Wikipedia talk:Peer review/An Enemy of the People/archive1

Peer Review
Lead section: The lead section is good but you need to cite your sources following the lines;


 * Ghosts had challenged the hypocrisy of Victorian morality and was deemed indecent for its veiled references to syphilis.[citation needed]
 * Upon completion of the play, Ibsen wrote to his publisher in Copenhagen, Denmark : "I am still uncertain as to whether I should call it a comedy or a straight drama. It may [have] many traits of comedy, but it also is based on a serious idea."[citation needed]

Plot overview:
 * Your plot summary is way too long.

Notes:
 * Should your Notes section instead be named References or Works Cited?
 * The ISBN number in your first reference is not clear.
 * References 1 and 2 are the same.

--Brian Kafel (talk) 20:52, 16 April 2014 (UTC)