Wikipedia talk:Wiki Ed/Lake Forest College/Protest and Police in US History (Fall 2017)

Comparison of the Lager Beer Riot and Astor Place Riot Articles.
Rudibatzell (talk) 23:45, 19 September 2017 (UTC)

The Astor Place article, in sharp contrast to the Lager Beer Riot article, is well developed--it includes critical sections to understand the riot and its aftermath such as "genesis," "proximate causes," and "consequences." However, the APR article relies, much too heavily, on a single source that is complimented by few other sources. The LBR article makes speculative claims as well as ones that, if true, require citation. Goldsteinmj (talk) 00:47, 20 September 2017 (UTC) Plan for development of the Lager Beer Riot Article (areas to develop, sources to to use)Rudibatzell (talk) 23:45, 19 September 2017 (UTC)

Lager Beer Riot -page should include more subtopics to address additional aspects of the riot (cultural tension, politics & police, consequences, etc.) -decent introduction, provides general overview of the riot -additional and varied sources

Astor: Lacks event/context box; "Manhattan, New York City" should just be New York; "Police Force with deadly deadly weapons" in the intro sounds awkward; "Theatregoers" (background) is two words; 6 total sources, though many more are listed; 6 photos; also, I don't now what the purpose of the popular culture section is. Haassr (talk) 00:49, 20 September 2017 (UTC)

Lager: 8 sources; no photos; leaves out important details regarding the relevance to the development of the Chicago Police Department, why the Germans and Irish were immigrating to Chicago, and the events preceding the riot; moreover, the intro says that there is no evidence to support that there was any deaths of rioters, but I believe that this is disputed. Haassr (talk) 00:49, 20 September 2017 (UTC)

Astor Place Riot -solid subheadings with details -additional and varied sources needed -more focus on general writing (sentence structure, diction, etc.) Bankstonad (talk) 00:44, 20 September 2017 (UTC)

Astor Place Riot // Lager Beer Riot-Jennifer Cerer

Astor Place Riot: -medium level development -before LBR -at least there's multiple sections -there's also a photo...

Lager Beer Riot: -basically no development at all -tells less than a basic summary -one paragraph sooo...??? -even the box has barely any info Jennifer.cerer (talk) 00:46, 20 September 2017 (UTC)

Lager Beer Riot: Too long, introduction could be made into new section No pictures No info on introduction of CPD

Astor Place Riot: Limited Citations No sidebox Nicoleelkins (talk) 04:53, 21 September 2017 (UTC)

Editing Assignments
Matt - consequences, Mitrani 33, Law and Order cause

Asimwe - background, Mitrani - Census

Ryan - background - reasons for migration to Chicago - religious conflict - Gilje amd Mitrani

Nicole - stream line intro - formation of the police dept - Mitrani

Jenn - narration of riot itself, moved from intro - Tribune

Topics for Individual Wiki Article
Once you've identified a subject (or several possible subjects) for your own Wikipedia article, write it down here. This is to avoid two of you launching out on researching the same topic for contributing an original article:Rudibatzell (talk) 20:48, 26 September 2017 (UTC)

Ayana B.  "white terror" and black education (Torture and lynching of black teacher in Belleville, Illinois 1903)

Jenn C. 

Nicole E. 

Matt G.  the lynching of Samuel J. Bush by a mob on 3 June 1893 in Decatur, Illinois

Ryan H. 

Kalay K. 

'''Asimwe O-N. '''

Miles S.

Indigo S. Blackburn Riots of Detroit 1833