Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Hurricane Fred (2015)/archive1

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Hurricane Fred (2015) was the easternmost Atlantic hurricane ever to form in the tropics, and the first to move through Cape Verde since 1892. The second hurricane of the 2015 Atlantic hurricane season, Fred became a Category 1 hurricane on August 31 as it approached Cape Verde, which was placed under a hurricane warning for the first time ever. The Barlavento Islands endured gales and flooding rains as the eye of the hurricane paralleled their shorelines. Structural damage across Boa Vista and Sal presented as leveled roofs, damaged homes and toppled utility poles. Farmers on São Nicolau suffered crop and livestock losses when they saw their lands flood. Fred's rains, though destructive, alleviated a drought across the Sotavento Islands of Cape Verde. Elsewhere, violent seas along the West African shoreline destroyed fishing villages and submerged homes in Senegal. Between the coasts of West Africa and Cape Verde, nine people died in maritime incidents.

Hylian Auree (and anyone else interested): thoughts and edits are welcome. This is the last batch of blurbs for older FACs for a while. - Dank (push to talk) 22:11, 20 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Okay, this is 1125 characters now ... blurbs are 925–1025 characters. - Dank (push to talk) 01:19, 21 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for this Auree ... I can trim it if you like. - Dank (push to talk) 01:40, 21 December 2019 (UTC)

I gave it go :) Any final edits of yours are always welcome! Auree ★ ★  10:09, 21 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Heh, thanks. Looks great. - Dank (push to talk) 12:40, 21 December 2019 (UTC)