Talk:1999 National League Wild Card tie-breaker game/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 20:49, 1 June 2010 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
- Is it well written?
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
In the lead, you might want to say where the Astros are from. I mean, I know they're from Houston, but how 'bout your non-baseball reader. Also, you need to have a consistency, since you mention the Arizona Diamondbacks and Atlanta Braves by city and team name.- Good call, fixed.
- Of course, I'm a baseball fan. ;)
- Good call, fixed.
- B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
Throughout the article, please link "Gerry Davis", "Michael Tucker", and "Mark Lewis" to their correspondence articles, as at the moment they stand out as disambiguations. In the lead, "The game took place on October 4, 1999 between" ---> "The game took place on October 4, 1999, between", commas after dates, if using MDY. In the Background section, per here, "August 1st" ---> "August 1", "September 30th" ---> "September 30". In the Aftermath, "...with the decisive game of the NLCS scoring the highest ratings for any LCS broadcast since 1993", I'm assuming that "LCS" is "League Championship Series", and if so, this needs to be noted.- All done. Staxringold talkcontribs 21:08, 1 June 2010 (UTC)
- Check.
- All done. Staxringold talkcontribs 21:08, 1 June 2010 (UTC)
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
In Reference 28, "Sports Illustrated" should be in the "work" format of the source, since it's a magazine publication.- All done. Staxringold talkcontribs 21:08, 1 June 2010 (UTC)
- Check.
- All done. Staxringold talkcontribs 21:08, 1 June 2010 (UTC)
- B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
- C. It contains no original research:
- D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- Is it neutral?
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- Is it stable?
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- If the statements above can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article!
- Pass or Fail:
