Wikipedia talk:Featured article review/Sex Pistols/archive2

SG review

 * Coon 1976, p. unknown. Why is page unknown?  There are ways to fix the citation, using loc= ... depending on what the issue is.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  01:53, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Messed up ? Not sure what it is?  Reid, Jamie (June 2004). "The Art of Punk". Archived from the original on 6 December 2008.  Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  01:58, 18 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Bare URL in citation (maybe intending to change to something else) ? https://www.discogs.com/release/2095848-Sex-Pistols-The-Very-Best-Of-Sex-Pistols-And-We-Dont-Care Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  01:55, 18 October 2023 (UTC) ✅ Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  12:27, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Remove ???
 * Southall, Brian (2007). The Sex Pistols: 90 Days at EMI. Omnibus Press. ISBN 978-1-84609-779-9. Harv warning: There is no link pointing to this citation. The anchor is named CITEREFSouthall2007.
 * Eglinton, Mark (30 July 2009). "Bringing Out the Dead: The New York Dolls on Their Highs and Lows". The Quietus. Retrieved 3 August 2010. Harv warning: There is no link pointing to this citation. The anchor is named CITEREFEglinton2009.
 * Klein, H. (1978). "Sex Pistols: Tour Notes". New York Rocker (February). Harv warning: There is no link pointing to this citation. The anchor is named CITEREFKlein1978. Sandy Georgia (Talk)  01:56, 18 October 2023 (UTC) ✅ Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  14:55, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Lead
 * making it the most censored records in British history. ... does this want to be singular, or "one of the" (plural)? Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  02:17, 18 October 2023 (UTC)  ✅ Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  14:55, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Formation
 * occasionally worked at 'Too Fast to Live, Too Young to Die', ... why is it in single quotes here, but not in the para above?  Remove quotes?  ✅ Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  14:55, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Lydon joins
 * Lydon later said that early-seventies Britain was "a very depressing place ... the close quote is missing ... not sure where to put it. ✅
 * An advertisement in Melody Maker for a "Whizz Kid Guitarist ... not older than 20 ... not worse looking than Johnny Thunders." ... not a complete sentence ✅, fixed both, Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  12:33, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

Early following

 * with his green hair, hunched stance and ragged looked ... like a cross between ... it seems like there is a missing word before looked ?
 * Now it's ragged looked ... looked ??? Sandy Georgia (Talk)  12:39, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
 * I'm missing the point of why this sentence is where it is ? How it relates to rest of para ... On their off-night on the 5th, the Pistols attended a Ramones gig at Dingwalls, like virtually everyone else at the center of the early London punk scene.

Other
Sandy Georgia (Talk)  02:58, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
 * their own Pistols-style group, Buzzcocks. As Devoto later put it, "My life changed the moment that I saw the Sex Pistols."[62] They soon played other important venues, ... "They" meaning the Sex Pistols or Buzzcocks?  ✅ Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  12:41, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Is a para break needed there somewhere to make it clear where the influence on the Buzzcocks ends and other gigs start ✅
 * OK to reintroduce here what year we are in ??? released their debut album on 23 April. ✅
 * Sid Vicious replaces Matlock
 * John Robb claims it was at the first Sex Pistols residency gig on 11 May 1976; Matlock is convinced it happened in September. .. it ??? the date when Vicious replaced Matlock? How could they be that far apart ? ✅
 * Who is Cookie? According to Jones, "to Cookie and me, ✅
 * Incomplete sentence: For a view that Vicious was a more competent bass player than his reputation would have it.[134] ✅
 * A&M, Virgin, and Jubilee week
 * A straggler to be fixed? In Oslo, Lydon was photographed making the Nazi salute while wearing a sweater with a swastika.[unreliable source?] ✅
 * pseudonymly -- > pseudonymously ??? Seems off .. it's an acronym?? ✅
 * Break-up
 * Not sure if it's a BrEng thing, but here it's usually called the Northeast .. several dates in the north-east. ✅
 * Post-Lydon
 * Wayward to be fixed ... Now[when?] a resident of Los Angeles, ✅
 * Something is wonky here ... Having played with the band Chiefs of Relief in the late 1980s and with Edwyn Collins in the 1990s,[215] Since the Rich Kids' break-up in 1979, Matlock has played with various bands, including recording and touring with Iggy Pop. ✅
 * Influence
 * A concert with 40 attendants ?? Confused ... not attendees, what is meant by attendants? Many among the audience of the around forty attendants
 * Fixed, I hope: Sandy Georgia  (Talk)  12:38, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
 * is this ready for me to have a new look yet ? Sandy Georgia (Talk)  12:06, 30 October 2023 (UTC)

Featured Article Save Award nominations
Please set up separate sections for each nomination.

FASA nomination Ceoil
I nominate User:Ceoil for a Featured Article Save Award for their efforts during its FAR to retain the featured status of Sex Pistols. Hog Farm Talk 02:30, 27 February 2024 (UTC)

Discussion Ceoil

 * 1) Support as proposer. Hog Farm Talk 02:30, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
 * 2) * Link for the lazy to the FAR. Will review soon. Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 02:40, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
 * 3) Support! Well deserved.   Aza24  (talk)   04:05, 27 February 2024 (UTC)
 * 4) Support agreed Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 05:20, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * 5) Support page is much improved after months of effort and hundreds of edits. Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 14:04, 4 March 2024 (UTC)