Talk:1987 World Championships in Athletics – Women's marathon

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:1987 World Championships in Athletics – Women's marathon/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 06:07, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 06:07, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Background[edit]

  • "Ingrid Kristiansen, who was the world record holder, having run the 1985 London Marathon in 2:21:06, opted to run the 10,000 metres instead." - what was the reason for the change?
  • No specific reason is given in the source. Harrias talk 07:27, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "a couple of weeks before the race" - how many weeks exactly and where did she break her foot?

Summary[edit]

  • "The race started at 16:55 local time" - The Times source says it was 15:55 local time
  • The Times says that it was 15:55 BST, which would equate to 16:55 CEST in Rome. Harrias talk 07:30, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Mota took the lead before the race left the stadium, and extended it as the race progressed." - repetition of the word "race"
  • Changed the first instance to "marathon". Harrias talk 07:30, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • The second wikilinks for Grete Waitz and the 1983 marathon are not needed
  • "Martin, who was expected to the most likely to challenge Mota" - a word is missing from the text indiciated in bold

Will put on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the six points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 07:18, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Thanks for the review, I have responded to each comment above. Harrias talk 07:30, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]