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The Braunschweig-class battleships were a class of five pre-dreadnoughts of the Imperial German Navy built in the early 1900s. Mounting 28 cm and 17 cm guns, SMS Braunschweig, SMS Elsass, SMS Hessen, SMS Preussen (1903), and SMS Lothringen were rendered obsolescent within two years by the British battleship HMS Dreadnought (1906). The five ships initially served in II Battle Squadron. Lothringen, Hessen and Preussen took part in fleet operations in the first two years of World War I, while Braunschweig and Elsass went to the Baltic with IV Battle Squadron and saw combat in August 1915 in the Battle of the Gulf of Riga. Hessen took part in the Battle of Jutland in May and June 1916. All five of the ships were withdrawn from service starting in 1916. After the war, the five Braunschweigs were among the vessels Germany retained under the Treaty of Versailles; three of them were modernized and served with the fleet into the 1930s.

Just a suggested blurb. I had to discard a lot of good stuff to get it within the limits, and I'm not sure if I made the right choices. - Dank (push to talk) 01:22, 31 July 2019 (UTC)