Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Military history/Academy/Opportunities for new military history articles

XVII Tranche Project Audit

 * I wish to change the tone of this article, in the introduction para and in some parts of the article, it looks like a personal essay or column rather than a guide. I wish to change phrases like "My experiences", "I think" etc. into generalized tone; comments please. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 07:23, 9 January 2018 (UTC)
 * G'day, Krishna, yes I think that would be a good idea. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 00:45, 10 January 2018 (UTC)
 * reviewed --Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 13:55, 23 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Checked: AustralianRupert (talk) 05:21, 17 February 2018 (UTC)