Wikipedia talk:Songs about Wikipedia/March of Wikipedia

This is my first attempt at making one of these. Hope you enjoy. - Champion (talk) (contribs) (Formerly TheChampionMan1234) 23:02, 25 October 2015 (UTC)

Suggested changes to lyrics for WP song
Nice work. Some suggestions (unless otherwise stated, "ETA" means the English lyrics of the Turkish National Anthem as given at that article):


 * Line 1, "donation banner" instead of "puzzle ball", goes more closely to "crimson banner" in the ETA.
 * Line 2, "article", -> "flame war".
 * Line 9, take from ETA "You [not I] have been WP:FREE since the beginning and forever shall be so" (or WP:DONATE)
 * Line 11, "everyday" (humdrum, unexceptional) -> "every day"
 * Line 12, "I'll tear apart mountains, exceed the expanses and still gush out"!
 * Line 19, pipe "soon will come" to WP:NOTFINISHED
 * Line 21, "and think about the nameless editors"... ("shroudless" in ETA, though I suppose this is an antonym)
 * Line 26, cut "it" from "request it"
 * Line 27 & elsewhere, "Janitors" -> "WP:GNOMEs perhaps, though it doesn't scan so well

Si Trew (talk) 06:56, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
 * the notes and piped links on the article on the Turkish anthem should provide a clue. Also, if you didn't notice, I left a verse out because I had trouble "translating" that one. - Champion (talk) (contribs) (Formerly TheChampionMan1234) 22:07, 29 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Also, WP:GNOME doesnt go so well, as I am looking for some metaphorical references, I am happy with the first person pronouns wherever they exist. The anons are not necessarily newbies, there are many who made 1000s of edits. - Champion (talk) (contribs) (Formerly TheChampionMan1234) 22:24, 29 October 2015 (UTC)

Arbitrary break
I have now revised it a little and added the missing stanza, it only needs a little more befor it becomes finalized. Also, I don't think any references to the puzzle ball needs to be changed as we don't have a de jure banner, not even a de facto one, disregarding the illustration I put to illustrate the first line of the final stanza. - Champion (talk) (contribs) (Formerly TheChampionMan1234) 02:51, 30 October 2015 (UTC)
 * OK, they were only suggestions! I have my work cut out with translating Draft:Lumières (from fr:Lumières) and I think it will take me another day or so before I can offer more bad suggestions... perhaps it's just me but I always find it easier to reject a concrete suggestion instead of an abstract one, and being an engineer I neither mind criticising something constructively nor taking criticism myself. (A lot of WPians seem to take any criticism rather too personally, in my opinion.) Si Trew (talk) 02:59, 30 October 2015 (UTC)