Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Rodrigues rail/archive1

TFA blurb review
The Rodrigues rail (Erythromachus leguati) was a flightless bird endemic to the Mascarene island of Rodrigues, east of Madagascar in the Indian Ocean. The rail was described as having grey plumage, a red beak, red legs, and a naked red patch around the eye. The bird fed on tortoise eggs. It was described as being attracted to red objects, which humans exploited while hunting it. The Rodrigues rail is believed to have become extinct in the mid-18th century because of predation by introduced cats and destruction of its habitat by tortoise hunters. The bird was first documented from life by two contemporaneous accounts; first by François Leguat, a French Huguenot refugee marooned on Rodrigues in 1691, and then by Julien Tafforet, marooned on the island in 1726. Subfossil remains were later discovered and connected with the old accounts in 1874, and the species was named E. leguati in Leguat's honour.

FunkMonk (and anyone else interested): thoughts and edits are welcome. This is the last batch of blurbs for older FACs for a while. - Dank (push to talk) 01:22, 24 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Looks good, a new source came out this year that doubted the claim that bills varied in shape, but I have not yet fully incorporated that source (it's in my backlog). So maybe that part should be taken out? FunkMonk (talk) 03:31, 25 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Done ... 928 characters. - Dank (push to talk) 03:46, 25 December 2019 (UTC)