Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/January 10, 2012

Requested Change
Wouldn't it be clearer to say "He then starred as Rusty Ryan in the major international hit Ocean's Eleven (2001) and its sequels, Ocean's Twelve (2004) and Ocean's Thirteen (2007).", instead of "He then starred in the major international hit as Rusty Ryan in Ocean's Eleven (2001) and its sequels, Ocean's Twelve (2004) and Ocean's Thirteen (2007)."? It just seems like it would make more sense to have "He then starred as Rusty Ryan" and "the major international hit Ocean's Eleven" in those positions, rather than separating the two parts by putting "as Rusty Ryan" in the position it is currently in. Alphius (talk) 05:08, 10 January 2012 (UTC)