Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/September 22, 2007

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"The Bald Eagle is a large bird, with a body length of 71–96 centimeters (28–38 in), with a wingspan of 168–244 centimeters (66–88 in), and a weight of 3–6.3 kilograms (6.6–14 lb); females are about 25 percent larger than males."

Please omit the second "with". The sentence should instead read "The Bald Eagle is a large bird, with a body length of 71–96 centimeters (28–38 in), a wingspan of 168–244 centimeters (66–88 in), and a weight of 3–6.3 kilograms (6.6–14 lb); females are about 25 percent larger than males."

Also, I'm uneasy about the first comma, but it could go either way. The second "with" is right out, though.

Cheers, &#10154; Hi DrNick ! 05:48, 22 September 2007 (UTC)
 * fixed. Raul654 05:52, 22 September 2007 (UTC)