Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/September 7, 2022

Nuclear explosion
Hi, Gog! Thanks for the blurb. I was wondering whether it would be possible to revise it a bit. More specifically, I think, that the blurb is missing the "nuclear explosion" part and the zoom to the girl's eye, which is an important part of the advertisement (and maybe the reason for its popularity). I have a draft prepared here, although it may need some copy-editing. Can you please take a look. Over to you. In either case, I respect your judgement! Thanks! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:43, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
 * You're free to edit it, as is anyone else up until the day before. Note that blurb length shouldn't exceed 1025 characters and right now we are at 1004. Your draft seems to be at 997.--Wehwalt (talk) 17:47, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Yep. Feel free to replace the whole thing with your draft. That would be fine by me. Gog the Mild (talk) 18:28, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Not all, but made some changes. Thanks! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 18:41, 14 August 2022 (UTC)

copyedit
as i am aware that this featured article's fac nominator prefers to keep comments out of the blurb itself, i thought it would be more appropriate for me to provide the reasoning for my edits here on the blurb talk page instead. as usual, anyone should feel free to revert any of my changes if they disagree with my reasoning. dying (talk) 23:59, 29 August 2022 (UTC) [copyedited. dying (talk) 00:07, 30 August 2022 (UTC)]
 * Thanks! I appreciate it a lot! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 14:09, 31 August 2022 (UTC)