Talk:1904 Tour de France/GA1

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Reviewer: Gary King (talk) 17:59, 22 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Reorganize the lead better. First paragraph is one sentence, second paragraph is huge, then third paragraph is one sentence again.

Tried to improve the lead, hope it is satisfactory... =) Feel free to make a copyedit, as I'm not a native speaker. lil2mas (talk) 23:22, 26 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Per WP:EGG, improve the links to 1903 Tour de France, etc.; link "1903 Tour de France" or something to make it more clear that it's linking to the Tour de France article and not 1903.

Done lil2mas (talk) 18:38, 22 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

"References" section goes before "Further reading" per WP:LAYOUT

Done lil2mas (talk) 18:38, 22 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

That's all for now. Gary King (talk) 17:59, 22 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Any updates to the article's lead? I will be unavailable after Thursday, so if you need more time than that, then I can remove myself from this article and just let another reviewer pick it up. It shouldn't take long since there's the backlog drive running right now. Gary King (talk) 18:15, 26 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

All comments should now be addressed... =) lil2mas (talk) 23:22, 26 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Okay looks better, passing Gary King (talk) 00:21, 27 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]