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Addressed comments from Crisco 1492

 * Prose comments
 * FBI agents Mulder and Scully - Perhaps full names and actors on first use?
 * Done. GRAPPLE   X  00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
 * They travel to Idaho -- Mulder and Scully, to avoid the possibility of DT coming with them.
 * Got it. GRAPPLE   X  00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
 * "they have been here for a long, long time" - Emphasis in original?
 * Arguably yes but I've removed it for tone anyway. GRAPPLE   X  00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
 * "of course" - Is this really needed?
 * Guess not. Gone. GRAPPLE   X  00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Associate Director or Deputy Director? Link goes to DD
 * The position has since been renamed from Felt's time; he was Associate Director but the modern position is Deputy Director. I could use the redirect Associate Director of the Federal Bureau of Investigation to lessen confusion if you feel it's a good idea. GRAPPLE   X  00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Unnecessary.
 * Aurora Project - Link to Aurora (aircraft)?
 * This came up in the GA review; the source doesn't actually identify a specific project beyond "Aurora project" and it was felt at that time to avoid assuming it was that particular aircraft. I assume it is that one, though; I could be persuaded to agree to a link. GRAPPLE   X  00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Well, as Aurora Project has only one US-related topic, and the aircraft resembles the one in the plot... — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:15, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
 * You make a solid case. Added. GRAPPLE   X  01:46, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Not much from me. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:38, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your time reviewing this. I've addressed or replied to your concerns. GRAPPLE   X  00:54, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

Addressed comments and source review from TBrandley
Source review - spotchecks not done
 * Fox Home Entertainment should be 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment
 * Had it piped; removed the piping to display fully
 * "Time, Incf". Typo after inc
 * Artefact from ctrl+Fing earlier, oops.
 * Actually, Time, Inc shouldn't have that comma
 * Fixed both instances to "Time Inc."
 * Ref. 22, 24 are missing its publishers
 * Got them.
 * Ref. 29 should be single quotes ('), not double quotes (")
 * Fixed; missed earlier as I forgot to look for double quotes ending, not just beginning a title. GRAPPLE   X  02:21, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

TBrandley 02:09, 21 August 2012 (UTC)

Other comments


 * Other comments would be very minor, so I just did them myself. Cheers, TBrandley 02:12, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! Fixed up your listed points. GRAPPLE   X  02:21, 21 August 2012 (UTC)
 * No problem. Awesome work! TBrandley 02:23, 21 August 2012 (UTC)