Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/July 22, 2016

Not sure this needs to be specified—this just means that it was released worldwide, eventually. Those countries represent the different major markets. Alternatively it could be "first released in Japan and later worldwide" or just "eventually released worldwide". czar 17:36, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Great, thanks. - Dank (push to talk) 18:06, 8 July 2016 (UTC)

The most common term is 2.5D, not with ½. I would change "with pre-rendered 3D backgrounds behind 2D gameplay", as the gameplay is more important. My suggestion: "The game is presented in 2.5D, with 2D gameplay featuring pre-rendered 3D backgrounds". soetermans. ↑↑↓↓←→←→ B A TALK 07:46, 12 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Another option is "2D gameplay atop pre-rendered 3D backgrounds". The ½ was to make 2.5D less jargony (½ being the way it's pronounced)., thoughts? czar  08:19, 12 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Sounds good. Thanks for dropping by, Soetermans. - Dank (push to talk) 11:09, 12 July 2016 (UTC)


 * , "as she journeys" → "in her journey"? Eh? czar  23:40, 21 July 2016 (UTC)