Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Episode 2 (Twin Peaks)/archive1


 * Crisco 1492 comments
 * "In the episode," - In the episode or this episode?
 * Changed to "this". GRAPPLE   X  03:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "the prior two episodes." - The prior or the previous?
 * They're both the immediately preceding ones so I wasn't aware there was a difference in this case; which would be preferable? GRAPPLE   X  03:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "conflation of violence and sexuality" - Does this really need to be direct quotes?
 * It was five words which I believe is considered the boundary between paraphrasing and copyvio; I've reworded it and removed it from quotes instead. It's now "violent sexuality". GRAPPLE   X  03:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
 * And yeah, Den of Geek needs its reliability established.
 * As before, I'm comfortable removing this material if it proves not to be noteworthy enough. GRAPPLE   X  03:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
 * I've done a minor copyedit, mostly non-breaking spaces. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:58, 5 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks again for helping out. GRAPPLE   X  03:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)