Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/May 1, 2023

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and, it was admittedly rather difficult for me to get this blurb down to the character limit, so i took some liberties with my rewording that i normally wouldn't have. hopefully, i was successful with keeping all of the details that you two wanted, though i apologize if i made anything worse. please feel free to revert anything you disagree with. dying (talk) 21:59, 22 April 2023 (UTC)


 * Thanks so much, @Dying. Your edits look great to me. You've managed to retain all the key details — O'Sullivan's record-equalling 30th appearance and seventh world title, a new record for oldest world champion, the most Crucible centuries, the 12th Crucible maximum, and the longest Crucible frame — while keeping the blurb remarkably compact. Great job. HurricaneHiggins (talk) 10:26, 24 April 2023 (UTC)