Wikipedia talk:Roll on the floor and laugh

First contribution (actually maybe second or third article created) but who's counting?
This is my first essay to Wikipedia. I would like to expound this essay with other editors. I will attempt not to be its owner.

All critiques will be greatly appreciated. Ronbo76 03:51, 22 February 2007 (UTC)


 * Need to do copyedit on this soon. Essays calm me down. Ronbo76 15:22, 8 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Calming down is a great improvement point. Maybe a gentle suggestion to have a sign that causes an editor to laugh, breathe, take a break, etc should be added. Ronbo76 15:51, 8 March 2007 (UTC)

Initial thought on why this essay was created
I have noted with a couple of other editors that writing or participating in essays has become a very release for them and me. I intend to polish this essay with other Wikipedian editors' help especially in those times when I sense an edit war flaming within me; ergo, following the essay's guidelines. Ronbo76 04:46, 22 February 2007 (UTC)

Improvement

 * Needs improvement and a TO DO list. Will edit later tonight.Ronbo76 04:00, 8 March 2007 (UTC)
 * See also(s) Ronbo76 14:50, 8 March 2007 (UTC)

To do list

 * Develop a Pro and Con section. Ronbo76 04:27, 8 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Ask for comment on Village Pump or possible review. Ronbo76 13:47, 9 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Figure out how to make the number thingie work. Ronbo76 13:53, 8 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Add chart/example of a laugh line that can be the bottom line (a recommendation to editors to have something that calms their edits. Ronbo76 16:04, 8 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Get a great quote from a non-comedian that can be a play on names (Arnold Palmer, Arnie S., Are Wee Amused). Ronbo76 16:25, 8 March 2007 (UTC)


 * Develop similar article/essay. Ronbo76 12:43, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Should be a little more serious but one that does not show weakness. Ronbo76 13:27, 9 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Adopt a conversative tone. Ronbo76 22:01, 9 March 2007 (UTC)

The con position

 * Wonder if anyone noticed I put Tiberius in there?
 * Maybe something dark - Joltin' Joe ?
 * Gotta be a maverick type.
 * Somebody who could clean up Three Mile Island.
 * Doc Strange? Doctor Strangelove? Little Johnie?
 * Twelve o'Clock High

Moved
Since "Wikipedia:ROFL" sounds a bit too much like a shortcut title, I've moved it to "Wikipedia:Roll on the floor and laugh", so it sounds more like an essay title (Like Don't stuff beans up your nose). -- AAA!  ( AAAA ) 03:51, 17 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Works for me. Thanks for the edits. I like working on this essay when the edit demon flares up within me. Soothes me to the soul! Ronbo76 16:11, 18 March 2007 (UTC)