Wikipedia talk:Peer review/Powderfinger/archive1

"Done" items

 * "...entered the mainstream..." in lead, unclear what constitutes mainstream, one man's indie is another man's middle-the-road trash - i.e., it's is a bit POV. ✅ 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)


 * "Many of Powderfinger's albums reached..." - "Many of Powderfinger's albums have reached..."? ✅ 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)


 * "...which achieved highly..." - yuck. ✅ 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)


 * "...predominantly rock, though ranged from soft, bluesy-rock to hard-rock...." - citation for this or is this your own opinion? ✅ 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Numbers nine or below should be written out. 10 or more as numbers. ✅ 09:37, 31 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Order citations numerically, so [29][25] would be better as [25][29]. ✅ 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)


 * "The group has also topped the Triple J Hottest 100 chart twice with nineteen entries in the list in total." - needs citation. ✅ 23:32, 26 October 2007 (UTC)

Pending

 * "...he decided to dedicate the time towards starting a family..." - citation or this is WP:OR.
 * Still tracking sources. ~  Sebi  07:08, 3 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Poo. I found nothing so far.  Linca, any ideas? &mdash; H 2O  &mdash;  08:31, 3 November 2007 (UTC)