Wikipedia talk:Featured article review/Shrine of Remembrance/archive1

Some MOS cleanup completed after the FAR closed. Since the article wasn't reviewed for MoS issues, there may be more. Issues included missing WP:NBSPs; WP:MOSNUM; inconsistency in am, pm, a.m., p.m. and spacing; incorrect punctuation in image captions per WP:MOS; missing conversions (see WP:UNITS); page and date ranges incorrectly separated by emdashes (should be endashes); use of spaced emdashes (see WP:DASH); unspaced am and pm (see WP:MOS); and strange ce issues like World War 1. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 13:36, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
 * No problem - MoS problems are fairly easy to handle now that the big issues are out of the way. I'll get on to it. - Bilby (talk) 14:16, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
 * I suspect I got the most glaring, but I didn't check for WP:OVERLINKing, which might be a possibility. Sandy Georgia  (Talk) 14:19, 23 July 2008 (UTC)

There is also inconsistency in date formatting throughout; the article has to use either November 11 or 11 November consistently, including citations. Sandy Georgia (Talk) 14:22, 23 July 2008 (UTC)


 * No problem. And thanks heaps for going over it. - Bilby (talk) 14:39, 23 July 2008 (UTC)