Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Edwin P. Morrow/archive1

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Fifelfoo began, cut and paste to clear main Fifelfoo (talk) 00:29, 23 November 2009 (UTC)
 * From the bibliography and footnotes 1c and 2c look good. I quibble below, and one quibble is more serious.
 * The footnotes could be separated from the bibliography with a title of some kind, consult other Kentucky governor FAs for style examples?
 * Done. I adopted this style for articles where I have explanatory notes as well, since that makes "Notes" or "Footnotes" ambiguous. See Richard Hawes for an example.
 * Publishers with non-obvious publication locations should have their publication locations inserted
 * Done.
 * Year of publication required: Cotterill, R. S.. Dictionary of American Biography Supplements 1-2
 * I've given it my best guess based on WorldCat. I actually accessed the article via an electronic database, but wasn't sure how to cite it that way.
 * I complain about this one everytime fn1: "Kentucky Governor Edwin Porch Morrow", corporately authored works should use the corporate author as the author line. Its non-intuitive that this is a short citation as it lacks an author or a paragraph / section / page reference.
 * Sorry. I haven't touched some of these since they became GA, which was before you started making this comment. You'll be pleased to see that I am doing it in my current and future expansions. See Bert T. Combs for an example.
 * No worries! Its obvious that I'm going to read a lot of 19th and 20th Century Mid-West Governors, and 10th and 11th Century Western European Bishops! :)
 * In your bibliography, the Hay work is a chapter by Hay in a book, right? Can you indicate the chapter by its title?  The bibliographic reference is confusing at the moment "Hay, Melba Porter (2004). Lowell H. Harrison. ed. Kentucky's Governors. "
 * Yes, I've added the chapter name.
 * In relation to 1c I am concerned that this is not a signed Tertiary by an expert: ^ a b c d e f g h i j k l m n o p q r s t u v w x y z Harrison in The Kentucky Encyclopedia, p. 655
 * Added chapter title. It is signed, as are nearly all the articles in The Kentucky Encylopedia. I think the ones that aren't are supposed to be assumed written by John Kleber, the primary editor.
 * Could you please outline Harrison's expertise, cite the article used by title, and assure me that Harrison wrote the article in question over a by-line, rather than just being assigned authorship because its an unsigned author in an edited tertiary? Fifelfoo (talk) 22:16, 18 November 2009 (UTC)
 * Harrison has his own (albeit short) wiki article. If there were a Mount Rushmore of modern Kentucky historians, he'd probably be on it with Thomas D. Clark, James Klotter, and John Kleber. He wrote a bunch of the articles in The Kentucky Encyclopedia. Sadly, last I talked to someone who knew him, he was in poor health.

Hang in there; I'm getting better on including this info the first time. Let me know if there are other issues. Acdixon (talk • contribs • count) 16:10, 19 November 2009 (UTC)
 * Actually... that was it this time! With Tertiaries, especially heavily used ones, I just like to make sure. Fifelfoo (talk) 20:19, 19 November 2009 (UTC)