Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Pneumothorax/archive1

My task list:
 * Axl's comments:
 * All unanswered points
 * Balance BHD content
 * Replace chest drain image
 * Anon's comments: Introduce the concept of "bilateral pneumothoraces" - requires a secondary source
 * Covered in "prevention"
 * RexxS comments
 * Review introduction based on comments
 * Include diving-related content as suggested on the talkpage
 * Snowmanradio's comments
 * Review the need for references in the intro (leaving this alone)
 * Find sources for a veterinary section, if suitable - awaiting response on this paper
 * A bit more context about flying (currently in the beginning of "Treatment")
 * Find a source for "pyopneumothorax" and "hydropneumothorax" (not found anything on pyopneumothorax, which seems to be more of a concern when discussing empyema)

JFW &#124; T@lk  11:33, 8 January 2012 (UTC)