Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Anna Lee Fisher/archive1

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lead: one of the astronauts supported vehicle integrated testing and payload testing>who supported/supporting
 * Re-worded. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

Early life: published three article in the Inorganic Chemistry.>published three articles in Inorganic Chemistry.
 * Corrected. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

Selection: Bill, who was now her fiancée>fiancé
 * Well spotted. Corrected. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

Houston, Texas,>Houston, Texas,
 * Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

she had the best chance>she had the better chance
 * Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

"It didn't matter what the pay was,">"It didn't matter what the pay was",


 * Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

Training on a mock-up of a modular section of the Hubble Space Telescope. >Training on a mock-up of a modular section of the Hubble Space Telescope


 * Removed full stop

mission specialists astronaut candidates>mission specialist astronaut candidates
 * Corrected. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

the five MDs>clarify with wikilink


 * Done. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

in that capacity>. In that capacity


 * Can't find this one. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

STS-51-A: perform Capsule communicator (CAPCOM) duties>perform capsule communicator (CAPCOM) duties


 * De-capitalised. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

The crew went to Seattle, Washington,>The crew went to Seattle, Washington,


 * Changed as suggested. Hawkeye7   (discuss)  19:05, 24 November 2022 (UTC)

Spicemix (talk) 14:52, 24 November 2022 (UTC)