Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Meerkat Manor

ModelCitizenAward08 (talk) 03:34, 24 January 2008 (UTC) I have struck this comment because it was made by an abusive sock puppet account that has been indefinitely blocked. See Requests for checkuser/Case/MoviesOnDemand. Jehochman Talk 16:33, 24 January 2008 (UTC)
 * CANNOT SUPPORT AT THIS STAGE. NEEDS REWORKING FOR AN ENGAGING ARTICLE. While picture-perfect regarding grammar, punctuation, blah blah blah, the article could be improved by moving the second paragraph in the lead to another place. The lead I believe is supposed to draw the reader in, making her want to read further. The second paragraph is a big stumbling block for me. I stopped after a bit and moved right to the body of the article. I would also like to see the massive blocks of text in the body of the article broken up with the pictures, maps, charts, whatever. Visually, the body of the article is a trial on the eyes, and a daunting undertaking for a fan of Meerkat Manor (or anyone else) looking for engaging material about the show. CANNOT SUPPORT AT THIS STAGE. NEEDS REWORKING FOR AN ENGAGING ARTICLE.