Wikipedia talk:Peer review/Syrian Australians/archive1

I would suggest revising the sentence that reads, "With Syria once part of the Ottoman Empire, Syrian immigration was only differentiated from Turk immigration in the late 1860s.[4]". Clarify: "The area corresponding to what is now Syria formed part of the Ottoman Empire until World War I. Before this time, the term 'Syrian' often referred to people from areas including what are now Syria, Lebanon, Israel, and the Palestinian Territories.  Even after World War I, the term 'Syrian' sometimes referred to people from what is now Lebanon.  The term 'Syrian', referring exclusively to people from what is now Syria and the migrants from this land, only gained specificity following the establishment of the French Mandate of Syria in 1920." You need to cite a general history of the Middle East, such as James Gelvin's book, or William Cleveland's. The phrase "Turk immigration" is misleading -- and raises another issue about the tendency of conflating Ottoman (in the pre-1920 period) with what we would now call Turkish. Avoid the term "Turk migration". CallMeBarcode (talk) 02:15, 5 January 2021 (UTC)