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The Firebird is a ballet and orchestral concert work by the Russian composer Igor Stravinsky. It was written for the 1910 Paris season of Sergei Diaghilev's Ballets Russes company; the original choreography was by Michel Fokine, who collaborated with Alexandre Benois and others on a scenario based on the Russian fairy tales of the magical Firebird and the blessing and curse it possesses for its owner. Set in the evil immortal Koschei's castle, the ballet follows Prince Ivan, who battles Koschei with the help of the Firebird. It was an immediate success, catapulting Stravinsky to international fame and leading to future Diaghilev-Stravinsky collaborations like Petrushka (1911) and The Rite of Spring (1913). Other choreographers have reinterpreted the music with new productions, settings and themes. Stravinsky's 1919 concert suite remains the most popular today. A film version with the original choreography, featuring what is now The Royal Ballet, was released in 1959.

This is the current version of the blurb, I think. Edits and comments are welcome. - Dank (push to talk) 20:52, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Now 1000 characters, per the comments below. - Dank (push to talk) 16:38, 3 December 2023 (UTC)


 * The line on adaptation: in the lead I changed it to "Other choreographers had staged the work with Fokine's original choreography or created entirely new productions using the music, some with different settings or themes from the original," to specify numerous other versions exist and not too heavily emphasise on the Béjart and Neumeier productions.
 * Done (sort of). - Dank (push to talk)
 * Adaptation is also not the right word here.
 * Went with "reinterpreted".
 * I'm also wondering whether the blurb should specify the film version is by the Sadler's Wells Ballet, now known as the Royal Ballet, one of the most famous ballet companies.
 * Done. We're at 1000 characters now, so you can add up to 25 more characters if you like.
 * And personally I prefer an image of someone dancing rather than a costume sketch. Corachow (talk) 14:52, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
 * Done. - Dank (push to talk) 16:38, 3 December 2023 (UTC)