Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/7th Infantry Division (United States)/archive2

2c fiddle
From Fifelfoo (talk) at 01:29, 8 December 2009 (UTC)
 * Sources
 * Consistent multi author citation Foo; Bar; Baz. Or.  Foo, Bar and Baz. Appleman, Roy E.; James M. Burns, Russell A. Gugeler and John Stevens (1960).
 * Is the Volume number and name part of the title, or a seperate volume title? Horner, David (2003);  Stewart, Richard W. (2005)
 * Found the author for Army Almanac: A Book of Facts, as a result you'll need to change your short cites. |author=Armed Forces Information School (U.S.)
 * References
 * Extra full stop (en_US: period) at the end of the title. Rottman, Gordon L. (2002).
 * Remove location to match your style (or add locations for everything :) : Allen, Thomas B.; Polmar, Norman (1995).
 * Double check your websites for corporate authors (ie: History Division (USMC)).
 * Double check your websites for being part of a larger work, out of the air example "History of 7 Division" could be part of a larger work History of Divisions. See your Global Security citations for an example where a webpage is part of a larger cohesive work.
 * Consider using cite report style for "Report to the Secretary of Defense (2000)", which would be to remove the quotation marks if it was unpublished (ie: without ISSN / ISBN), or to treat as a full published work if published.
 * Can we assume an author for this website of [?Pete Dawkins] "Pete Dawkins Homepage: Biography". Pete Dawkins.
 * Check your fullstops in this citation, particularly the one after the title. Also your publishers haven't been (bracketed) so far: Ranger: Simulation of Modern Patrolling Operations (Omega Games), 1984.