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The République class consisted of a pair of pre-dreadnought battleships—FRENCH BATTLESHIP République and FRENCH BATTLESHIP Patrie—built for the French Navy in the early 1900s. They were a significant improvement over previous French battleships, with the same four 305 mm guns and eighteen 164 mm guns, but with most of the 164 mm guns mounted in gun turrets rather than in casemates. They also had more effective armored protection. Both ships entered service in January 1907, shortly after the British HMS Dreadnought (1906) made all existing battleships obsolescent. During World War I both ships operated in the Mediterranean. Patrie supported the Gallipoli campaign from May 1915 and République joined her in January 1916. Both ships then became involved in Greece, where they assisted a coup against the neutral but pro-German government that ultimately led to Greece's entry into the war on the side of the Allies. Neither ship saw any further action. République was decommissioned in 1921; Patrie not until 1937.

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Hi and anyone else interested: a draft blurb for this article is above. Thoughts, comments and edits are welcome. Gog the Mild (talk) 22:22, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Looks good to me, apart from a single "the" I removed. Thanks Gog. Parsecboy (talk) 14:37, 10 March 2021 (UTC)