Wikipedia talk:POTD row/September 4, 2006

Could the image description still be reworded? Currently, the image caption reads:

Cutaway view of a carnivorous Sarracenia (North American pitcher plant) flower with anatomical parts labeled. The flowers have an elaborate design which prevents self-pollination. They are generally located well above the pitcher traps to avoid the trapping of potential pollinators.

This wording makes it sound as though the actual flower is carnivorous, which it obviously is not. I would suggest rewording as follows:

Cutaway view of the flower of a carnivorous Sarracenia (North American pitcher plant) with anatomical parts labeled. The flowers have an elaborate design which prevents self-pollination. They are generally located well above the pitcher traps to avoid the trapping of potential pollinators.

Is this or a similar rewording possible at this stage? --NoahElhardt 23:26, 2 September 2006 (UTC)