Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/June 17, 2023

restructuring
, i am admittedly not sure about this, but i think would require an extra instance of "was" before "sent to a prison camp" because, now that the sentence has been restructured as a three-element list, the auxiliary verb "was", being part of the second element, is associated only with the phrase "expelled from the party". personally, i think the wording from before worked better, as it separated action from reaction, but the sentence can also work as a three-element list. dying (talk) 23:08, 10 June 2023 (UTC)


 * I see what you mean, I'll revert it to the 'before' version. —Ganesha811 (talk) 23:17, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
 * thanks, Ganesha811. dying (talk) 01:21, 11 June 2023 (UTC)