Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates/List of Washington & Jefferson College alumni/archive1

Images

 * Still needs work. Don't say "photograph of", apparently it's not helpful to be told that... At this point, I'm really unsure of how to write these. May I have some help or more specific guidance?
 * See: ALT and ALT, in particular. BencherliteTalk 07:31, 8 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Lead image has no caption at the moment - Done

Business

 * Clark - spare space after "present" needs to be removed - done
 * Vilar - his article mentions a conviction in Feb 2010 so check for accuracy - done

Arts

 * Foster - should be "19th-century"; - done
 * Foster - "kicked out" is too informal for an encyclopedia ("expelled"?)- done

Athletics

 * Philbin - "present" not "Present" - done

Theology

 * AH Ewing - "namesake" isn't the word; you want something like "Ewing Christian College is named after him"
 * Same thing with Greer - unless of course this is some US English turn of phrase that I'm unfamiliar with as a UK editor? (Same thing in Beaver in the State Governors section)
 * Unless I am mistaken, I think that "namesake" works in those situations...at least in American English.
 * I think we can delink India in the Ewings- done
 * McKinney - missing "of"? - done

Other

 * Delany - inconsistent hyphenation of "African(-)American" (and check this throughout the list)- done
 * No need to link "United States" in Delaney, or in Helfer- done
 * Where in Ref 235 do I find that Delaney was "arguably the first proponent of American black nationalism"? - I added a new ref for that, just to make it explicit
 * Schwartzbach - "high-profile" - done

That's all for now, I think. BencherliteTalk 00:15, 8 March 2010 (UTC)