronto Zoo - Added information of the Toronto Elephants bound for California (with news article citation).
 * University of Western Ontario - Added Kevin O'Leary under notable people with a brief description (with citation).
 * Fairview Mall - Added three additional stores in the first paragraph.
 * Pacific Place - Updated and inserted wiki links to store names for L3 and L4 of the shopping mall (with citation).
 * Oedipus the King - Made Merope a link to another page, added details on the background.
 * Taste of the Danforth -Edited information regarding the date of this event, and added it's 20th anniversary. (with citation)
 * YMCA Camp Wanakita -Added an intermediate cheer.
 * YMCA Camp Wanakita -Added more details to the Polar Bear Dip and how it can be achieved.
 * Riverdale Collegiate Institute -Created a section on the various sports teams and clubs offered at this high school.
 * Desmond Piers -Added post-war information about my great grandfather Rear Admiral Desmond Piers.

Nicole C.
 * Brescia University College - Added opening of Clare Hall to Buildings (with citation).
 * Playpen - Added information extra attachment pieces available on modern models.
 * The University of Western Ontario - Updated Brescia University College residence info (with citation).
 * Port-wine stain - Added info about ophthalmologist referral.
 * Anita Blake - Added information to knowledge and skills of character.

Marlie G.
 * Riverdale Park (Toronto) - Added information about the Summer Movie Series (with citation).
 * YMCA Camp Pine Crest - Added information about camp cheers and the purpose of them.
 * University of Western Ontario - Added a section about the Faculty of Social Science.
 * Macaroni and Cheese - Corrected the word 'macarroni' to 'macaroni' twice, it had been spelled with two 'r's.
 * So You Think You Can Dance Canada - Added that another international style of dance seen on the show is India's Bollywood (with citation to Wikipedia article Bollywood)

Christina M.
 * Plympton-Wyoming - Added general information about council (with citation).
 * Don Wright Faculty of Music - Added information about building renovations (with citation).
 * University of Western Ontario - Added information about performances (with citation).
 * The Ting Tings - Corrected sentence structure, and edited for cohesion.
 * Puritan - Added information to Cultural Consequences and edited for spelling and cohesion.

Alex L.
 * Garodia School (icse) - Corrected spelling and grammar.
 * Human skeleton - Rewrote section on sexual dimorphism in the human skeleton (with 2 citations).
 * The Phenice method - Created page outlining the method (with citation).
 * Castoroides - Corrected misspelling of "specimens" in Discovery and species section.
 * Bioarchaeology - Rewrote section on age estimation of skeletal remains (with 4 citations).
 * Bioarchaeology - Corrected and edited section on paleodemography, added hyperlinks.

Tessence D.
 * River Island - Corrected a date (with citation).
 * River Island - Added information on their 2013 fashion line with Rihanna (with citation).
 * Michael Stasko - Added Western University to my Professor's list of schools he teaches at.
 * The Contract - I fixed a date. I changed it from 1998 to 1999 and I made a reference list (with citation)
 * Danny McManus- I added a recent award to the award list. He is my friends Uncle.

Sierra B.
 * Bermuda - Added information on the current status of four Guantanamo detainees in Bermuda (with citation).
 * Bermuda - Added information on the current political party in Bermuda.
 * Ethiopia - Added a subsection on Time in Ethiopia outlining the differences in the timing system used.
 * Hamzehlu-ye Olya Fixed sentence structure and grammatical errors
 * How I Met Your Mother Fixed minor spelling and grammatical errors

Heather W. Coeliac Disease - Added a section about Triggers for Coeliac Disease cited
 * Gluten-free Diet - Added Guar gum as an additive to compensate for the lack of gluten in bread

Jord L.
 * Hedley - Linked band members's pages to the main page
 * Sault Ste. Marie, Ontario - Added date closed of a main high school (with citation.)
 * Francis Clergue - Added dates and name changes (with citation.)
 * Hello Kitty - Added family members
 * St. Mary's College, Sault Ste. Marie - Minor changes

Simon E.
 * Western Ontario Mustangs - Formatted varsity section and corrected number of teams (with citation).
 * Thiopurine methyltransferase - Added two sentences about association with adverse drug reaction (with citation).
 * Point Grey Mini School - Edited grammar and style. Added links to other wikipedia pages.
 * Retinoic acid receptor - Added name of response element
 * Jeff Garlin - Added Podcast section with list of all episodes (with citation)

Sofia H.
 * Songs of Innocence and of Experience - Added information to the synopsis (with citation).
 * Oroonoko - Added a new paragraph to the 'The New World Setting' section (with citations).
 * Property (novel) - Added two sentences to the novel's summary (Article appears in red because it is a stub: too short to be called an article).
 * Disgrace(novel) - Added the names of two characters to novel's synopsis.
 * Eilat Sports Center - Fixed grammar mistakes on main description.

