Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/January 1, 2011

Can we find a better opening phrase: a recent DYK was criticised at WP:ERRORS for stating that history started on the date of institution of body. It just doesn't sound academic or professional, it is not what was in the proposal for inclusion, it is not in the lead of the FA, and if we believe it to be true, then the rest of the extract is nothing to do with the subject of the article. Kevin McE (talk) 22:07, 30 December 2010 (UTC)