Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/February 13, 2024

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as i am aware that one of the fac nominators of this featured article prefers to keep comments out of the blurb itself, i thought it would be more appropriate for me to provide the reasoning for my edits here on the blurb talk page instead. as usual, anyone should feel free to revert any of my changes if they disagree with my reasoning. dying (talk) 01:59, 29 January 2024 (UTC)