Christina B.
 * Edward Bartley- corrected a spelling error and changed wording in a portion of the final                        sentence.
 * Maracay- edited multiple subheadings that incorrectly capitalized more than the first word
 * Nip/Tuck- corrected spelling errors and sentence structure in Production section.
 * Georg Simmel- created Section called "Simmel on flirtation". Wrote a summary paragraph of                    his 1923 essay on "Women, Sexuality and Love." With citation.
 * Corporate crime- added the link 'Pump and Dump' to the "See also" section.

Cecily M.
 * Karera - Changed wording in Geography section.
 * Star Wars - Added a new bullet about the Art of Star Wars in the Legacy Section (with citation)
 * Women in Refrigerators - Added a new paragraph about Anita Sarkeesian to References in mass culture section (with citation)
 * Jane Eyre - Added two new paragraphs about Jane's relationship with her cousin St. John Rivers and her relationship with Mr. Rochester in the Feminism section of Themes (with citation)
 * Democritus - Added sentence in Ethics and Politics section clarifying the role of the soul in Democritus' theory of cheerfulness

Alexandra B.
 * Black sesame soup - Fixed grammar mistakes on main description.
 * Early Childhood - Added to section on physical growth and development (with citation).
 * Childhood - Added to section on middle adulthood (with citation).
 * Heart - Added information to structure of the heart (with citation).
 * Kübler-Ross model - Added information to the denial stage (with citation).
 * Human Brain - Added information about cerebral cortex (with citation).

Katie M.
 * Father Michael McGivney Catholic Academy - Added section on a student leadership group called SLAM (Student Leaders at McGivney) with citation.
 * St. Thomas The Apostle Parish (Markham, Ontario) - Created page with reference.
 * Nathan Salmon - Edited Biography
 * King's University College (University of Western Ontario) - Added two links and edited info on the new Darryl J. King Student Life Centre
 * Fond-du-Lac, Saskatchewan - Edited article and added information on transportation

Elise W.
 * Burning Man - Added information about the Temple
 * Daniel Alfredsson - Minor grammatical correction
 * H.B. Beal Secondary School - Added information about the Bealart program
 * Crested Gecko - Added information about their eyes and behaviour
 * Australian Shepherd - Added information about history with citation

Katarina C.
 * Quokka - Added information about population/reproduction with citation
 * Havergal College - Minor punctuation corrections
 * Cheley Colorado Camp - Corrected history using family documentation
 * Luke Gazdic - Added background information with citation
 * Tessa Thompson - Added two citations to personal life as well as a minor grammatical error
 * Eyelash Extensions - Added information to Types of Lashes

Joe C.
 * |Catholic Catholic Central High School (London, Ontario) - Updated and revised notable alumni section (with citation)
 * |Catholic Catholic Central High School (London, Ontario) - Added Athletics Section


 * |Toronto Toronto Raptors - Added 2016 All Star Game host announcement --
 * |Chris Chris Robinson (baseball)- Updated Career (with citation)
 * |Phil Phil Kessel- Updated Toronto Maple Leafs Section, added newly signed contract

Ben M.
 * Madeline Westen - Fixed spelling and grammar issues
 * Huntsville High School (Ontario) - Added information about when the school was built with citation
 * Simon Dumont - Added citation for Simon's win at 2009 X-Games Big Air
 * Deerhurst Resort - Added a Golf tab with information for Deerhurst Golf courses with citation
 * Tobermory, Ontario - Added citation for Diving capital of the world and information on Big Tub Harbour with citation

Alana A.
 * Huron University College - Organized the programs section and added a list of the programs offered (with citation).
 * Friday Night Lights (TV Series) - Edited the grammar and sentence structure in the characters section, as well as clarified the plot's of each character
 * Pickle Barrel - Added information about the dish prices under the Atmosphere section.
 * Forest Hill Collegiate Institute - Added a section for the Co-operative program offered at the school (with citation).
 * The Parent Trap (Film 1998) - Added the name of the summer camp attended by Annie and Hallie in the Plot section.

Dakin L.
 * Dr. Mario – added information in the legacy section regarding the process by which Dr. Mario can be unlocked in Super Smash Bros. Melee. (with citation)
 * LiveLeak – added basic information regarding video categories.
 * Nancy Campbell Collegiate Institute – added a wikilink to Thames River (Ontario) in the campus section.
 * Paparazzi – added point on legality within the United States. (with citation)
 * Thames River (Ontario) – Added information on 1937 flood. (with web citation)

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